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posted by TakTheFox
~Tip number one
When I make an rp, I usually make it long ou medium so that it doesn’t look like a random/boring/quick idea, and to get rpers (along with other reasons), but sadly that comes with a problem.
A lot of times, if I make an rp (or other people I know do) It’ll say something like
“*SHRUBBERY HUNTER*”
“Your character hears a scream from a marshmellow. They ask the marshmellow what is wrong, and he says “MY SHRUBBERY IS GONE!” Do toi help him find the shrubbery?”
So what one would expect is a
“No”
“Yes”
“Pie”
“TALKING MARSHMELLOW”
“NII!”
ou SOMETHING that has to do with what just happened.
But instead, some people go “Character: *walking in the woods*” ou “Character: What’s wrong?” Why do they do this? Because they don’t read the whole thing. A lot of the time they say “I only read the important stuff” ou “I just read the title” ou “I wasn’t paying attention”. This messes up the rp, and makes it very confusing.
PLEASE PEOPLE! PLEAAAAAAAAASE read the whole thing. Sometimes I’ll be rping fifteen commentaires into an rp and STILL be trying to tell them “THAT’S NOT WHAT IS GOING ON! WE’RE IN A FOREST NOT AN EGGSHELL!!”

~Tip number two
IMAGINATION!
Now in my opinion it’s the responsibility of the person who MAKES the rp to come up with most of the action scenes and dialog detail, but with both that person and the person they are rping with, toi should ALWAYS use your imagination in an rp.
Examples of what NOT to use
1.    *attacks* Attacks? Attacks how? There could be an enemy that is water proof, and toi have ice, so if toi just go *attacks* it doesn’t accomplish anything. Also it makes it hard for the person to reply with something to counter ou continue with that attack. If that just kept going it would end like
*attacks*
*attacks back*
*attacks back harder*
*attacks and wins*
Which leads to gary-stu rping.
2.    *…* Now someone else mentioned the infamous triple-dot-threat, but I’ll just refresh. DO NOT DO THIS! Unless it is COMPLETELY impossible for toi to make a move, like being knocked out ou something, DO NOT USE THIS.
Example
Character1: We should eat pie.
Character2: …
There are three things this can imply (and maybe more)
1.    ) Your character dislikes pie.
2.    )You’re not paying attention to the rp.
3.    )You’re being lazy.
Unless you’re doing number one, toi don’t really have a good reason to do that. “…” Leads to REALLY boring rps, and then people don’t like rping with you.
4.    BE DETAILED!
Being detailed makes things REALLY fun for both people. Now that doesn’t mean *shoots your character in the head, then kicks them, then eats pie, then flies off* That is gary-stu rp. What I mean is to do stuff like *Takes out gun and tries to shoot at your character* then wait… then when it’s your turn *kicks your character on the side of their leg* then wait your turn *eats pie* wait *tries to fly off*. NOTICE “TRY”. Try implies that toi are NOT a gary-stu. toi don’t have to say this all the time, but toi should do this when fighting ou stressed areas appear. When toi simply say “*Shoots then kicks then eats pie and flies off*” it implies that toi can do whatever toi want, and we don’t want that.

~Tip number three
USE WEAK CHARACTERS OFTEN
I’ve actually found that using characters that aren’t very strong, ou have no powers, to be plus fun than powerful characters. Now this doesn’t mean BORING characters, just characters that aren’t all “I AM ALLPOWERFUL FOOL!”.

~Tip number three (part two)
Let your characters get whatever-ed. That includes
1.    Controlled
2.    Hurt
3.    Slapped
4.    Hugged
5.    Flattered
6.    Tackled
7.    Shot
8.    SHRUBBERIES FORCED DOWN THEIR THROATS!
Especially with rps that involve hypnosis, controlling, ou flirting, rps get REALLY fun. And toi CAN have your character NOT do these things if it goes against their powers, ou if it annoys toi to do it too much, but it IS fun, and it makes rps really funny a lot of the time.

Hope these helped.

NOW GO RP!

EAT PIE AND PROPSER!

OWLS X{D
{its a fanfic based on the weather it must b terrible}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-7 DONT READ THIS

The soldiers were coming over the path and WE WERE STANDING THERE LIKE STATUES!!! whisper had tears in her eyes. i was holding on to dare, and misery was standing extemely close to tuesday which i found quite odd but also not that much after seeing them hug earler. flana and coral were balling their eyes out. truth looked plus scared that ever...or just her eyes did. arc tried to stay strong but ended up crying on dahsers shoulder. we were in trouble and we knew it. but rane seemed so calm, like...
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{dont waste your electricity bill on this stuff it sucks}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-6 DONT READ THIS

when i woke up from miserys chaos over load, we were on haut, retour au début of the mountain. everyone else was unconsious but me. but on the edge of the cliff stood a strange hedgehog with green fur. she turned around and a dit "hiya" i lay there in the gravel dirt of the mountain staring at this green hedgehog i never saw bfor. "u stare at me like im forign beast. no i no beast. im Windy the hedgehog. u persons seemed in trouble cuz men in shiney Suits – Avocats sur Mesure were coming into yer cave and u all were sleeping from...
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{read it already? well read it again and l’amour it forever like some old Disney movie}
IF U HAVNT READ CHAPTER 1 ou 2 DONT READ THIS

when we got to the garoa mountain and got too where the shooting étoile, star landed, there was just an unconsous cat there. misery, hyper and curious as usual, went up and touched the girl. "OW WAT THE HELL" misery screamed. she had burnt her hand some how and then it started to rain. tuesday, confused, a dit "wat the hell just a girl? u mean that this girl was the étoile, star that fell from the sky? arc r u sure this is where the étoile, star landed?"
arc replied "tues have i ever been...
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posted by crystalstream
 That is Crystal all grown up :3
That is Crystal all grown up :3
A thousand years ago, the Ancient Walkers, while examining the night sky, found several prophecies that told of Heroes rising up above all oppression and bringing it down with all force, after its tyranny made its rule upon Mobius. Before departing to proclaim these foretelling, the Ancient Walkers found at least, one plus prophecy written in the stars above. The stars showed a reflective shade of bright crimson, and the tidings were not well. This prophecy foretold of the coming of the Black Arms and their leader, Black Doom. After they had made their mark and place in the universe, the Son...
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Read the first three chapters before anything!
--------------------------------------------------"So... your Irken too?" Mef asked. "Yes, this is my Mobian disguise." Zim replied. "Did I mention that we're gonna be good friends?" Mef lied. "No." Zim said. She took the hand that was holding the axe, clenched the axe, and put her fist on his shoulder. She got closer and closer until SWING! and miss... but barely. "What was that for?" Zim asked. "Are toi trying to eat me, too?!" He said. Mef said, "Errr... I WILL MAKE A RETURN!" And ran away. "Then they heard a familiar voice. "Hey! It's toi two...
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posted by beepboop
 Rex
Rex
(Rex had just woken up)
Rex:(yawns)Im so tired...
Kix:REX!
Rex:What is it Kix?
Kix:This morning I heard a loud noise coming from the forest!
Rex:Lets go but we need help.Let's go get Shade,Stephanie,and Rihanna
Kix:Okay!
(Rex and Kix run to the houses)
Rex:Shade!
Shade:What's up Rex?
Rex:Kix a dit she heard a loud noise come from the forest this morning.
Shade:Okay let's go!
(Rex and Shade go to the forest)
Kix:STEPHANIE!
Stephanie:What is it Kix?You know I dont like to be up in the morning.
Kix:I heard a loud noise come from the forest.
Stephanie:Let's go get Rihanna and then go to the forest!
Kix:Okay!
(Kix...
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posted by rath01
Well i guess its time to tell toi a story but not any old story but a story about the founding of a team called well toi will find out now lets begin on the the planet called shil-2 there was a great war and all the people that showed any promise of becoming a great warrior was killed and the man who started this war was called DR.neg X but there was a small hand full of warriors that stood a chance but they were defeated but before they died they put together there powers and divisé, split them into 7 powerfull orbs 3 of them turned into children its been 15 years since then and now our story takes...
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Before I get started This is about Krov and Rima, this actually happened yesterday night while me and Seuris were role playing, it was hilarious and epic~ Forgive me if I forget some part of the fight we role played Seuris
Credit: The mafian Krov belongs to me and the awesome Rima belongs to Seuris! Oh yeah Kazuki will be mentioned in here aswell, Enjoy!
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"Geez I really want to write about something!" Rima's owner, Seuris, complained as she jumped up and down thinking of an idea, Krov smiled brightly and stood par her, a creepy aura stated emerging...
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posted by thetacoman
This one's kinda, laugh at the chaos and death, y'know? NOT FOR THE EASILY SCARED *coughmomcough*
***
The happy Friends roamed the streets painting the town red. ou crimsion, if toi wanna be specific.
Estelle gave a child a plaything Seth had hidden a bomb in, and they ran off to avoid the loss of their kidneys.
Five minutes later, BAM! Little girl blood covered them.
They continued on their rampage, slowly losing their grip on reality.
"Hey," a dit Seth as they strolled across a flaming alley munching on squeedley-spooches. "Lets have a contest! Whoever can make the most funny kill, wins!"
Estelle...
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posted by thetacoman
Im following Soda's lead in écriture awful stories that make toi all die a little inside =)
***
I was a surge of white fur, leaping across the roofs, searching for people in need of mercy.
All the wails of the homeless and poor rang out to me, as though hearing a young cub cry for help.
But they were not my priority tonight.
I heard a awful song from one house, and was reminded of the song I sung every time my father beat me.
I slipped through the chimmeny, unfased par the open flame I passed through.
The child lay wailing on the bed. The song just got louder as I approached.
"Just wait, dear," I whispered,...
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    “Aah, the sweet smell of blood…” Estelle a dit serenely as she dipped a paintbrush into a bowl of thick, red liquid, painting it on a buisson, bush of white roses.
    “…Uhh, Is that blood that you’re painting with?!” Myka asked, eyes widened.
    “No duh, what else?” Estelle replied back in a serious tone, finishing up the last rose. She smelled them all. “Delicious blood. Smells so divine, tastes so rich and succulent…” She a dit calmly. Myka gagged, then choked, then coughed. Estelle turned to face her.
    “If...
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posted by sierradawn9
Not good enough to die with them,
 Not good enough for death,
 Better to be tortured my dear,
 And Father knows best,
 
 You think I'm dastardly,
 That I've committed a crime,
 I won't stop until I see toi breathe,
 For the final time,

 I may have killed them all,
 All the ones toi love,
 But just remember toi might see them,
 When toi go above,

 He's not here to save you,
 Your precious crush,
 When he hears your screaming,
 He won't be quick to rush,

 Goodbye my dear,
 A very fond farewell,
 You might go to heaven,
 Yet toi might go to hell...

 Mauri Higashi to Satsujin Higashi
 
I know, I know. =_= This is not the chapter planned to be released--but hey, I wanted to do something different. Also, this story had a contradiction to it, so I had to make up that the professor DID NOT create Myka, and he knew her family. He always thought he did, though.
--
The professor was looking through some files, until he stumbled upon one called 'Myka-story.png'. He had a questioned look and opened the file.

"Huh," he said, confused. "I thought I created Myka. I was probably mistaken."

As he read the story, he gained plus memories of what actually happened:

"When she was born, her parents...
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Haze went flying across the area,but caught himself,Rei whacked him quickly with his tail,Mother came from behind and slashed him,leaving several marks on Rei's back,Rei turned aroud quickly and kicked her away. Nocturn punched Rei over and over,but no effect.

Rei grabbed Nocturn par the face,and throws him away. Shockwave punched Rei in the back,making a SHOCKWAVE,sending them both flying. Soundwave clapped his hands together hard,making a SOUNDWAVE,and making Rei fall to the ground,but got back up and growled.

Rei smashed the ground,sending an EARTHQUAKE at SOUNDWAVE AND SHOCKWAVE. (:D) Which...
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Mef. Just the name makes me smile- ou grimance, depending on what mood I'm in.

I saw that article Dib wrote about you, and heck, I decided to keep this trend rollin'!

No doubt about it, you're hysterical. toi can always make me laugh when I need it. toi can turn my job into the most comedic thing in the world- Sporking the little shits eyes out is not at all a bad idea, 'cept I might get fired.

You have this way of looking at things in a horribly morbid way, but somehow making it a comedy. You're an inspiration for many people- Me included. I've even quoted some of the stuff you've a dit to...
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posted by Sunnythewolf09
to mephilesthedark

i red that ur jealous of seuris art MDR sorry i use to think that u were the greatest
and i was the worsest (sorry spellings bad! ^^;)

for 5 years ive been praticing (i think ive sayd that a million times)

ive got other ways of drawing to but i rather not montrer them

i l’amour ur art it was kinda funny of how i met you

i got so jealous that i supprimer toi (if any of toi notice that)

i went on here about a an back ou mouths il y a before i even joined here on fanpop

i was thinking if i should rejoindre but decide not to cuz i was afaid of what mite happen like 3 grade people use to make fun...
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I sat down on the leather sofa as Commander Victor plumped into his plush chair behind his desk. “So, what did toi want to see me for, sir?” I asked. The commander lit a cigar and puffed out a ring of smoke. He sat watching it until it hit the ceiling and dissolved into thin air. “Sergeant Forge, I’ve just received special top-secret information from Command.” My mind started racing. Command? The same Command that had a facility covering the entire surface area of a whole planet? “What did it say?” I asked, trying to hide the anxiety in my voice. He opened a drawer in his desk...
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"Haze... Wake up... Haze...." a dit a voice.

Haze woke up,only to be found that he was in the middle of an abandoned playground,fog everywhere,almost like a maze.

"W-Where am I?" He asked himself.

"Welcome to hell Haze,YOUR hell." a dit the voice.

Suddenly students from his past started to surround them,he could only see their white eyes,glaring at him,and chanting,"Play with us Haze,Play with us.... Forever...."

Haze began to back up into a monkey bar,and turned around,a deformed little girl stood in front of Haze,and it appeared that her skin was melting off her.

"Play....." She said.

Haze jumped...
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“WHAT ARE YOU!? INSANE!?” renard screamed, her quills blowing out behind her as if she was on some insane rollercoaster.

But this was no rollercoaster.

“No. Not really.” Scarecrow replied, frowning as he stared down the coastal road. A sheet drop to their left- Stretching downwards in a 300-foot fall, the vicious waves slamming with no mercy into the cliff face.

Behind- Penetrators, a hybrid of attack plane and attack chopper. Sleek and mean, they used the best of each. Armed with missiles and an all-array of firearms, they were not something to be messed with.

Neither was the Scarecrow....
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Typhoon Saga Power Levels:

Regular Typhoon: 100

Damayz Possessed Typhoon: 100,000

Mother: 11,123

Shane: 13,000

Shadow: 22,000

Alyosius: 12,004

Book 2: 11,000

Haze (Typhoon Saga: 55,000

Dahlaz: 80,000

Android Typhoon: 75,126

Rouge: 1,000

Damayz (Typhoon Saga): 300,000

Damayz Possessed Dahlaz: 600,000

Haze the Hedgehog Saga Power Levels (So Far):

Haze: 90,000

Nocturn: 100,000

Shockwave: 30,000

Mother: 25,000

Soundwave: 24,000

Hydra: 98,000

Damayz (Haze Saga): 1,000,000

Nightmare: 5,000,000

Xiz: 900,812

Xiz (Full Power): 2,000,000

Typhoon (Haze Saga): 892,412

Typhoon (All Out): 999,999

Typhoon (Weakened): 200,000

Xiz (Weakened): 300,000

Dezray: 666,000

EVEZ: 890,789

Rei: 1,000,000

And that's all,for now anyways.

And yush Power Levels are HUGE Reference to DBZ,But someones gotta know how strong they are. XD