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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one ou the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power ou skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, ou also has feu powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a aléatoire villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” ou “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for toi *blasts kidnapped character* I hated toi anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain ou hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills toi with energy beam* ou *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* ou *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! toi do that, and people are going to hate toi so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already a dit it killed you. toi can’t say it made toi stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless toi are close enough to go *drills couteau into stomach* then toi can’t just say *throws couteau into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, ou even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver ou Shadow ou Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” ou “Sonia”.
F.    I personally l’amour to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, ou hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful aléatoire girl. I know what toi might say. “But toi a dit that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And toi could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking par people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, toi can make their eyes sparkle, toi can make their hair shine, toi can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush ou not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what toi use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something toi might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL toi SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then toi can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, ou die in l’espace to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some aléatoire song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve a dit it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE anges TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN Angel CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my liste of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think toi can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
posted by snootygirl50701
Under My World -chapter 1
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Gracie stirred an inch. Her eyes flew open and she turned to a grey building. The view was blurry as her eyes recovered. She crawled up and grabbed at the building. She frowned when she remembered were she was and all. Her vision cleared like pure water. She balanced herself and searched for a door. She felt around the walls. She glanced around to see no one. She slipped threw the mur like a ghost. She turned invisable and found a whole room of computers. She grabbed a rolling chair and hacked into...
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posted by ShadowChaos
"You're just gonna kill me, aren't you, Shadow?" Twilight asked me. "Oh my god, toi don't listen! I a dit I wasn't going to hurt you!" I snapped. I looked around for Sonic to help me with Twilight, but he had left not to long ago. "That's just great." I whispered to myself. Twilight was standing there like a arbre stump as I looked around for Sonic. Then I realized that he has the same thing on his hands that Silver has. "Um, Twilight, toi wouldn't happen to know if toi have siblings, do you?" Twilight looked at me as if I've gone crazy. "Siblings? I don't even know who I am!" I thought for a...
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In heaven~
God:It is time,for our new anges to rise and to save our world and make peace between us Gods and Devils,We have found 6 new angels.*Bright ligt Flash to the ground*
Moonlight House~
Moonlight:Argh,Im so going to get Silver for this.*heres a something towards her* Whos there*Turns around* Theres no one?!*Gets zap par the bright light out of nowhere*AAhhhhhh....
Eilly's House~
Eilly:*picking up flowers* Hhmm so beauiful,huh*sees a bright light*Whats that?Oh no*Gets zap par the bright light*Aaahhhh....
Kenyes House~
Kenyes:*drinking soda and listening to his own music*nnyaaa yyyeaaaaa!!!Hm??*Bright...
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THEY STOOD WAITING for the train. They were at an opening far into the wood.
Spike bent over to dig out something golden. He found it was a power ring, but it felt different.
It had a different aura.
Spike slipped it into his pocket.
"We're just gonna JUMP on a moving train?!" yelled out Windy, unaware that she was trembeling like an aspen leaf.
Storm looked at her.
"Do toi wanna take antoher chance of flying?"
Windy froze. Then she found herself inching twoard Spike almost in a gesture of protection.
In the distance a train whistle cried. This made Kitty a bit plus alert.
The train sped by. They all...
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posted by Ex-Smeralda
A man with red manteau jumped in the midday sky, smirking at the one below him,
"Missed" he said, coming down and did a roundhouse kick at the other, crashing his heal in his face, the other figure fell onto the ground as it yelled in pain. The man with the elegant red manteau landed softly against the rock patterned ground, a sly grin forming on his lips,
"Tired yet?" he asked at the other, which the other returned par a growl,
"They were right to name toi the arrogant pirate..." the creature snarled, the pirate before him sighed,
"Pirate I understand but arrogant? How rude! Just call me Micheal would...
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"When are we going to start Gant?" Slick asked eager to start.
"When Madam Yogi gives the go, when she does is when the guards go away to make way for the general Joseph Heat and his precious cargo; Yuki the angelbat," Gant answered without pause.
"The one we're gonna rescue, the one that is tortured and used for her electrical powers," Dash continued for Gant.
"Why can't we just go before they get inside?" Slick questioned Gant and Dash.
"If we go when that happens all the guards will be on us! We're suppose to stay sûr, sans danger and keep our identities hidden," Rioul answered agressively although calm.
"Shh...we need to listen for the signal..." Dash a dit concerned.
"What was the signal again?" Slick asked.
"I a dit shh!" Dash quickly said. A seconde later they all hear a beep...Beep beep beep, beep...
"Now!" exclaimed Gant.
They all started running towards their positions, ready to start...
posted by ShadowChaos
"W-where am I?" asked Twilight as he got out of bed. "How did I get here? And, who am I?" When he got down stairs he realized he was alone. He heard voices outside and decided to go and see who they were. When he got outside, a young, green renard came up to him. "Twilight c'mon man. toi have to see this." he said. "I-I can't. I don't know who toi are. Heck, I don't even know who I am." "Oh, I get it," a dit a rather mean looking echidna. "He's playing a prank on us guys!" Then everyone that claimed they were Twilights' friends, started laughing, except the green fox. "I don't think he's playing...
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posted by Akiko_the_Cagon
Ok, did this when I had time and semi-skill to figure out what Luna would do. Um, this might not be my best work, so...sorry xwx'
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Pain: She'll do her best to hide it, if anyone asks if she's ok, she'll try to persuade them everythings allright and no need to worry

Misery/Sadness: She easily masks sadness over, but this gives her pain in her brain, most likely in this state to get scared

Scared: Depending on a day, if she's weak and the enemy has higher grounds than her, find somewhere to hide ou cling to. If she has the higher ground, do what her...
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Chapter Ten: Visions
Location: Umbrage Ave, secret base, Triff City
Date: Wednesday, December 13th, 4337
Time: 5:31 P.M.

Lizzy turned to see where she was. When she turned to her left, she saw seven figures. Each of them were aligned, like a hallway, and in the middle was the two figures *she saw in her dream. *Chapter three*

“Chells, I know this place! Chells?” Lizzy turned to where Chells was standing, but he wasn’t there. “Chells!! Where are you?!” Lizzy looked around the area, but couldn’t see the blind renard anywhere. She eventually gave up, and began walking towards the figures....
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Chapter seven: The chase
Location: OutdoorMall3 Lexistropolis west downtown sector 4
Date: Saturday, December 10th 4337
Time: 3:24 P.M.

Running after Lizzy’s direction, Tess and Zen raced and raced, until they had caught up with Siera, who was a short distance from Lizzy, before she ran off.

“Did toi see where they went?!” Tess yelled over to Siera, as the two chameleons approached the tamia girl.
“Not too far off.” Siera replied, catching her breath. “Your new friend followed the runaway out to the left side of the *Cocsate.” *A general store, similar to Wal-Mart*
“And toi didn’t...
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 Andrew.
Andrew.
That night, I came up with the perfect plan for getting Madjin. I got up and flew to the church.
A few hours later I took 5 buckets of holy water back to the tree. I got in a hole and poured the holy water in the hole.
After a half heure of screaming "AHHH!! IT BURNS!! IT'S HORRIBLE!" And uncontrollable laughter, I finally got out.
"Alright, I'll leave!!" I shouted.
I felt dizzy for a second, and got up. A saw a black mist in the form of a skull slowly float away.

I flew out of the tree, looking for food. I was very hungry. I saw an pomme tree, so I flew down to it. When I landed I saw a big ripe...
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Memorandum: Re: St. Christoph's Square
To: Achio Noch
From: Gallancy Torren Oceanius

>But why not?
>
>Well......
>Diabo? He'd kill me for not being Nimean.
>Arty? She'd probably just throw paint at me.
>Nate would send bees at me.
>Tydus would hold me for ransom.
>Estill is the personality of a *SPOILERS FOR ANYONE lire DOES NOT COMPUTE*
>Do toi REALLY expect me to SURVIVE? Even in Taetoro?
>
>..... Maybe not for LOOONG....
>
>Exactly.
>
>So, you're NOT coming?
>
> *facepalm*
"My sister, the one that left me and my mom is with them?" Jisseca said."Yes."Said a gray dog."Looks like I need to kill everybody that's close to her!"Jisseca said."That ou toi can help me?"He said."Help toi with what?"Jisseca said."I will tell toi but first, my name is Steve."Steve said."Will hello Steve, now tell me what ou how can I help you?"Jisseca said. "Will toi help me break some one I know out of jail, then I will help you."Steve said."Ok I will help you."Jisseca said. "Then let's get my friend out of jail."Steve a dit with a grin.
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posted by ripperoo1
Bio
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Drexel was born November 21, 1995. His mother was named Rosalina and his father was named Delfino. On the ride home, Drexel had a big, toothless, smile on his face.

A few days later, Drexel opened his eyes for the first time. For the first 12 hours, he was stuck cross-eyed. Suddenly, Drexel's eyes were uncrossed, due to the fact that he tasted a horrible food. He closed his eyes and spit it out.

When he was about 1 an old, he flicked the neighborhood bully off, not even knowing what it meant. That got him some spanking. XD

His first toy was...
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"Emily don't get scared."Shane said."Shut up Shane like that will work!"The grey cat said."Penny trust me!" Shane said."Penny? Penny is her name? Yes!""How can I Shane!"Penny said."Because it works alot!"Shane said."Emily please help your friends! Tell us the truth, were is Jisseca!"Shane a dit in the most sweet voice."What are toi talking about!?"Emily a dit who is now scared."Don't play stupid Emily! Now tell us ou else!" Penny said."Wtf are toi talking about!?"Emily said."Penny, Shane stop your work is done for now."a blue hedehog a dit in the sweetis voice."AJ? Sonic? No AJ's voice is soft...
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I ran at full speed, not stopping to take a breath. A man with a mask on and a hooded veste shot at me with his gun, chasing me. What did he want? And I forgot, my name is Drexel the Bat. I am a species of vampire bats, but toi probably don't care. I jumped up in the air and spread out my wings. I flew up into the air in hopes that He would stop shooting. Instead, he started shooting faster. I flew down towards him and pushed him over. He dropped his gun and I picked it up. He got back to his feet and I shot at him. He ran away. I shrugged and put the gun in my veste pocket. I walked away....
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"This is were I found the blanket Emily." AJ a dit to Emily. "Ok thank toi AJ."Emily a dit to AJ only to find out that she was gone."She left me! But why?" Emily was mad now, she then heard something."Foot steps, must be Jisseca!""EMILY HELP!" Jisseca a dit yelling out.""It is Jisseca! I need to save her!" Emily almost yelled out, but did it some thing was blocking her mouth."Shhh.... Don't make a sound." Some one a dit in a whisper voice. Then she was sleeping, but thinking:"Who was it? Was it AJ? No. Was it Sonic? No but it was some thing blue! Sonic, AJ who else? Star, no she's yellow. But who...
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posted by TenanahBluefern
Shane walked through the front door of his apartment, mail in his hands, and shut the door with his foot. Tenanah was just lounging on the canapé and noticed something in Shane's mail. As he walked into the kitchen, Tenanah followed. Shane sat at the table, tableau and looked through the mail. He found a purple slip of folded paper and frowned.
 "What the--"
 "Shane? May I see that?" Tenanah interrupted. As Shane was handing it to her, it spontaneously combusted and they both flinched. It landed on the table, tableau and branded an insignia onto it. Tenanah stared at it with fascination. Shane however, was not...
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2 HOURS LATER... Chris eventually had fallen asleep. Chris had sort of cried himself to sleep, but he wasn't aware. He didn't know what sleeping ou crying was, so he was kinda even plus panicked cause wet stuff was coming out of his eyes. He woke up, remembering that he was stuck underground. He was still frowning. It was now nighttime. There was a crack in the ground, and he could see moonlight shining in. He sighed, then layed down and put his hands behind his back he was still frowning. MEANWHILE, ABOVE GROUND... The creature that Robotnik made had gotten out of the lab. He was no longer...
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posted by MephilesTheDark
Hello, I am talking to you! Yeah. I bet toi didn't know that.

So, a lot of people message me with 'Can toi draw-?'

So this is a detailed thingee of what I will draw for toi people.

Why am I doing this? Because I care about toi of course! Heh... Yeah, I care. I reeeeally care.

A lot of my status's say 'Friends only' to requests and shit. And then everyone swarms at me with requests because apparently, you're all my friends.

LOL NO. STOP TALKING TO ME AS IF I'M YOUR BEST FRIEND AND GTFO.

My Friends are as follows;

thetacoman
IAmZim
DanniWolf09
seuris
ripperoo1
ShadowFan100
Dib_
SierraDawn9
PhoenixRoyale
Johnny_C...
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