soon as they heard those words both elise and rath scrambled to break the tank when they did they helped the hedgehog out of the tank on to a near par chair " what were toi doing in that tank " elise asked the hedgehog " I don't know all I now is my name is kalus and that's it a dit kalus with a confused look on his face " ok I believe toi " a dit elise." now the real question can toi fight" a dit rath." I think so" a dit grief still trying to remember something." oh no DR. neg has released 7 war bots out into the city" yelled elise from her computer." good time to get payback on those things for making me look weak" a dit rath as he walking out of kalus chamber." wait can I come with you" asked kalus." as long as toi can pull your own weight" a dit rath." wait toi two cant leave till toi have the weapons to take down those bots" a dit elise as she was opening a door here rath these are the D gloves they give toi the power to control dark chaos that should be plus than enough for those bots now I'm still not sure about toi going out to fight but here this is the Die scythe its boost your speed and reflexes to godly levels ok now your ready to go take this tunnel it will take toi to central neg city got it ok" a dit elise." ok lets hurry and get there" a dit rath as they ran through the tunnel.. when they arrived at neg city it was pure chaos
The bots were on rampage through the whole city not even a tank could even scratch the bots
"Dang this place is a mess" a dit rath coming from the tunnel." shhhh lets do what we came here to do" a dit kalus." I guess your right" a dit rath. "Hey dumb big clunkers come and get me" yelled rath all the bots turned around and locked sights on rath . "This is it" rath a dit turning around to talk to kalus but kalus was gone "looks like he was a coward" whispered rath .right at that moment at a blink of an eye 3 bots were destroyed and in pieces and in front of the ruble was kalus with the Die scythe in his hand." looks like he can fight" a dit rath then rath charged at 4 bots and a dit "leave these to me and with almost the same speed as kalus crushed the bots." well I guess its time to leave" a dit rath. Back at the base elise showed kalus and rath the news and it a dit that they rose up and resisted against the bots "we do good as a team I say we become one"said rath."i have nothing else to turn to so sure" a dit kalus." well I never really been part of a team before but I'll try" a dit elise." good our mission bring down neg and all of his bots our name will be team resist but we have one rule never spare a bot…the end of this chapter for a story
The bots were on rampage through the whole city not even a tank could even scratch the bots
"Dang this place is a mess" a dit rath coming from the tunnel." shhhh lets do what we came here to do" a dit kalus." I guess your right" a dit rath. "Hey dumb big clunkers come and get me" yelled rath all the bots turned around and locked sights on rath . "This is it" rath a dit turning around to talk to kalus but kalus was gone "looks like he was a coward" whispered rath .right at that moment at a blink of an eye 3 bots were destroyed and in pieces and in front of the ruble was kalus with the Die scythe in his hand." looks like he can fight" a dit rath then rath charged at 4 bots and a dit "leave these to me and with almost the same speed as kalus crushed the bots." well I guess its time to leave" a dit rath. Back at the base elise showed kalus and rath the news and it a dit that they rose up and resisted against the bots "we do good as a team I say we become one"said rath."i have nothing else to turn to so sure" a dit kalus." well I never really been part of a team before but I'll try" a dit elise." good our mission bring down neg and all of his bots our name will be team resist but we have one rule never spare a bot…the end of this chapter for a story
WHOA WE'RE GETTING META OVER HERE
Okay so here's the thing, I've seen a lot of video rants, regular rants, mur rants, image rants all about the same thing
Sonic fan Character designs
CAN WE PLEASE LEAVE THE SUBJECT /ALONE/ NOW?
We get it
Rounded, well written character - Good.
Recolour - bad
Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu - bad [whilst one could argue for years over the definition of a mary-sue since, in reality, it is simply the reader's perception of a good ou bad character]
We get it. It's all just the same regurgitated shit from the last article
and the article before that
and the article before THAT.
Personally, I believe, if it's an idea you've come up with, go do the thing and have fun.
After all this is meant to be fun, right?
Go on, have a laugh ou something.
Be creative! ovo
But not in the
don't hug me I'm scared way
that's the wrong way to be creative.
Okay so here's the thing, I've seen a lot of video rants, regular rants, mur rants, image rants all about the same thing
Sonic fan Character designs
CAN WE PLEASE LEAVE THE SUBJECT /ALONE/ NOW?
We get it
Rounded, well written character - Good.
Recolour - bad
Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu - bad [whilst one could argue for years over the definition of a mary-sue since, in reality, it is simply the reader's perception of a good ou bad character]
We get it. It's all just the same regurgitated shit from the last article
and the article before that
and the article before THAT.
Personally, I believe, if it's an idea you've come up with, go do the thing and have fun.
After all this is meant to be fun, right?
Go on, have a laugh ou something.
Be creative! ovo
But not in the
don't hug me I'm scared way
that's the wrong way to be creative.
Head
First start out with the mouth and the eyes nothing special then add the hair his hair style is a metal sonic and from the back of his head 2 green wavy lines go around his head and stop 3 centimeters away from each other and from the eyes.His pupils are army green and the wavy lines are also green but his color is Goldenrod.
Body
His chest marking is a Superman shape but no S and spikes curving up from the sides.Draw the arms and the legs in his right hand put a pistol ou some kind of gun(Optional)And his shoe design is at the front of it is his chest symbol.When toi have read this(Once ou more)enter my contest in the réponses section and I will judge and vote when the contest ends.Contest will end March 20 and please post your entrie on
First start out with the mouth and the eyes nothing special then add the hair his hair style is a metal sonic and from the back of his head 2 green wavy lines go around his head and stop 3 centimeters away from each other and from the eyes.His pupils are army green and the wavy lines are also green but his color is Goldenrod.
Body
His chest marking is a Superman shape but no S and spikes curving up from the sides.Draw the arms and the legs in his right hand put a pistol ou some kind of gun(Optional)And his shoe design is at the front of it is his chest symbol.When toi have read this(Once ou more)enter my contest in the réponses section and I will judge and vote when the contest ends.Contest will end March 20 and please post your entrie on
