Who Makes The Best Renesmee?

CHAPTER 12: intruder.

"Well, well well, what do we have here," a tall man with brown hair hair spoke.

"State your buiness and leave," Carlisle a dit harshly.

"Well as toi might already know," he a dit looking at alice," I came for the girl."

"well toi may as well leave cause your not getting her," jacob growled and the rest of the oack sudenly appered in the doorway. He walked towards me and touched my arm. Everyone growled and jacob brought me closer.

"dont touch her," Jacob hissed and i could feel him starting to shake.

"I was just touching my future daughter," he smirked.

"She's not going anywhere,"...

I walked outside.It was breezy with sprinkles of rain.I saw nothing only a bag and a écureuil and was gonna turn away but saw a vampire suivant to me.I froze,I never fought another vampire before."Well,it is never to late to try,"a blond haired boy said,with ripped jeans and no shirt.It was obvious to see his six-pack.The vampire suivant to me smelled funny.I letted out a deep,low,and menacing sound.Where did that come from?I never growled before only when James was around.James,the name that pierced my soul.It gave me a boost of courage.I ran towards the vampire suivant to me to find it was a girl!!She...

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Math class
Renesmee's POV

Miss Smith our math teacher is very stupid,she uses a calculator for ever thing,My dad just says 'not every one is as smart as you',Me and Riley text all hour.At my table, tableau I sit with Gabe,the étoile, star football player who is very smart,has really beautiful eyes and has ever girl drool over him.Well Ricky has lots of girls flirt with him and it bugs me.

My phone vibrated,which Means I got a new Text-
She is so freakin stupid,no wonder she has no husband-Riley
I giggle,Gabe...

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Chapter 3
Bella POV
-"No time left"


-When I look back now over my life and call to mind what I might have had simply for taking and did not take, my cœur, coeur is like to break.-

My body theoretically had La Reine des Neiges for a longer time than it actually looked.
Reneesme would and will never rejoindre them...
She couldn't be part of the strict,harsh royal family.
I instantly...

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Chapter 2
Reneesme POV
'Bad Moments'

-The doors we open and close each jour decide the lives we live.-


It was them...
All over, surrounding all the forest..again,but something was different on the look of all of the Volturi members.
They looked...tired,I'd never seen them this way before.A shiny light was behind them,I wondered what it was.
It looked as if it was their background...
It looked...

CHAPTER 2: Paul

I ran over to Alice.

"What happened!" I exclaimed.

"They weren't taken, they were hypmatized," she a dit blankly.
I stood there in shock. How could this have happened? How could they ou it get par my moms shield? Then I fainted.

"Renesmee, Renesmee!" I heard Jacob panic before I went unconscious. When I woke up I fell off the bed. Where am I? I thought and what am i wearing? I was wearing a very big tshirt with a picture with a loup on it. OMG! Im wearing jacobs chemise and im at Jacobs house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I imediletly got out of a lit that wasn't mine and stomped down stairs....