poésie Please review!!! :D I will become your fan and l’amour toi forever even if toi can it totally!!!

otter888 posted on Jun 19, 2010 at 12:24AM
ok here is it it is called: A Glint In The Eye (incase you don't read the title!)
THIS IS AN ORIGINAL BY ME SO NO COPYING!!!

Enjoy!


A Glint In The Eye

A glint in the eye, the puff of a breath, the beat of a heart, legs without rest.
A tooth of a dagger, the claw of a sword, the fur of long grass, the tail of a jackrabbit’s ear.
Determination, power, hunger, speed.
A sound, a smell, a tiny movement.
The taste of blood rushes into the brain, the hunt, the skill, the precision.
Memories, ideas, thoughts.
One movement, one chance.
One may live, one may die.
A glint in the eye, the loudening breath, the fast beating heart, legs may now rest.
The time is over, the memories fade, but, they will return another day.



Get it??? please review and if you want me to tell you what it is about, just ask!!!!
last edited on Jun 19, 2010 at 12:31AM

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il y a plus d’un an irena83 said…
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I love it,very well written,love your style.
il y a plus d’un an otter888 said…
why thank you :)
il y a plus d’un an NicoleNorman said…
I like your writing style, easy to obtain.
il y a plus d’un an wolfgirl985 said…
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i like it
il y a plus d’un an forksandspoons said…
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ome i <3 it its soo amazing, i crave more!
il y a plus d’un an ichigo_155 said…
cool
i guess its cool
il y a plus d’un an manjusang said…
umm,,,,scared me but its lovely
il y a plus d’un an BooRocks69 said…
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wow thats awsum! its so thoroughly detailed.