Is It BAd?????????

écriture itself should have some purpose. toi open your soul par putting all these feelings on the paper ou toi release some bad, dark thoughts.
The deepest feelings inside your heart, written with passion, l’amour and depth as well will make poésie blazing.

poésie is meant to flow as the cœur, coeur beats, toi cannot follow a drum if toi do not beat one yourself. poésie has a soul, it thrives only if toi thrive.

well poésie doesnt have to necesssarily have a concrete écriture style. u seem like u write in a stream of conciousness, which is good. some of the best thoughts come out that way. the people that tell u that u arent really poet becuse u dont have deeper meaning are wrong. poems can be straightforward as well as abstract. u can try to write with deeper meaning but i say just stick to the way u feel most comfortable.