My Little Poney Article: Under Pressure Part 20 Finale

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posted by karinabrony

All of the ponies gasped and shouted as Black rose's Friends were all floating, including her. Her eyes were wide open and were glowing with a bright white light.

Starshine: Oh my gosh!
Beachberry: What happened?!
étoile, star Shimmer: This is impossible!!!
Black Rose: *smiles* Friendship is the best thing in life. There are six things that make it just the perfect relationship.
Coffee Creme: Generosity, giving is a kind thing to do.
Shredder: Loyalty, never leave your Friends hanging around.
Nikki: Honesty, telling the truth is a nice thing to do.
Nocturnal Mirage: Kindness, being nice to one another is always a good thing.
Silver Tune: Laughter, always be there for your Friends when they need some cheering up.
Black Rose: If the whole world came to peace, and we were all friends, it would be a better place. Friendship is important. Friends will help toi throughout your life, at least I learned that. With out my Friends today, I wouldn't have been here. Thank you, all.

At the last word, étoile, star Shimmer, Beachberry, and Starshine tried running away. The six Friends all hugged and their necklaces had a light connecting together. A arc en ciel beam came out and hit the three ponies. The whole crowd gasped.

Black Rose: *walks over to étoile, star Shimmer* *holds hoof and helps her up* Will toi promise me to be a good friend?
étoile, star Shimmer: *breaks into tears and hugs Black Rose* Yes, yes I will! Thank you!
Black Rose: *smiles* It's all okay.
Silver Tune: *running with her four friends* BLACK ROSE! DID toi SEE WHAT HAPPENED?!
Black Rose: Yes! It's the necklaces.... *looks at it*

Black Rose's mom and dad came over to her.

Dad: We have a surprise for you...
Mom: *goes up from behind and shows Black Rose her new baby sister* Welcome Petal to be your new baby sister.
Black Rose: *gasps* Mom...Dad... *cries tears of joy* She is beautiful.... *hugs baby sister*
Petal: *looks up to Black Rose with shiny eyes and smiles*
Black Rose: *hugs Petal*

After that, the whole crowd clapped with joy. The four princesses were about to announce the winner.

Celestia: The winner for this is...
Twilight: Black Rose and her 5 friends!
Crowd: *cheers*
Silver Tune: *smiles* We did it.
Black Rose: *hugs Silver Tune*

The six ponies went up to the stage, all smiling.

Luna: *gets out a shiny or trophy with a cœur, coeur on the top* We now honor this trophy to Black Rose and her six friends.
Twilight: They have experienced a great bond between them.
Cadence: The friendship they have is unbreakable.
Celestia: We present to you, our winners, Black Rose, Silver Tune, Shredder, Coffee Creme, Nikki, and Nocturnal Mirage!
Crowd: *cheers*

There was a ceremony after the big speeches, and étoile, star Shimmer and her Friends were walking up to Black Rose and Silver Tune.

étoile, star Shimmer: I am so sorry for being to toi like that! It looked like toi had the most perfect life, compared to mine! I'm so sorry!
*cries silently*
Silver Tune: Don't cry, étoile, star Shimmer. No one has a perfect life. Everybody has a story behind their life. Don;t worry, it's all okay now....
Black Rose: Yes, no one does. *smiles*
étoile, star Shimmer: Thank toi both!

Black Rose was sitting at the end of her room shared with Silver Tune, staring out into the sky. Silver Tune sat suivant to her and hugged her tight. They both smiled at how life can be so beautiful....

tailsfan111, alinah_09 and 1 other like this

_Laugh_ Awww! This fanfiction was so beautiful! Thank you so much for using Silver Tune in your articles. ^_^

karinabrony Aw, thank you! ♥♡ It was a pleasure.

Seanthehedgehog Yay, Star Shimmer is no longer a bully.

karinabrony Yes. <3

NocturnalMirage This was such an amazing story, enjoyed every word of it! Haha, I was the Element of Kindness, didn't see that one coming! Anyways, thanks for including my OC in your fanfic. I hope you'll continue writing such meaningful stories as this one!

karinabrony Thank you!

JimmytheDragon I'm not crying, I swear! My eye is just... gah, that ending was beautiful!

karinabrony Aaw, thanks so much!

alinah_09 so..touching... ;, ) beautiful! *claps*

karinabrony Thank you! : )

_Laugh_ I sure do hope you continue making fanfics. They are so beautiful and amazing!

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The last solstice - Chapter 5: Those purple eyes

posted by NocturnalMirage

The last solstice

Chapter 5: Those purple eyes

Nocturnal Mirage is startled from his sleep par a sharp clashing sound.

“What?!” the dark blue stallion sits up in his lit rapidly.

He looks around in the large room. It takes him a few secondes to realize where he is. Oh, that’s right… you’re here again… he acknowledges. There’s an opened book on his belly. He fell asleep lire it.

The sound of breaking glass brings him back to reality completely. Mirage shakes his head and puts the book aside. He hears it again. Glass clashing against marble.

“Gosh darn it! The third night in a row!”...

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The last solstice - Chapter 3: Solitude

posted by NocturnalMirage

The last solstice

Chapter 3: Solitude

Luna was right.

I was right too! Mirage thinks.

The Moon goddess a dit that her sister will probably greet her new guard in the form of a letter. And Mirage suspected that the alicorn of the Sun was listening. The cobalt stallion smirked. He imagined the picture. The all mighty Celestia, the ruler of Equestria nestles up to the door very closely. Probably with an anxious look on her face, for she worries because her calm loneliness is disturbed.

“Ha!” Mirage exclaims loudly, as the picture he imagined fills up his soul with luscious pleasure for a moment....

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Nightmare Moonraker part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Con & Twilight were in the prison cells on the ship, but they still had a radio.

Twilight: Man, can anypony hear me?
S: Is that toi Twilight? Where's Mane?
Con: Right here S. Listen, we need toi to call in reinforcements from M.I.3.
S: Is that neccesary? Where are toi two?
Russian pony87: *hears radio*
Twilight: Man just do it!
Russian pony87: Who are toi talking to?
Twilight: Con man. Nopony else I can talk to.
Russian pony87: Well uh, keep it quiet.
Con: Sure *breaks jail door*
Russian pony74: HEY!
Twilight: *shoots enemy*
Con: *takes pistol*
NMM: Sir? Con & Twilight have escaped.
Drake: Then...

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Nightmare Moonraker part 4

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The two spies went on until they reached the l’espace ships.

Twilight: Man we found the spaceships.
Con: Hey, look over there.
Twilight: They have a map of the cities they're attacking.
Con: San Fran, Tokyo, and Hong Kong.
Twilight: Man if we're to stop those rockets from hitting them cities we have to get on the ship. I have a plan. *teleports them onto ship*
Con: Perfect. We just need to get in disguise now.
Twilight: Right *gets disguise*
Con: *stares at Twilight's ass*
Twilight: May I help you?
Con: toi already are *gets in disguise*
Twilight: *gets in disguise* We need to kill everypony in this...

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The New Era... PART 9

posted by SomeoneButNoone

Steven

1 an later... Vinyl has been killed and... Dan too... soo... yea...
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ACT |||
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Era End Coming...

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FireDash - I gonna buy bannananana... what?
NightFire - CAN toi SHUT UP!
TearDrop - brother... toi gonna buy jus, jus de for me
NightFire - of course
FireDash - banana... banana... banananana
NightFire - uhhh...
Mare - HELP HELP!
FireDash - huh?
Mare - Undead UNDEAD!
GoldenHorn - HAHAHA IM ALAIVE
NightFire - 0_0
FireDash - bananana wait... OH MY GOD!
NightFire - Hide Behaind Me TearDrop!
GEA Soldier - GO GO GO!!!! *shoot*
GoldenHorn - *teleport*
GEA Soldier...

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MLP Mafias Are Dangerous episode 2 part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Twilight, and Pinkie Pie returned to the Ponyville safehouse.

Dan: Where have toi two been?
Twilight: Man I just took over some businesses, with help from Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie Pie: She knows what to do now.
Dan: Excellent. The Las Pegasus mob says that they will try to attack our safehouse. We gotta prevent them from doing that.
Twilight: No problem.

The Las Pegasus mob soon arrived.

Sean: They're here!!
Twilight: *grabs grease gun* Let's do this.
L.P. ponies: Dan, have your mafia surrender!
Dan: Howabout toi screw yourselves?
L.P. ponies: Wrong answer! *fire pistolets at Dan*
Dan: Wrong déplacer *grabs molotov*...

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MLP Mafias Are Dangerous episode 2 part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

cidre fort, applejack & Rarity went on to rob the bank.

Rarity: *grabs gun*
Applejack: Not yet! Ya have to wait until you're inside the bank!
Rarity: How about this? *makes gun disappear*
Applejack: Now ya have no gun.
Rarity: Oh yes I do, but it's invisible.
Applejack: Alright, let's just rob this bank.
guard: Hello ladies.
Rarity: *shoots guard*
Applejack: *kills other guards*
Rarity: I'm gonna open that vault. *magically opens vault*
Applejack: What are ya'll staring at? A southern poney working with someone british?
normal pony: Uuhhh
Applejack: *kills normal pony*
Rarity: Got the money let's go!
Applejack:...

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The Mare With The Golden Gun part 8

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Con & Hattan were taking 20 paces, and then it happened.

Con: *fires gun* Where did Hattan go?
Sneak Peak: She forgot ammo for her gun. You'll have to continue the duel with her that way.
Con: Why didn't toi tell me?
Sneak Peak: toi were concentrating very well, and I didn't wanna disturb that.
Con: toi know, I've never killed a midget before. But there's a first time for everything.
Sneak Peak: I'm offended.
Con: Good. *walks inside*
Sneak Peak: *runs to control room*
Con: *looks around* What kind of a place is this?
Sneak Peak: It's a funhouse. Me & Ms. Scaramanga worked on it together!...

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The Mare With The Golden Gun part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The Golden gun

The first Con Mane story to have OC's that aren't mine. Let's begin on a tropical island 8 miles from Hong Kong.

Hattan: *sunbathing* Sneak Peak, can toi check the main entrance?
S.P: Right away Ms. Scaramanga.
business pony: Are toi Hattan Scaramanga?
Sneak Peak: No, I'm her assisstant.
business pony: Where is she?
Sneak Peak: Go in that way.
business pony: *enters room* Hattan Scaramanga.
Hattan: Hi. I just realised toi have your gun, and I don't have mine.
business pony: That's too bad. *shoots gun*
Hattan: *dodges bullet*
S.P: *turns off lights*
business pony: Where are you? montrer yourself!
Hattan:...

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MLP Mafias Are dangerous episode 1 part 8

posted by Seanthehedgehog

After returning from St. Foalis we discovered that arc en ciel Dash was no where to be seen.

Sean: Where'd she go?
Pinkie Pie: She went to be with Scootaloo.

The two pegasi were at Cloudsdale celebrating for Scootaloo. She just passed flight school, and the two were having lunch together.

Scootaloo: Everypony thought I was amazing.
Rainbow Dash: They sure did. What kind of pizza do toi want?
Scootaloo: One with sausage, and onions.
Rainbow Dash: Good choices. And to drink?
Scootaloo: I guess I'll have a Dr. Whoover.

Rainbow Dash went to order the pizza, and drinks when she noticed a alicorn fly by....

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The truth about Chrysalis' life: PART 4

posted by soomin1208

At school, in lunch, Cadence sitting alone....

Cadence: *thinking* Maybe...I'm wrong..maybe she is nice... M-
Celestia: salut Cadence: *sits* Ready for P.E.?
Cadence: I sure am!
Luna: Me too!!! Me too!!!
Discord: hurry up mares! We're gonna be late for P.E.! (Flies to gym)

At last, when the class arrived to the gym....

Coach: Okay class, today, we are playing....DODGEBALL!!!!!!!
All: *sigh*
Coach: Okay, Discord, Chrysalis, and Shining Armor, your a team. Cadence, Celestia, Luna, and Sombra, your the other. Let the dodgeball game...BEGIN!

Celestia: *throws ball at Discord, but misses*
Discord: *throws ball...

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MLP mafias are dangerous episode 1 part 4

posted by Seanthehedgehog

cidre fort, applejack & Rarity hid the gun in the bathroom, and talked to Dan on the phone.

Rarity: They should be there in a minute.
Dan: I see a continental, is that them?
Applejack: If it's got Nickel Lesscage then that's the one.
Dan: He's not in there, but his crappy sidekick is.
Applejack: Alright, well kill him.
Dan: With pleasure, but I gotta go now.
Manehattan pony23: Dan, so good to see you.
Dan: Yes, but where's Nickel?
Manehattan pony23: Unfortunately he couldn't make it, so he sent his seconde highest ranked poney to be here.
2nd pony: That's me.
Dan: I see. Let's grab some dinner.
Manehattan...

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Pinkie's Treasure Hunt part 6

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Twilight helped Derpy & Octavia escape, then they were making their way off the boat.

Twilight: toi two wait here. We need Pinkie since she has the map.
Octavia: Oh perfect. toi better get her quickly.
Twilight: Pinkie? Come here.
Pinkie Pie: *hops toward Twilight* Guten Tag Twilight. *laughs*
Twilight: Stop speaking german, and come with me.
Pinkie Pie: Nein, ich bin Deutsch, damit ich sie sprechen kann, wenn ich will.
Twilight: What? *kidnaps Pinkie* Row!
Octavia: Can't toi use magic to teleport us?
Twilight: I can, but I'm not teleporting toi guys.
Derpy: Aaawww.
Tourist poney 4: *drives...

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The Problem in Sweet pomme Acres: Part 3

posted by soomin1208

cidre fort, applejack past the rest of the jour with her friends. And Applebloom past the whole jour with Scootaloo and Sweetie Bell. It was getting dark. A tear rolled down her face as she a dit goodbye to her friends, so did AB. AJ and AB went back accueil to pack.

AJ: Ya'll ready Big Macintosh?
BM: Eeyup.
AJ: And ya'll AB?
AB: Eeyup...
Granny smith: We're all ready.
AJ: .....guess...its time to go...
All: *nods*

They all went to the train station tierd. Finally, when they were all in their seats, Applebloom started to cry a bit. Her sister hugged her tightly.

AB: Ah dont wanna leave...
AJ: Ah dont wanna leave either....But...

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the new series MLP WIF

posted by fefe2002

My little poney what is friendship is a series like my little poney friendship is magic its about a poney named bubble gum and she has so many Friends and she always party's so she wanted to learn something new that she never bothered to learn it was friendship.Also if she knew how to deal with Friends she still likes to learn plus about friendship.However she likes to give plus happiness to her Friends than she has ever done.

and that's my new series so if toi want plus information just post on my mur the questions toi want to ask me :)

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An Unexpected l’amour

posted by mariofan14

It was a glorious jour in the town of Ponyville. Everyone started to get up and go do their errands, even Princess Twilight Sparkle, who didn't leave her friends. She went to visit some ponies to greet them, chat, and then go to her friends. All the colts and fillies were too getting up, but it was for school. Why don't we go to the house of the family of Diamond Tiara, shall we? Even though her family was rich, their house seemed quaint and small. But it looked a little like a mansion on the inside. (Filler: Do not be fooled par common place appearances. It isn't what's on the outside, but what...

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Pinkie's Duel part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Pinkie was sleeping until she heard a horn. She thought it was the trucker, but it was a train passing par her.

Pinkie Pie: *laughs* Thank goodness.

She watched the train, and when it passed she drove off. Then she saw the big rig.

Pinkie Pie: Oh boy.
Trucker: *reving big rig*
Pinkie Pie: *drives toward trucker*
Trucker: *blocks road*
Pinkie Pie: *stops*

Pinkie then went in reverse off the road. She got out of her car, and stopped two ponies driving on the road

Pony 1: What is it ma'am?
Pinkie Pie: The poney in that big rig is trying to kill me. I need your help!
Pony 2: This mare is crazy.
Pony 1:...

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Pepperella (A Cinderella-like story)

posted by mariofan14

(There will be OC ponies in this story. There's Cotton Swirls par MLPFiMFan765, Nikki West par applejackrocks, Peppermint par DisneyFan333, Score Heights par Quillabex, Sugar nuage par misscrazel, and Cakey Cake par yours truly. I hope toi all enjoy this.)

It was a great jour in Trottingham, where everyone was going about doing their business as most other ponies would. But for these ponies, it would be different. toi see, the cake making alicorn, Cakey Cake, has invited some Friends over for a cake project that would be shown at a cake montrer against many other bakers, including Mr. and Mrs. Cake. She...

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Shadow Ponies part 5 -_-_-Final Fight-_-_-

posted by SomeoneButNoone

Everyone has stop movieng from scare
King of Shadow Ponies - Dan...
Alicorn - Me?
King of Shadow Ponies - Yes Dan toi stupid like always hahaha... wait... what the fuck toi do there
Dan - I here to defend toi from destroying...
Twilight - Equestia
Dan - ... Equestria
King of Shadow Ponies - ummm... shit....
Dan - what little brother do I scare you
King of Shadow Ponies - no... toi just... uh how to say... my family
Dan - WHEN toi KILL ALL OF OUR FAMILY IT NOT STOP YOU!!!!
King of Shadow Ponies - oh damn it he remember
Dan - I know now all... mom ... dad... sister and little brother... AND YOU!
King of Shadow...

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The Inglourious Hedgehog In Ponyville part 6

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The fight for Canterlot is getting intense. Griffons are outnumbering us, but we won't go down without a fight.

Sean: cidre fort, applejack watch our six. *shoots machine gun at griffons*
Applejack: They're all over the place!
Pinkie Pie: I need plus ammo!
Sean: Just take my gun I got another one.
griffons: STOP! We have toi surronded. Ok hedgehog, take us to San Franciscolt.
Sean: And why should I?
griffon: TAKE US TO SAN FRANCISCOLT!
Sean: Chaos Control

Little did the griffons know that we ended up in a different place then they were looking for.

griffon: Cut the licornes horns.
other griffons: *cut off Twilight,...