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Warning: This fanfic is rated R for lot's of violence, strong language, and is intended for a mature audience. Viewer Discretion is advised

Seanthehedgehog presents

A story with a sad intro

Octavia Unchained

As toi probably know, in Equestria there are plus mares (female ponies) then there are stallions (male ponies). Because of this, nearly all the stallions placed much of the mares in slavery.

One of these mares is Octavia, and this is where her story begins, in Canterlot

Octavia: *Walking with other mares*
Stallions: *walking with mares, carrying whips*
Mares: *Walking to bus*
Octavia: *looks at Canterlot dealership*
Car dealer: *frowns at Octavia*
Octavia: *sighs*
Stallion: Hey, be quiet.
Stallion 2: Alright, get on the bus.
Mares: *walking on*
Stallion: Too slow! Hurry up!!
Octavia: *about to walk on bus*
Stallion: *grabs Octavia* Come on. You're moving too slow. *pulls Octavia onto bus* When are toi bitches going to learn?
Octavia: Learn what? That all stallions are cruel?
Stallion: toi better shut the hell up.
Octavia: But it's true. You're just jealous that we're better then you, and that there's plus of us then you.
Stallion: *angry* You're slow, pathetic, and don't deserve to live!
Octavia: Yeah, that'll be the day
Stallion: *pushes Octavia on the floor*
Mares: *Watching*
Stallion: *kicking Octavia*
Octavia: *bleeding*
Stallion: *Continues hurting Octavia*
Octavia: *crawls toward door*
Stallion: *whips Octavia*
Octavia: Aahhhh!
Stallion: *continues whipping Octavia*
Octavia: *cries*
Stallion: Shut the fuck up.
Bus driver: Get in a seat. *pulls Octavia from floor*
Octavia: *sits down*
Bus driver: *drives bus*

The bus went south toward Appleloosa. Halfway there it stopped.

Stallions: Thanks.
Bus driver: No problem.
Stallions: Off the bus.
Mares: *walk off bus*
Stallions: MOVE! *whips mares*

After getting off the bus, the group went towards a stable. A few mares were forced to pull a wagon carrying the stallions.

Octavia: *looks around*
Stallion: Look straight! *whips Octavia*
Stallion 2: We're going down a hill.
Mares: *walks down hill*
Stallions: *Wait*
Mares: *Get to bottom*
Stallion 1: Get in front *whips mares*
Mares: *pull chariot, panier past others*

They kept walking, and continued toward the farm where they were going to work. It was dark outside, and very cold.

Mares: *walking*
Other mares: *pulling cart*
Mares: *continue walking*
Mare 1: Oh cool we can see our own breath
Stallion 1: Hey! What did I tell toi about talking?! *get out of cart*
Mare: *Scared*
Stallions: *punches mare*
Mare 1: *falls on ground*
Stallion 1: *punches mare*
Stallion 2: *kicks mare*
Mare 1: *Bleeding*
Stallion 1: *punches mare* She's dead.
Stallion 2: Good. Let's move. *get back in cart*
Mares: *continue walking*

They continued walking for a while.

Octavia: Is that-
Stallions: *Whip Octavia*
Mare: She was just asking a question!
Stallion 2: *punch mare* NO plus TALKING!! GOT THAT?!!? FOR THE REST OF THE TRIP, I WANT toi TO KEEP YOUR FUCKING MOUTHS SHUT!!
grange owner: Hey! Take it easy with my slaves. Here's a thousand dollars.
Stallions: Thanks.

Suddenly, a poney arrived in a four door vehicle.

Stallion: salut pal. Do toi mind?
Driver: *gets out* No. Do you?
Stallion: Dexter. I'm sorry dude. These mares just don't listen.
Dexter: I don't care about that. Is there a poney here named Octavia Melody?
Stallion: Octavia?! Any of toi bitches know a poney named Octavia?
Mares: *Shake head no*
Octavia: I am Octavia.
Dexter: Hello there. I'm going to set toi free.
grange owner: Oh no toi won't! This here is my slave. toi can't take her away from me.
Dexter: Oh really? Winchester seems to think differently *pulls out shotgun*
Stallions: *grab guns*
Dexter: *kills stallions*
grange owner: *Scared*
Dexter: Now. I'm not going to ask again. Give me Octavia.
grange owner: Fine! She's all yours!
Dexter: Thank you. *kills grange owner* *Frees Octavia*
Octavia: Thank toi so much Dexter.
Dexter: No problem. Get in my car, I'm going to get toi something warm to wear.

And so, Dexter drove away with Octavia.

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