ok so heres a sample of the story im écriture for wattpad:
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first jour of school but if my cul, ass can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 plus minutes before i was about to get up and drag his cul, ass down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he a dit with slurred words
"hey dad" i a dit non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen toi in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he a dit as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he a dit quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i a dit trying my best to push him away
"give me a Kiss NOW toi little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to montrer up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he a dit running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad a dit taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he a dit shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a minute i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he a dit making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are toi sure your ok ria?" he a dit with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i a dit with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' par canard, drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and chant over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for musique to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether ou not I should continue ou just start over GOOD ou BAD? commentaire pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first jour of school but if my cul, ass can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 plus minutes before i was about to get up and drag his cul, ass down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he a dit with slurred words
"hey dad" i a dit non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen toi in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he a dit as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he a dit quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i a dit trying my best to push him away
"give me a Kiss NOW toi little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to montrer up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he a dit running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad a dit taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he a dit shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a minute i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he a dit making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are toi sure your ok ria?" he a dit with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i a dit with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' par canard, drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and chant over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for musique to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether ou not I should continue ou just start over GOOD ou BAD? commentaire pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
