Jake/Renesmee - Pure As Snow

Sorry, no Jacob in this one.
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Nessie-
I opened the door to Christina's house, and Christina jumped out from behind the couch, her long blond hair in sloppy pigtails swung. I jumped so high that I hit my head on the ceiling, and my bronze ringlets bounced. I landed on my feet, like always, and a dit hello to Natalie, Christina's little sister. I a dit hello to Natalia, Christina's mom. I also a dit hi to John, Christina's boyfriend. We went up to her bedroom, put in the new movie she bought, 'Say Cheese And Run', a new horror flick that just came out. That was the real reason she invited me....

Nessie's POV-
The suivant morning I woke up and called mommy Bella. "Yes, Nessie?" She a dit when she reached my room. "I need help packing. I don't know what to pack." Just then, Alice rushed into the room. "I'll help toi pack, Nessie." She said, already digging in my closet. "No, Aunt Alice. I want my mom to help." I answered sternly. Alice puckered her lip, the way she always did with mommy Bella, to get her to let Alice did what she wanted. Well, it wasn't working with me. I smacked Alice, not of anger, but trying to montrer her something. When I smacked her, I had fell, so my hand looked like...

Chapter 8: Difficulties.
Renesmee looked over to see Emma hand in hand with Seth. He was smiling brightly at her as she leaned into his side. The last guest dwindled out and Alice shut the door, bouncing up and down. Renesmee leaned into Jacob, exhausted. She put her hand on his cheek.
“Me too Ness. I’m tired just like toi but I don’t think there through with toi yet” he murmured. Renesmee stretched up on her toes and wrapped her arms around him. He kissed her quietly for a moment, the heat of his lips penetrating her skin.
“Will toi two cut it out?” Her dad snapped irritably from...

As Renesmee went to her cottage, Alice was there. Naturally, too help Nessie pick an outfit out. They both walked in and shut the little door. I sat down on the ground. I was going swimming in what I had on. I could tell the jeans wouldn't last much longer with my conituous growing. My chemise didn't look too far behind it. Nessie came flying out the door and was wearing a pair of cloth shorts with a bikini haut, retour au début on.
"Ok Jake, come on!" she yelled and began running east.
"Hold up Ness! toi dont know where to go. toi will have to follow my way this time." She came to a skdding stop and turned around....

"Nessie? Are toi ready to talk about it yet?" I asked her.
"Ok, I think so." She said. All of her face was rose and swolen frm crying so long. I'm not sure how long we were in the arbre house, but it must've been a while. Her parents looked out the window at us. I guess wondering if I hurt her feelings. Goog thing Edward read my thoughts, if Bella came out here Jacob Black as we all know him may not be alive anymore.
"Ok Jake." I looked down at her face, the tears had stopped finally. "You know how were going on a 'vacation'," the way she a dit vacation only sent one phrase through my head:...

toi would be suprised how packing a 7 an olds clothes can be so much fun. Maybe it's because of the whole imprinting thing but either way I took the opertunity fot Nessie and me to be alone.
"Jake?" she asked.
"Yeah Nessie?"
"Can toi come here for a second?" I was already up and headed towards her big closet wich she could easily get Lost in. Alice and Blondie restocks it every week. Maybe thats what Renesmee wanted, is to help her get out. I laughed at the thought while trying to get my body threw the different racks. It wasn't going so well and apparantley she noticed. Out of no where...

this is chapter three. like it says in the title. Im re editing my entire story and this is the edited version, Hope toi like it. Send me a prop. tell me if toi like it and how i could change it.

“Renesmee what’s wrong?” Samantha asked.
“Jacob.” I a dit with a hiss.
“Who is Jacob?” Chris asked with a smirk.
“Not who toi think he is Chris.” I a dit annoyed.
“He has been a friend of my mo… aunt for years he is closer to my age though. My boyfriend goes to school on the reservation.”
“Then why do toi look so distressed Renesmee?” Samantha asked worriedly.
“he never finished...

“Jacob!” I was yelling from the bath room. I was in plus pain than I ever thought was possible. It felt like something was clawing its way out of my stomach. This couldn’t be possible I’d been pregnant for only a couple of months. “JACOB BLACK GET toi cul, ass UP HERE!” I was screaming so loud I thought Jacob would go def. He ran into the bath room and kneeled down beside me. “What’s wrong?” “I need to get to grandpa.” He picked me up and drove me to the house and carried me in.

“What’s wrong with her?” My mother came rushing to my side. “Mom stop just get grandpa.”...

I shifted away from him, pressing my back as far against the car door as it would go. The small l’espace was too close and his scent was overwhelming.
"Why?" I whispered. His eyes crinkled for a moment and he looked at me, his silver eyes stirring with hidden emotion.
"I'm not sure. The same reason your Jacob has one with you. It's not something we can control,"
"You can't have one with me. I l’amour Jake," He didn't flinch but I saw the deep hurt in his eyes. My cœur, coeur stuttered. I didn't want to cause him any pain. His hand slowly moved up into the air and I didn't stop it.
"I'm sorry Renesmee....