Harry Potter vs Twilight Article: Breaking Apart ch 2

posted by bamagirl5899

okay dont leave bad commentaires if u dont like this ok i am having a bad day.

May pov

I was almost out the door when Alice said,"Do toi want to go hunting?" I turned around to look at my best friend who knows how long it was il y a when she saved me from dying in that carwreck it still brought back bad memories and also good ones that was the jour I became a vamp. "Sure Alice. Does anyone ealse want to come?" I said. A little girl well a girl younger than me ran up and a dit "I do please take me, oh and I'm rennesme."she said. then Bella ran up and grabed her arm and she a dit "No u cannot go with her." Wat's her problem just trying to be nice I thought. "Bellas just not happy today." Edward said. I grabed Alices arm and draged her out of the house I dont want Edward lire my mind it's rude I thought just hoping he would hear. we started running and we found a group of elk. When we jumped over the river I saw my reflection I was really pale with red hair and black eyes I neded to hunt badly.

Hunting

We caught the scent of thew elk then we jumped and ran through the arbre branches we spoted them in a couple of minutes. I caught the biggest and Alice cought the seconde largest. after we drunk the blood we ran back to her house.

At the house

"All I'm saying may is that toi need to go shopping.' Alice said. "Could toi stop making fun of my clothes Alice." I a dit she was getting annoying. "Alice is right May those clothes are ugly just like yopu." Bella said. "Oh I am not taking this Bella, oh and also MIND YOUR OWN BUISNESS." I yelled. "WHY DON'T toi MAKE ME VAGE." she screamed back. I hate my last name it rhymes with may which I dont like. "That's it see ya," then I turned to Alice,"I feel so sorry for toi Alice Bella is worst then Rose." then I started walking out the door then she threw something at me but I ducked just in time. "Nice try." I a dit then walked out to my car "Mabye I should rejoindre those Ittalien scum at least they would montrer me some respect." I a dit then I got in my car and went to Seattle to the mall I just sat at the nourriture court texting.

DracoLuver I don't want to be rude, but there are many grammar and spelling mistakes. It's also ... vague.

bamagirl5899 no the cherector in my boks last name not beinf rude is Vage thats how u spell her last name

DracoLuver That's not what I meant. Vague = not descriptive enough for someone to picture it. Example: "I looked at the mountains." Everyone knows what mountains look like, but they could be snowy, tall, burnt etc .. You need to say whaat it is exactly without over-doing it. "I looked at the giant mountains, covered in snow; the peaks probably touching Heaven." It plants a picture in your mind. Sorry if I wasn't clear before.

bamagirl5899 oh well sorry i thought u meant the charectors name sorry if i was rude

DracoLuver No, you weren't rude one bit :) I also love the name May! :D I have one question, how old is Rennesmee and is Jacob going to appear in the story?

bamagirl5899 rennesme is going to be 10 and changing fast and jacob will appear when their gone

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Hilarious Twilight Defenses.

posted by LilRavenclaw95

These are the weirdest, saddest Twilight defenses on the planet. *NOTE: I have nothing against reasonable Twilight fans, but ones like this? *facepalm*

Tiwlite deost scuk jew bichezz!!!!!1!!” twilite iz da beste buck i hav evar red in mi lief!!!! so wat if inot have red so maney bks in my lief!! i actualey hav ay lieff and bukks hapen to b four peeple wizout eny frends!!!!!!!1111 sou dant juzt PRUVVEZ hou gud twilit iz!!!!!!!!! adn anuzer ding i am sexteen not twelve adn i reeli LUVE TWAILITE wish usst PRUVVEZ it iz four mature, enteliggent peepolnot like hary poter dat is juzt four lusers...

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Harry Potter

posted by one_a_kind4ever

Harry Potter vs. Twilight has always been an argument. I believe that Harry Potter is obviously the upper hand in my opinion. Both stories are both interesting and entertaining but the problem is deciding if one is better.

Harry Potter was written with an amazing storyline and many people have followed it for many years and even dress up for the premiers. In the eyes of danger Harry and his Friends risk their lives to save their world from falling apart. The story takes seven livres to tell their story. Each book is filled with adventure and a new lesson that Harry learns. fans of the series...

One Hundred and Twenty Seven Minus One Hundred and Twenty Six Hours

posted by ThirdPhoenix

It was the time between the fourth and fifth Harry Potter livres and right after Bella leaves Jacob for Edward in the Twilight series when IT happened.
James, the evilest of the evil, had no money. He knew his antagonist part required him to have money. He needed money. There was only one thing to do....
He stepped into the swirling nothingness, and secondes later turned up in a gloomy, slimy hallway. "Are toi here, Lord Voldemort?"
The dark shape slid out of the shadow. "More money, James?" He a dit cooly. "We may both be the antagonists of our books, but toi do owe me...."
"OWE toi WHAT!?"...

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AstridGoof8219's Anti-Twilight Story.

posted by AstridGoof8219

There once was a young adult woman named Astrid. One jour in Spring 2008, her good friend, Rhonda visited her. She told Astrid about this book series called Twilight, Rhonda a dit that she read the livres and that they were really good. Astrid then went to Borders and bought the three books. When she got home, she opened up the first book and started to read away. Astrid then decided that she liked it too. A jour later, she read New Moon, only this time, Astrid didn't like it as much as Twilight. Wishing to continue lire after the slight disliking, she read Eclipse hoping it would be better...

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letters from hp to twi

posted by luv_warriorcatz

lets say that bella and hermione were off Friends (really off). Hermione is at hogwarts where she is happy and bella is at forks with her vamp buddies where she is happy. And they know each other's secrets. One day, Hermione wrote bella a letter.

Dear Bella Swan,

I have heard about your acts in Forks and how your boyfriend, edward broke up with you. I feel really sorry for you. Then toi found him again in Volterra, Italy and toi started going out with him again. My opinion might not matter in this but I feel as if I should tell toi about this. I am afraid that toi might be a little bit obssessive....