Harry Potter vs Twilight Article: Breaking apart

posted by bamagirl5899

okay so tell me what u think of this.

May pov

I was speeding down tha familier rue I wished my 2010 yellow camaro with black racing strips was faster. Though I about missed the rue to my old friend's house. I pulled up to a 3 story house. Alice ran out of the house to my car sometimes she was annoying. "Wat up little pixie?" I said. "Nothing much." was all she replyed she looked sad. "Wats wrong Alice?" I a dit not joking anymore."Well eveything is just falling apart and were going to this new school but were still living here it's just getting confusing." "Wat new school?" In truth I just got accepted to a new school they usually don't take 16 an old's ou that was what alice was pretendind to be if she got in at my new school. "A school with a stupid name it's called Hogwarts how stupid is that name. Plus were going to be gone the whole an with no shopping and ur going to need a shopping spree." She a dit eyeing me clothes. I was wearing some blue jeans and a tanktop. "Wait u a dit hogwarts I got exceppted their to." "All of us got exceppted except Bella and reneesme. Oh and Edward,Emmet,and Jasper missed u and it was amusing to see them get beat up par a girl. Those were the good times." she said. and in truth those were my favori times evan though Edward liked me it was still fun to beat Emmet at arm wrestling."Well were going to all be togather now for a few years though if the three dumbo's are going I might not." I a dit laughing."Dont call my bf a dumbo." "Fine Edward and emmet are the dumbo's. We entered the house everyone was watching tv Bella gave me an icy stare I don't care what she thinks I wispered to alice. I knew she heard vamps ability's were sometimes amusing though evan though i was one.Me and alice have been Friends since i was 11 and figured out their secret and they changed me at 17."Wat's up everyone." I said. they ignored me. "Fine c u guy's at Hogwarts." we were leaving tomarrow and the looks on their face was priceless

bamagirl5899 hope u like it if not i dont care my opinion matters not everyone ealses but still comment

bamagirl5899 oh and it will get better at hogwarts

bri-marie Having it in this really long paragraph format is kinda hard to read. I know that Fanpop isn't always happy to put articles in the format you want, which is why I'm not going to make a big deal out of it. However, it is something you should watch out for. Watch your punctuation and spelling! Do not use chat speak ('wat', 'u', 'c') unless the person who is doing the talking is [i]actually[/i] texting. It's irritating and, to be honest, makes you look lazy. So far, over all, the story isn't off to a bad start. we could use a little more information about your main character (i.e. how she knows the Cullens) and more visuals (i.e. what does May look like?).

Bellatrix-Black This is terribly written. It might have been a good story, but it's too much work to read. When you write, you want to make it easy to read, you don't want to force the reader to work. For example, I didn't know the speaker's name was May until bri-marie said so.

bamagirl5899 well read the last couple of sentences and u can see how she knows the culles.

bri-marie . . . Alright, looking over the large fact that Alice was in a mental institution for years, you now have the large problem that at the beginning of this (very small) chapter, you infer that your character is sixteen. At the end, you say she was changed into a vampire at seventeen. Which one is she? Mary-Sue alert.

bamagirl5899 listen dont be mean dont like it fine dont care i dont like people like u who r mean commenting on this

bri-marie How am I being mean?

DracoLuver Bri isn't being mean. It's called constructive criticism. You need to know the things your reader doesn't like so you can improve your writing. She's being very nice and straight-forward. Also, PLEASE don't call Hogwarts a "stupid" school. It's offending. Maybe, "I've never been there, but the name sounds stupid."

bamagirl5899 well u hp fans say offending stuff about twilight so why can't i say something about hog warts

1-2vampire Um, Bri isn't being mean. As DracoLuver said, it's called constructive criticism, say someone wrote a really terrible book, and everyone was like "yeah it's great, honest!" just to make them happy, it wouldn't end up good, because Simon Cowell-like publishers would be like "what the hell was that?" and they wouldn't be able to make it better. There are quite a few mistakes and confusing parts in there, like for instance I can't read the writing because of the "text talk." Besides, the world wouldn't be right if there was one book out there which hadn't had someone criticize it. You can't please everyone at the same time, so don't try.

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Bahaha

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Alex reads Twilight - BRILLIANT! Chapter 1

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Twilight

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Harry Potter <3

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Harry Potter obsessor

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Harry Potter WINS!!!

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Taking Care Of Twilight

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Source: A website that I forgot the name of... >.>

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Me and my friends' fanfic part 1 of many

posted by emilyroxx

When me and my friend Fiona were in the sixth grade, we decided to write a fanfiction about the Twilight characters going to Hogwarts. (We were both major Twilight fans then.) I wasn't the best writer in those days, so the beginning of the fanfic isn't great, but it gets better as we go along.
You'll notice that our seprate entries can get a bit confusing at times, and that's because we were écriture par e-mail because she lives six hours away from me, and we were just making it up as we went along. Fiona is écriture about the character Peace, and I am using the character that I use for EVERYTHING,...

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Wizards Vs vampires

posted by rangarajvignesh

The World is flat!
Well, I know toi question my sanity, now. Obviously, the world is round and that’s a proven fact, from the moment Galileo stepped out of his ship. And now, there’s a question again. Is the World really round? I hate that word, really. The word which gives rise to a lot of questions and seeks for explanations.
‘Imagination is plus important than knowledge,’ a dit a wise man once. And, it’s true. Well, toi need not be aware of the complications of four-dimensional l’espace fabric to accept this theory. What all toi need to...

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what i think of bella swan-1

posted by emilykuru

BELLA cygne _ part 1

Ummm…. What can i say about her………….er…….nothing interesting but i can montrer u guys why she spoils the story

1.she is a hopeless char.she degrades herself,

2.she is stupid 2 leave her mom and come to forks when she begs her 2 comeback.

ok! if u guys say that it was because of the l’amour for renee then it is totally wrong.

which daughter who loved her mom so much as to go 2 the place which she considers
hell just for her moms happiness would forget all about renee when jumping off a cliff to hear edwards voice.
doesnt she always worry in the story that she has...

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HPbest's anti story!

posted by harrypotterbest

There is, in the world, a girl called Z-----. plus commonly known on this website as Best, that is the name that shall be used for this anti story.
Now, when best was 11 years old, she had read all the Harry Potter books, and loved them. I’m talking about waiting for her Hogwarts acceptance letter to come and carving wands. She truly loved the series. In 2009, she went to a wedding. Her aunt there had read the Harry Potter books, except for the last one. She also had a cousin there, who was a huge fan of Twilight. Now, at that time, best hadn’t read Twilight. Her aunt was also a huge fan...

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The Final Battle: Part 3

posted by harrypotterbest

As Edward and Harry settled the final means of the battle, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny had a talk.
“Who wrote this rubbish?” asked Ron. “Sparkle in the sun, battle with debate, they don’t even drink proper blood!”
Hermione, as usual, was the one to answer. “Ron, everyone knows Stephanie Meyer wrote this ‘rubbish.’ She’s not a very good writer, according to The Daily Prophet, and for once I agree with them,” Hermione rolled her eyes. “At least OUR writer, the brilliant J K Rowling, didn’t make US sparkle in the sun. What nonsense!”
“Do toi know where this Meyer person...

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Thorough Look as to Why Harry Potter is Better.

posted by MarauderForever

I'm tired of repeating myself and other HP fans repeating themselves constantly so here is my opinion on why Harry Potter is better. So toi don't think I'm being biased, let me tell you: I read Harry Potter when I was 5 and have been a fan since (and that shuts down the commentaire that little kids can't read it par the way) and when I was 13, I read Twilight (before the bandwagon) and loved it. Then just recently, I got off the Twilight High. So I know how it is to have liked Twilight and to like Harry Potter.

First, we can look at the authors. JK Rowling is the epitome of Rag to Riches. She started...

hary potter v twilight!!!

posted by NataliaLidia

i persenally dont like ether series and heres why!!!

books
twilight
1) i am a reel vampire and i do not sparkl!!! stephanie shud have brun foncé, dun her reasearch before she wrote a book about vampires!!!
2) bella is a bad roll model!!!
4) edwerd is abusiv!!!
5) its unrealistic!!!
6) its badly writen!!!
7) edwerd is describd to much!!! it gets boring!!!
8) its boring overall!!!

harry potter
1) its not relatble!!!
2) its made for kids!!!
3)harry always beets te bad guy!!! he never looses!!!
4) harry gets away wit everything in skool!!!
5) they hav bad frends!!! ron leaves nd dosnt stay wit harry when peeps make fun of him!!!
6) its boring!!!
7) snape keeps his job even tho he bullys students nd is a deth eater!!!
8) dumbledoor doesnt reely care about harry!!! he leaves him at da durslys even tho they are abusiv!!!

movies
both films hav bad actors nd the filmers didnt follows the boks the way they were suposed to!!!

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Bella&Edward poem

posted by HaleyDewit

Bella
My name is Bella and there’s something I need to tell
I’m dating this cute vampire, he’s just hot as hell
He’s fascinated par my none existing mind
And I fall apart whenever I stare in those liquid topaz eyes

Edward
My name is Edward and there’s something I need to say
Bella’s gonna freak when she finds out I’m gay
But I can clearly understand what she sees in me
Because have toi ever met someone this perfectly

Bella
I used to live in Phoenix, but now moved to this rainy place
I keep whining about it and I always have the same expression on my face
I’m just a little girl who’s helpless...

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Things Edward could've done with his life....

posted by Confuzzle

1. rejoindre an orchestra.
[i] You're inside, anyway.....

2. rejoindre an opera.
He has a good voice...right?

3. Go to a tanning salon.
Who wants to be pale all their life?

4. Leave home.
You're a hundred and something and STILL living with your parents. How does that feel?

5. Travel.
Yeah, the sparkling thing pops that bubble a bit, but what are parasols for?

6. Discover...SUNSCREEN.
It protects toi from the sun. Shocking, eh?

7. Begin a knitting business.
Creativity is key. toi can still stay inside, and make money. Plus, toi make Friends with the rest of the sweet little old people in the knitting club.

8.Start...

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Rant on argumentation techniques

posted by Aquilia

I'm adressing the rabid Twilight fans if they would listen. I'm also adressing the common fans of both sides of this debate.

There are some things one may and may not do in a formal débats unless one wants to look like - pardon the language - a freaking donkey.

Nr 01: One may not argue against the debaters points par attacking him ou her. This is called argumentum ad hominem and is a fallacy. For example: If I am to argue that free elections is wrong and states that the arguer is an imbecile that does not deserve the right to vote, then I have committed a severe personal attack and will be frowned...

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Voldemort vs. Aro

posted by Athiya

Many of toi might have noticed that the golden trio from Harry Potter (Harry, Ron, and Hermione) had always been paired up to fight with the not-so-golden trio of Twilight (Edward, Jacob, and Bella). Now, XDRoseLuvsHP had pointed out a great deal on why HP trio would win against the Twilight's (you can find it link), so I figured perhaps it's time for the villains to battle.

My first thought was off course, James and Voldemort; but then, it didn't seem fair on the Twilight side. James was not a very good villain; his character was poorly underdeveloped and his powers weren't very outstanding...

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Response to "you want reasons? ill give toi reasons !!! mwahahah!"

posted by ChocAttack266

This is a (long) rebuttal to KatiiCullen94's argument, the titre of which is in is article's title. (Though you've probably all seen that par now.) I haven't included her points in this, so it will be necessary to read her article first.

1. The majority of people in this world cannot relate to Bella. Tell me, how many people can go to a new school and automatically be the prettiest and most populaire girl there? How many girls can say that they have FIVE males lusting after them?

Bella does care for people other than herself - her boyfriend. That's it. She was perfectly happy to hurt her father...

My opinions and thoughts on Twilight Characters

posted by Renesmee_XD

This is my last article and as toi may know I never really came here to argue, just to figure out what was going on in Twilight-Haters heads.

Bella- Whiny and Moany ?
Everyone says that Bella is so whiney and the point is so what if she ? I am sure if we went into your heads ,you would be as moany as her. She complains about the attention she is recieving from boys. I would too it would totally creep me out if suddenly I moved to a new school and everybody likes me.
The friend problem: Jessica is not a good friend after being to 9 schools so far I have met people like this and only can I comment...