Fire, air, water and earth. Avatar Korra was an amazing and strong avatar. She had saved everybody from Amon and many other enemy’s. But 82 years have pass and Korra is now gone. It’s time for the new Avatar to be born. Meanwhile in the Earth Kingdom in Ba Sing Se. A husband and wife lived in a small house in Ba Sing Se. The husband and wife’s names were Mr. and Mrs. Hin. Mr. Hin’s wife was about to have a baby. A lady walked out of their bedroom. She was one of the nurses that had helped his wife.
“You may come in now. She gave birth to a beautiful baby girl” the nurse a dit as she smiled and walked out of the house. The other nurses did as well. Mr. Hin walked in the bedroom to see their baby. Mr. Hin saw their baby and saw that she had black hair and light green eyes.
“She’s beautiful. What are toi going to name her?” Mr. Hin asked his wife.
“I like the name Hana. I want her name to be Hana” Mrs. Hin replied as she smiled at her baby.
“Hana is a great name. So our child’s name will be Hana” Mr. Hin said. Years have passed and Hana is now 15 years old. She became a very beautiful teenage girl. She was so nice and so sweet. She was also very Rebelle and very caring and also happy. Her black hair had gotten long. She always wears her hair down. She never puts it in a ponytail ou pigtails ou in a bun. She hates her hair to not be down. So she always wears her hair down with two parts of her hair in front. Morning came. Hana got up and put on a long earth kingdom dress with long sleeves, long earth kingdom pants and green shoes. She walked out her bedroom. Her Dad was watching a pro bending match on T.V.
“Dad why are toi watching that?” Hana asked.
“Oh salut Hana. I didn’t know toi were up. And why? Don’t toi like pro bending matches?” Mr. Hin asked. Hana hated the pro bending matches. She didn’t like people fighting just for the fun of it.
“I don’t like the idea of them fighting for fun. I want to use my bending to help people not just for fighting. It seems very wrong to me. I’m sorry Dad” Hana a dit as she made a frown.
“Aw. It’s fine Hana. toi don’t have to like it” Mr. Hin said.
“Thank toi Dad” Hana replied as she hugged her Dad while happy.
“Oh. Good morning Hana. Here’s breakfast” Mrs. Hin called out from the cuisine as she put her breakfast on the table. Hana walked in the cuisine and sat in a chair and started eating her breakfast.
“I wonder who the suivant Avatar is going to be. I heard it’s going to be a male earth bender. But I don’t know for sure. I am very excited to find out who the suivant Avatar is” Hana a dit while jumping up and down while very excited. Mrs. and Mr. Hin both laughed at their daughter.
“Ok Hana. Calm down and eat your breakfast” Mrs. Hin said.
“Ha ha! Sorry Mom. I’m just really happy to find out who the suivant Avatar is” Hana replied with a big smile on her face. She began eating her breakfast again. She was done and she was washing the dishes and she put the plates up.
“Thank toi Hana” Mrs. Hin a dit with a smile.
“You’re welcome Mom” Hana replied as she hugged her Mom. She stop hugging her Mom.
“Mom can I go to the bibliothèque please?” Hana asked.
“Of course toi can go to the library. I know how much toi l’amour livres and l’amour to read” Mrs. Hin a dit and smiled.
“Thank toi Mom I’ll be back before dinner” Hana a dit as she walked out the front door.
“Ok” Mrs. Hin called out from the kitchen. Hana was walking and walking until she reached the bibliothèque in Ba Sing Sa. She walked in as she walked to find some interesting livres she might like. Hana really loved livres so much. She had about 30 livres in her bedroom that she borrowed from the library. She loved to read so much. It made her so very happy indeed. As Hana was looking at a book she bumped a book and it fell out.
“Oops” Hana a dit as she picked the book up. She put the book she was looking at back and she was looking at the book that fell on the floor. She looked at the cover of the book. It was called the story of all the past avatars. All the avatars were on the cover even Korra was as well. She looked at the pages of the book. They had amazing paintings on all of the pages. Hana was amazed at the amazing art in the book. It also had écriture in the book. It told every avatar’s story. Hana turn the page as she saw a picture of Avatar Korra. She was lire her story. She was amazed at what Korra did. Wanted to take Amon down all par herself. And also fighting a lot of spirits. Saving the world so many times in her life. Hana thought Korra was such an amazing avatar. It made her truly happy as she was lire Korra’s whole story. She wanted to borrow this book. Because she liked it too much. She walked to the librarian while holding the book in one of her hands.
“Hello. Can I please check this out?” Hana asked with a smile.
“Oh hi there Hana. Oh toi liked that book? I knew toi would. toi l’amour the Avatar stories don’t you?” The librarian asked.
“Yes. I l’amour the story of all the avatars. Aang and Korra’s story was so amazing. But Korra’s story is my most favorite. She was so brave. I wish I was the avatar. Because I l’amour to help people” Hana a dit and smiled.
“Oh Hana. Don’t be upset that toi aren’t the avatar. toi told me you’re a master earth bender. Is that right?” The librarian asked.
“Yes. That’s true. I am a master earth bender . I master earth bending when I was only 4 years old” Hana replied.
“Wow. That’s amazing. toi see. toi are as amazing as any avatar” The librarian said.
“Thank toi very much” Hana replied with a smile.
“You are very welcome. And toi can borrow that book as long as toi like” The librarian a dit while a very friendly smile on her face.
“Thanks so much” Hana a dit as the librarian checked out the book for her and handed it back to her. Hana was about to sat down again as she looked at the clock in the library.
“Oh no! I’m going to be late to come home!” Hana gasp as she ran out the front door of the bibliothèque with the book in her right hand. As she was walking to get accueil . She heard yelling. She turn to where the yelling was coming from.
“LEAVE ME ALONE! MOMMY! WHERE ARE toi MOMMY? SOMEBODY HELP! MOMMY!” a child voice yelled. Hana saw a little girl about the age of 6 being attacked par 5 male earth benders. They were hurting her. Little blood was on her cheek. Hana couldn’t take any plus of this. She needed to help that girl. She didn’t like fighting but if she didn’t do something. They would kill that little girl.
“SHUT UP! toi BRAT!” One of the guys yelled. Hana put the bibliothèque book down and she ran to where the little girl was.
“Please leave this little girl alone. Why pick on her? She didn’t do anything to you. She’s just a little girl. What kind of people are you?” Hana asked while upset.
“We don’t take orders from you. Get Lost toi annoying girl!” One of them yelled once again. But Hana won’t back down. She was demanded to help that girl no matter what it took. Hana earth bended and hit one of the guy’s faces. One of them saw her earth bended them.
“Why you!” one of them yelled as they earth bend and almost hit Hana. But Hana jumped out of the way and earth bended and hit one of the guy’s to the wall. They were knocked out. 4 were left as they started to attack Hana.
“YOU LEAVE THAT GIRL ALONE!” Hana yelled. Just than Hana felt something warm in her hand. She started to feu bend right out of her own hand very powerful. It was so powerful it knocked all the 4 guys out.
“What the?” Hana gasp while very shocked. Hana was very confused to what just happened. The little girl grabbed on Hana’s long dress sleeve. Hana turn around and saw the blood on her cheek.
“We better get away from here before they wake up” Hana a dit as she grabbed the little girl’s hand and grabbed her book and walked to where there was water. She saw a fontaine and she walked to it. The little girl sat par a bench suivant to the fountain. Hana took a rag and wet it with water and walked to the little girl and got the blood off on her cheek.
“Thank you” The little girl said.
“Your very welcome. But where is your Mom?” Hana asked.
“I don’t know. We were taking a walk and when I turn around she was gone. I want my Mommy!” she replied while crying.
“Aw it’s ok. Don’t worry I’ll help toi find your Mom. Don’t cry it will be ok” Hana a dit in a sweet voice.
“Ok” she a dit as she stop crying. So Hana once again grabbed the little girl’s hand and was walking to find her mother.
“Bona? BONA! Thank goodness I found you!” a woman voice called out.
“MOMMY!” Bona yelled as she ran to her mother.
“So that’s your mom? I’m glad we found her” Hana said.
“Mommy. This girl help me find you” Bona said.
“Thank toi so much. I don’t know what I would have did if I Lost her. toi are truly amazing” Bona’s mother a dit with a friendly smile.
“Your very welcome. I’m glad I could help. I l’amour helping people. So your name is Bona? That’s a sweet name. My name is Hana” Hana a dit and smiled.
“Can we play together sometime Hana?” Bona asked.
“Sure we can” Hana replied. As they both pinkie swear. Bona giggled.
“I promise” Hana a dit as she let go.
“Bye I got to go. Bye Hana!” Bona called out as her and her mother started to go home.
“BYE!” Hana called out as she waved. Hana ran as fast as she could to get home. Finally she was at home. She open the front door and shut it.
“Hana. What in the world were toi doing? toi are really late for dinner. The nourriture almost got cold. But I heat it up again” Mrs. Hin a dit while upset.
“I’m sorry Mom. But I had to do something very important. A little girl was being attacked par 5 earth benders and I stop them and saved her life and she couldn’t find her mom so I help her find her mom” Hana said.
“Wow that’s amazing. I’m really proud of you” Mrs. Hin a dit and hugged Hana.
“Were so glad you’re not hurt” Mr. Hin said. Hana wanted to tell her parents what happened. That she feu bended.
“But Mom, Dad. Something really strange happened. When I was fighting them. I feu bended out of my own hand! How can that be? I’m only an earth bender. I’m not the avatar. How could I feu bend?” Hana asked so confused. Mr. and Mrs. Hin looked at each other.
“Can toi air bend too?” Mrs. Hin asked.
“I don’t know but I’ll try” Hana a dit as she walked outside. And so did her Mom and Dad. Hana took a deep breath and she air bended. Hana was amazed.
“I think you’re the Avatar Hana” Mr. and Mrs. Hin a dit while shocked.
“Me the avatar? But they a dit the new Avatar was going to be a boy earth bender not a female earth bender. How can that be?” Hana asked.
“Everybody was wrong. toi are the Avatar Hana” Mrs. Hin said.
“I’m the avatar? WOW!” Hana a dit as she jumped up and down while very happy.
“Now that we found out you’re the avatar. toi must master all 4 bending. toi master earth now toi have to master 3 more” Mrs Hin said.
“I have to leave home? But I never left accueil before” Hana a dit while upset.
“It will be ok Hana. But why don’t toi have dîner and get some rest for tomorrow?” Mr. Hin asked. Hana nodded. She ate dinner. After she ate dîner she washed the dishes and she went to her bedroom. She went in her bed. She was thinking. That she really was the avatar. Not a boy it was really her who was the avatar. It amazed her par her own eyes. She soon fell asleep. Hana’s journey as the Avatar will began tomorrow.
“You may come in now. She gave birth to a beautiful baby girl” the nurse a dit as she smiled and walked out of the house. The other nurses did as well. Mr. Hin walked in the bedroom to see their baby. Mr. Hin saw their baby and saw that she had black hair and light green eyes.
“She’s beautiful. What are toi going to name her?” Mr. Hin asked his wife.
“I like the name Hana. I want her name to be Hana” Mrs. Hin replied as she smiled at her baby.
“Hana is a great name. So our child’s name will be Hana” Mr. Hin said. Years have passed and Hana is now 15 years old. She became a very beautiful teenage girl. She was so nice and so sweet. She was also very Rebelle and very caring and also happy. Her black hair had gotten long. She always wears her hair down. She never puts it in a ponytail ou pigtails ou in a bun. She hates her hair to not be down. So she always wears her hair down with two parts of her hair in front. Morning came. Hana got up and put on a long earth kingdom dress with long sleeves, long earth kingdom pants and green shoes. She walked out her bedroom. Her Dad was watching a pro bending match on T.V.
“Dad why are toi watching that?” Hana asked.
“Oh salut Hana. I didn’t know toi were up. And why? Don’t toi like pro bending matches?” Mr. Hin asked. Hana hated the pro bending matches. She didn’t like people fighting just for the fun of it.
“I don’t like the idea of them fighting for fun. I want to use my bending to help people not just for fighting. It seems very wrong to me. I’m sorry Dad” Hana a dit as she made a frown.
“Aw. It’s fine Hana. toi don’t have to like it” Mr. Hin said.
“Thank toi Dad” Hana replied as she hugged her Dad while happy.
“Oh. Good morning Hana. Here’s breakfast” Mrs. Hin called out from the cuisine as she put her breakfast on the table. Hana walked in the cuisine and sat in a chair and started eating her breakfast.
“I wonder who the suivant Avatar is going to be. I heard it’s going to be a male earth bender. But I don’t know for sure. I am very excited to find out who the suivant Avatar is” Hana a dit while jumping up and down while very excited. Mrs. and Mr. Hin both laughed at their daughter.
“Ok Hana. Calm down and eat your breakfast” Mrs. Hin said.
“Ha ha! Sorry Mom. I’m just really happy to find out who the suivant Avatar is” Hana replied with a big smile on her face. She began eating her breakfast again. She was done and she was washing the dishes and she put the plates up.
“Thank toi Hana” Mrs. Hin a dit with a smile.
“You’re welcome Mom” Hana replied as she hugged her Mom. She stop hugging her Mom.
“Mom can I go to the bibliothèque please?” Hana asked.
“Of course toi can go to the library. I know how much toi l’amour livres and l’amour to read” Mrs. Hin a dit and smiled.
“Thank toi Mom I’ll be back before dinner” Hana a dit as she walked out the front door.
“Ok” Mrs. Hin called out from the kitchen. Hana was walking and walking until she reached the bibliothèque in Ba Sing Sa. She walked in as she walked to find some interesting livres she might like. Hana really loved livres so much. She had about 30 livres in her bedroom that she borrowed from the library. She loved to read so much. It made her so very happy indeed. As Hana was looking at a book she bumped a book and it fell out.
“Oops” Hana a dit as she picked the book up. She put the book she was looking at back and she was looking at the book that fell on the floor. She looked at the cover of the book. It was called the story of all the past avatars. All the avatars were on the cover even Korra was as well. She looked at the pages of the book. They had amazing paintings on all of the pages. Hana was amazed at the amazing art in the book. It also had écriture in the book. It told every avatar’s story. Hana turn the page as she saw a picture of Avatar Korra. She was lire her story. She was amazed at what Korra did. Wanted to take Amon down all par herself. And also fighting a lot of spirits. Saving the world so many times in her life. Hana thought Korra was such an amazing avatar. It made her truly happy as she was lire Korra’s whole story. She wanted to borrow this book. Because she liked it too much. She walked to the librarian while holding the book in one of her hands.
“Hello. Can I please check this out?” Hana asked with a smile.
“Oh hi there Hana. Oh toi liked that book? I knew toi would. toi l’amour the Avatar stories don’t you?” The librarian asked.
“Yes. I l’amour the story of all the avatars. Aang and Korra’s story was so amazing. But Korra’s story is my most favorite. She was so brave. I wish I was the avatar. Because I l’amour to help people” Hana a dit and smiled.
“Oh Hana. Don’t be upset that toi aren’t the avatar. toi told me you’re a master earth bender. Is that right?” The librarian asked.
“Yes. That’s true. I am a master earth bender . I master earth bending when I was only 4 years old” Hana replied.
“Wow. That’s amazing. toi see. toi are as amazing as any avatar” The librarian said.
“Thank toi very much” Hana replied with a smile.
“You are very welcome. And toi can borrow that book as long as toi like” The librarian a dit while a very friendly smile on her face.
“Thanks so much” Hana a dit as the librarian checked out the book for her and handed it back to her. Hana was about to sat down again as she looked at the clock in the library.
“Oh no! I’m going to be late to come home!” Hana gasp as she ran out the front door of the bibliothèque with the book in her right hand. As she was walking to get accueil . She heard yelling. She turn to where the yelling was coming from.
“LEAVE ME ALONE! MOMMY! WHERE ARE toi MOMMY? SOMEBODY HELP! MOMMY!” a child voice yelled. Hana saw a little girl about the age of 6 being attacked par 5 male earth benders. They were hurting her. Little blood was on her cheek. Hana couldn’t take any plus of this. She needed to help that girl. She didn’t like fighting but if she didn’t do something. They would kill that little girl.
“SHUT UP! toi BRAT!” One of the guys yelled. Hana put the bibliothèque book down and she ran to where the little girl was.
“Please leave this little girl alone. Why pick on her? She didn’t do anything to you. She’s just a little girl. What kind of people are you?” Hana asked while upset.
“We don’t take orders from you. Get Lost toi annoying girl!” One of them yelled once again. But Hana won’t back down. She was demanded to help that girl no matter what it took. Hana earth bended and hit one of the guy’s faces. One of them saw her earth bended them.
“Why you!” one of them yelled as they earth bend and almost hit Hana. But Hana jumped out of the way and earth bended and hit one of the guy’s to the wall. They were knocked out. 4 were left as they started to attack Hana.
“YOU LEAVE THAT GIRL ALONE!” Hana yelled. Just than Hana felt something warm in her hand. She started to feu bend right out of her own hand very powerful. It was so powerful it knocked all the 4 guys out.
“What the?” Hana gasp while very shocked. Hana was very confused to what just happened. The little girl grabbed on Hana’s long dress sleeve. Hana turn around and saw the blood on her cheek.
“We better get away from here before they wake up” Hana a dit as she grabbed the little girl’s hand and grabbed her book and walked to where there was water. She saw a fontaine and she walked to it. The little girl sat par a bench suivant to the fountain. Hana took a rag and wet it with water and walked to the little girl and got the blood off on her cheek.
“Thank you” The little girl said.
“Your very welcome. But where is your Mom?” Hana asked.
“I don’t know. We were taking a walk and when I turn around she was gone. I want my Mommy!” she replied while crying.
“Aw it’s ok. Don’t worry I’ll help toi find your Mom. Don’t cry it will be ok” Hana a dit in a sweet voice.
“Ok” she a dit as she stop crying. So Hana once again grabbed the little girl’s hand and was walking to find her mother.
“Bona? BONA! Thank goodness I found you!” a woman voice called out.
“MOMMY!” Bona yelled as she ran to her mother.
“So that’s your mom? I’m glad we found her” Hana said.
“Mommy. This girl help me find you” Bona said.
“Thank toi so much. I don’t know what I would have did if I Lost her. toi are truly amazing” Bona’s mother a dit with a friendly smile.
“Your very welcome. I’m glad I could help. I l’amour helping people. So your name is Bona? That’s a sweet name. My name is Hana” Hana a dit and smiled.
“Can we play together sometime Hana?” Bona asked.
“Sure we can” Hana replied. As they both pinkie swear. Bona giggled.
“I promise” Hana a dit as she let go.
“Bye I got to go. Bye Hana!” Bona called out as her and her mother started to go home.
“BYE!” Hana called out as she waved. Hana ran as fast as she could to get home. Finally she was at home. She open the front door and shut it.
“Hana. What in the world were toi doing? toi are really late for dinner. The nourriture almost got cold. But I heat it up again” Mrs. Hin a dit while upset.
“I’m sorry Mom. But I had to do something very important. A little girl was being attacked par 5 earth benders and I stop them and saved her life and she couldn’t find her mom so I help her find her mom” Hana said.
“Wow that’s amazing. I’m really proud of you” Mrs. Hin a dit and hugged Hana.
“Were so glad you’re not hurt” Mr. Hin said. Hana wanted to tell her parents what happened. That she feu bended.
“But Mom, Dad. Something really strange happened. When I was fighting them. I feu bended out of my own hand! How can that be? I’m only an earth bender. I’m not the avatar. How could I feu bend?” Hana asked so confused. Mr. and Mrs. Hin looked at each other.
“Can toi air bend too?” Mrs. Hin asked.
“I don’t know but I’ll try” Hana a dit as she walked outside. And so did her Mom and Dad. Hana took a deep breath and she air bended. Hana was amazed.
“I think you’re the Avatar Hana” Mr. and Mrs. Hin a dit while shocked.
“Me the avatar? But they a dit the new Avatar was going to be a boy earth bender not a female earth bender. How can that be?” Hana asked.
“Everybody was wrong. toi are the Avatar Hana” Mrs. Hin said.
“I’m the avatar? WOW!” Hana a dit as she jumped up and down while very happy.
“Now that we found out you’re the avatar. toi must master all 4 bending. toi master earth now toi have to master 3 more” Mrs Hin said.
“I have to leave home? But I never left accueil before” Hana a dit while upset.
“It will be ok Hana. But why don’t toi have dîner and get some rest for tomorrow?” Mr. Hin asked. Hana nodded. She ate dinner. After she ate dîner she washed the dishes and she went to her bedroom. She went in her bed. She was thinking. That she really was the avatar. Not a boy it was really her who was the avatar. It amazed her par her own eyes. She soon fell asleep. Hana’s journey as the Avatar will began tomorrow.
“After the conclusion of the War, Aang and Zuko brought people from the four nations together and founded the United Republic, creating Republic City, a large "metropolis powered par steampunk-type technology" such as cars and motorcycles.”
I find it strange that Aang and Zuko decided to build a city, straight after the war.
Sozin started the war because he wanted the same thing right? (And to rule them all of course)
Why was Roku opposed to the idea anyway, Aang and Zuko thought it would be a good idea (‘they built their own city’)
Technically people in Republic city are living Sozin’s dream, right?
What are your thoughts?
( excuse the language/grammer , third English language speaker)
