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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. par no means am I forcing toi to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless toi truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before toi start posting. It can be as little as a bio, ou as big as an entire article series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no plus than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he ou she is in, can pull out another trick out of his ou her hat.
4. If toi absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his ou her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely aléatoire and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when toi have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the suivant jour you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own ou is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the récent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, ou claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If toi must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, ou so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if toi do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot ou stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutes later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull ou flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to ou dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to ou dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created par you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing ou potential character is a Mary Sue, ou if toi suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, toi can take link. If toi want, toi can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case toi were curious, which toi probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all toi want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, par no means do toi have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by Robin_Love
 Trevor-day
Trevor-day
I KNOW I make alot, but I l’amour them all so much!!!


Name: Trevor Wright
Alias: Secret
Occupation: Hero
Powers: Trevor posses different powers at different times of day. Day-strength, light, fire, wind. Night-speed, shadows, darkness, water. Trevor is also a master spy and trained extensively in combat. He has never been detected and has endurance that lasts twenty-four hours. Trevor loves to use a gun in the jour and a sword at night.
History: Trevor was raised on the streets of London, England. He is, as far as he knows, an orphan. His powers manifest from his X-gene. He was taken in par a sly shape-shifter,...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
25 ways to piss off Fang.

1). Poke him and continuously and ask if he’s goth

2) Poke him between the wings then run away screaming “I TOUCHED A GOTH KID!

3.) Dye his hair rose while he’s asleep.

4.) Lock him in a room with bright rose walls. (And a barf bag)

5.) Take a toy couteau and ask Fang if he’s Lost his.

6.) Tell Fang that toi l’amour him.

7.) Hack into his blog and change his status
update too “I l’amour Hannah Montana.”

8.) Touch his hair (only Devin can)

9.) Give him McDonald’s chicken nuggets and tell him he’s eating his mom.

10.) When Fang appears kick his shins and say toi didn’t...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Iraq
5 years later
"Soldiers! toi are not in combat training anymore! Welcome to the real war, the real thing. We have some returning veterans to the battlefield." The commander turned and held out his hand to point at Derek. "Soldier Adams, thank toi for returning to battle. Your assistance is much needed" Derek nodded once and shifted his sniper rifle. Soldiers starting running and grabbing pistolets and ammo as the threat of a bomb filled the air from the radios. "ADAMS! Get to higher ground, use that sniper to take enemy targets down." Derek nodded and grabbed ammo and running out of the tent,...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
After the large round of laughter and ironic applause, not to mention Robin nearly fearing for his life, the team looked over to Delta for an explanation, although someone had an inclination on what it might be about.
Batman, who had since dried himself off and calmed down, picked up Kenzie, looking very innocent, making Batman himself look innocent in a very scary way. Delta sighed and picked up the wilted rose, twirling its stem between her fingers.
“I’m not sure exactly how to explain this,” she began. “But I know this is Fin, I can feel it. I used to...” She gave a half-hearted...
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My name is Red Hood. And here's a little information on me:

Gender: female

Alter Ego: Aeronwen Todd

Nickname(s): Red, Aeron, Aero (prefers Aeronwen)

Age:17

Known Locations: Gotham City, Blüdhaven

Personality: smart-ass, sarcastic, sly, intelligent, hot-tempered

Appearance: Black hair, green eyes, 5'10, 127 lbs

Civvies: black elbow sleeve bateau neck shirt, black loose jeans, belt

Powers: trained par Red capuche, hotte to use firearms, knives and multiple other weapons, higher resistance to injury then the average human, perfect aim/never misses unless purposely

Weakness: plus untrusting then Batman, proud,

Story:...
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posted by Skittles98
I landed near the Brother Hood’s building. I walked in, walking up the stairs. I threw open the doors. Blob was sitting on the couch, Toad on his head, Avalanche was sitting in an arm chair watching télévision and Quicksilver was playing pool.
“Domino, didn’t expect to see toi here again“Quicksilver stated
“Domino couldn’t make it, sorry. She sent me instead” I snarled, charging a card. I threw it on the billiards table, tableau and it exploded in Pietro’s face. I glared at him.
“You three-“ I gestured to Toad, Blob and Avalanche “-scram. I have some business with Quicksilver”...
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posted by Skittles98
“Wait, he’s your dad?” Wally finally managed
“Yes” I nodded
“And toi were hugging him because…?” Robin asked
“None of your beeswax!” I snarled
“Woah…touchy” he muttered
“I’ll montrer toi touchy mister ‘I’m so cool and awesome because Batman’s my mentor’” I muttered under my breath.
“Why didn’t toi tell us?” Wolverine asked
“Because it didn’t concern you. My family concerns Me, Kurt, Laurna, Laura, Wanda and Gambit. No one else” I growled
“Why does it concern them?” Aqualad asked
“Because they’re the closest the to family I have, aside from Gambit”...
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posted by BladeYJ
((I a dit these were going to get shorter...I lied....<3 sorry<3333))

The punching bag swung back and flew vers l'avant, vers l’avant only to be sent back again as I caught it with a hard kick. "Again," was the command that came from the form behind me. Normally, I'd just tell him to get off of it ou leave me alone, but the fact that this man had one hundred years of experience, was a vampire, and could easily rip me apart, pushed me to hike my foot back and slam it as hard as I could into the bag of sand. I heard the chain creak in agony as its limits were tested. "Good, again," Damian muttered, pulling...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Elizibeth Tumin (Liz) (Lizbeth)

Alias: unknown.

Age: 14 (would be 18 now)

Appearance: long blonde hair and brown eyes, hair usually worn in braid ou up (ponytail, bun)

Personality: she was stubborn and always thought she could do things on her own. she was Rebelle on the outside but was scared but never let anyone see it. She was never the one to smile so easily and be at ease. And she was never someone who Lost without a fight.

Powers/Abilities: she doesn't have any powers but combat and sword skills.

Weapons: a single sword.

Past: died in a break out gone wrong.

Others: she wasn't someone to let people into her life. But she cared if someone were sad ou upset.
posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Amara Federmen

Alias: none

Age:14 (but would be 18 now)

status: deceased

Relations: a sibling like relationship/ friendship to BloodMist.

Appearance: deep blue eyes, straight black hair that goes just goes down to her elbows, 5,6 and thin.

Powers/Abilities: she was never really confident in her fighting skills but tried hard for her team to be useful in battles. She had the ability to heal others with magic, though she is unable to heal herself.

Civvies: unknown.

Past: Misty and Amara met when they were both 14, BloodMist had wandered into a city that was a dit to be abandoned with hidden riches...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
((this takes places after the incident with Honesty in: The Power of the hexagone series."))
He fell to the floor eyes tightly shut as his back stunk from the impact of the fall. Nate, the purple eye and purple haired boy, sat up clenching his teeth from vexation as the combat panel painted in deep red the fail writing. It was the third time he was staring at that writing, but what arguer him the most was the one that made him face the letters.

He looked up seeing the most, in his opinion, disgusting creature with his death-black hair and blooded-red eyes extending his hand to put him from the...
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posted by khanna266
a an after Ari and Jaime started dating

Dick had let Jaime into Ari's room to wake her up so he shook her a little. Ari tossed her self facing away from him,"Come on amour wake up it's are one an anniversary today"he a dit to her."Mmm happy anniversary baby",she muttered under her breath"*chuckles* your so cute when toi sleep",
he laughed,"Will toi carry me downstairs please?",she asked speaking louder. Jaime
smirked and did as she asked.Once they got downstairs he sat her on the couch,"*yawns* thanks babe",Ari thanked him now wide awake
"No problem amour,"he smirked and gave her a Kiss on the...
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 A Goatrider
A Goatrider
( Oke, the archives of morte will be a series of articles in whist I will describe everything Thad has to do whit the lore of teyrions world thad I am creating truw this archives and further story's to come.)

Origin of the Riders:
The goatriders were a small group of bandits who fleeing fore the law ended up in the Kingdom of Morte were they advantly were couth par a patrol of King Tyrion Blackwell, the bandits feared fore tere lives expecting to be killed fore there crimes.
But Tyrion seeing Thad the bandits only a volé, étole to keep themselves and tere family's alive made them a offer, if they would...
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posted by Caitlyn_Grayson
 Caitlyn
Caitlyn
Name: Caitlyn Eleanor Grayson
Alias: BrightStar
Age: 14
Relationship to Team: Robin’s cousin
Appearance: Caitlyn is tall, about 5’6” ou 5’7”. She has straight blonde hair, a little longer than shoulder length, that she sometimes wears in a ponytail, and blue eyes (like those of her cousins Dick, Kyra, and Danna). She wears a blue t-shirt ou tank haut, retour au début and short-shorts (at least on sunny days).
Personality: Caitlyn is fun, funny, and always cheerful and in a good mood. She is very high energy, extremely practical and a good problem solver. She is confident, friendly, and really determined...
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posted by BladeYJ
"Blade?" His voice was stuck in his throat. Before him stood the girl he loved. She stared; her red orbs beyond vibrant, as her platinum hair drapped just below her shoulders, obviously grown out since he last saw her.

Since he last saw her?
The last time he saw her: She had blood-sucking fangs in place of canines.
The last time he saw her: She breathed the last ounce of air in her lungs to tell him,""I l’amour you.."
The last time he saw her: She died, and from then on, the only thing that was left of her was the harsh guilt sitting in his heart.

But now? Now she was in front of him, arms around...
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posted by GlitterPuff
January 2, 2108

Rene ran into the main room that everyone always hung out in and set out all of her items on the table. Julie chased behind her, confused beyond belief. When she reached the room, her mom had a liquid spilled onto her hands and he used it to draw a symbol on the floor.

"What are toi drawing?"

"A spell- Ah, it's too complicated to explain." She wiped the blueish purple color off on her red jeans and continued her work, grabbing different bottles and adding them to the spell formula. The sorceress grabbed a thick spell book and opened it, blowing off some dust before hand. "Damn...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Jessie
Jessie
So I did this awhile back so toi could get to know my ocs on a bit of another level but I revamped it so Jessie gets 2

Name: Jessie Bennett

Likes: Gardening

Best Friend: Joan (Alix Penn)

Loves: Animals

Dislikes: Poaching/Hunting

Worst Habit: Sleeping at her desk

Personal Secret: Is used to hurting herself for the need of others

favori Food: Anything Meat-Free (Vegetarian)

favori Color: Turquoise ou Jade

Code Name: None

Mentor/Inspiration: Poison Ivy

Relations: None

Base of Operations: JLA Headquarters

Personal Home: Garden of Eden
posted by Robin_Love
 Dalila
Dalila
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Dalila Summners
Nickname: Dali
Reason ou meaning of name: Dalila means “Gentle” in Egyptian
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Dark brown/black
Height: 5’ 7
Clothing Style: Ancient
Best Physical Feature: Skin

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: I have none
Your Guilty Pleasure: Scratches
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Loud barking dogs
Your Ambition for the Future: To thrive!

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Another 5 minutes won’t hurt
What toi Think About the Most: My partner
What toi Think About Before Bed: Finally some rest!
You Think Your Best Quality...
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posted by Robin_Love
She sat in the corner, hiding herself. Her mind reeled with everything she'd been through so far and all she could do was stare at the mur in her dark room. This was nothing like she had expected and with every passing moment, her cœur, coeur sank deeper and deeper into despair.
He led her down a flight of stairs, towards one of the buildings. She could hear their whispers, see their eyes on her, watching her like she was a menace. She felt chilled and everything inside her screamed to get out. But it was too late; she was led into the largest building and she cried out at what she saw. He turned...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name:

Alias: none

Age ( that he looks like this): 16

Appearance: white hair like a white lion, auburn eyes almost like the colour of burning fire, and sharp teeth like a shark.

Height: 6 feet

Powers/ Abilities: like his mothers shapesifting abilities he has the ability to shapeshifting, not into animaux but into a weapon like his father is because of his feu casting and hooks he uses to fight with.he can transform into a weapon using his body parts ( for example his arm as a scythe blade).

Relations: Tori's his mother, Jets his dad, Amara, Kai, and Daemian are considered cousins to him, Bentley,...
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