emo Pain

twilightlova13 posted on Jan 22, 2009 at 11:07PM
I wanted to put this in the Articles section but it wouldn't let me so...I kinda just put my feelings on paper! I hope you enjoy somewhat how i wrote it!


The beat in your heart
The breath on you lips
The tear in your eye
The blood on your wrist
I can feel the pain
The sorrow in your sobs
The lonely ache
I can feel the pain

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il y a plus d’un an iluvtheoffice12 said…
laugh
holy shit casey i love it its great
il y a plus d’un an twilightlova13 said…
laugh
BAHAH! Thanx wade! I laughed because it was only a few lines but it rly means something to me! The one(s) that you have wrote are GREAT too!=)
il y a plus d’un an latinlover said…
smile
nice its really good haha!!
il y a plus d’un an twilightlova13 said…
smile
Thank you!=)
il y a plus d’un an iluvtheoffice12 said…
its not about how small it is, itz bout how well its put together LOL