yea i made the titre to be something a little less opinionated, and plus open to other peoples opinon. so if toi agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! toi have got a serious problem, and toi are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, toi may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves toi UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do toi do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin l’espace girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, toi ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT toi DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that toi are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! toi have got a serious problem, and toi are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, toi may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves toi UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do toi do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin l’espace girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, toi ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT toi DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that toi are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
Well I tried to post this in the link section but it just didnt work so I figured that I would put it here...
Here is a link to a Twilight/New Moon extra- Being Jacob Black....
It is the story of Jacob from when we meet him first in Twilight until the end of New Moon. It is interesting.
link
Here is a link to a Twilight/New Moon extra- Being Jacob Black....
It is the story of Jacob from when we meet him first in Twilight until the end of New Moon. It is interesting.
link