True Writers Article: No plus licornes (Ch. 1)

posted by hgfan5602

This is my first fan fic... and hopefully I will be continuing on this! Enjoy!

My name is Alice. I'm eleven years young. My life has been all... licornes until this year. It's sort of like all the fun has been cut off from my life. Like adults and other people alike all want me to have a short childhood. It's strange, because it seems as if everyone else is having loads of excitement in their lives. But I'm the only one who is at home, trying not to cut myself everyday because of all the stress in my life. It's difficult not to, and I haven't spoke to anyone so far. I don't want to be sent to a mental hospital. I'm not mental.... am I? I think that's toi to decide and for me to find out.
All of this... drama started when a girl in our class named Stacy decided to write a note and send it to one of my BFFs, Skylar. It said, "Alice, Skylar, and Sarah... toi will definitely regret being mean to me in the end." The first thought that came to my mind was, "Why would anyone do that? Why would anyone say that? And seconde of all, her name is faded at the bottom of the note but it's still obvious to see. Why? Why? Why?!?! Stacy was my friend... ou at least I thought she was. Why would anyone think of something so pathetic... yet something so vengeful?"
Well it turned out that she told our teacher Mrs. Harris... and she blamed it on Skylar. I didn't understand. Now Stacy was also being immature and making fun of my other best friends' hairstyles, clothes, shoes, and much more! I mean, grow up! Seriously!! Not only that... Stacy was also crying to our teacher... and making a huge sob story out of it. I was pissed... and sort of sad at how my best friend changed so much. Oh, ou should I say ex best friend.

alicia386 What is this story based off of? You said it was a fan fic what story are your rewriting? Also, adorable title. The character seems a bit younger than eleven. When I was eleven the biggest thing to have ever happened was not unicorns, it was more along the lines of silly bands and who is the funniest. We were way past the unicorn stage. The story all together seems a bit fast paced as if we are rushing into a story instead of giving us more background information and then getting into the plot. Instead it is like we are jumping off a cliff and landing straight to the plot without barely any background information. All in all, it is a good start and a already interesting story. Is this a journal entry or chapter.

hgfan5602 Okay thanks for the feedback @alicia386! I will reconsider that... and maybe change some things on this story because I think it's not the best that it can be. Sort of need to revamp. But thanks! This is a chapter.. but I need some time to think about this... i'm not sure if i should continue or not

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The Story Of A Hero Named Kyle Part 2

posted by GirlzRule312

They all rushed to the hospital. "Kyle." they gasped. Kyle, with his blonde hair, scratches, bruises and broken Bones lyed under the white, soft, hospital blanket. The only sound that could be heard was the soft, quite sound of the cœur, coeur monitor beeping. They all went and sat suivant to his hospital bed. They all tried to hold back the tears. Summer gave in and tears streamed down her cheeks and on to the floor. Tiffany, Angus and Mariah burst into tears as well. James didnt, he didnt like to montrer emotion, no matter how sad he was. Even though he wasn't crying on the outside, they knew there were...

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The Inevitable Fate 16

posted by rory2011

while Kat cleaning the house ,she heard a weird voice coming from the corridor ,it looks like someone is eating there in a loud voice
she went to see what was there ,Mac was behind her when she saw a ghost for an old man eating himself
she looked scared and shock at the ghost ,the ghost of the old man looked at her , he was very angry ,he ran towards her fast while he's screaming and he was opening his papillon de nuit , he wanted to bite her ou maybe eat her
she screamed when he was almost got her but Mac's voice cut what she's seeing
" what are toi doing here ? " Mac asked
" I'm just a... I'm just cleaning...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.7

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
    7
    Zaria
    It was crazy, one minute we were just wandering aimlessly around looking fro the source of the noise and the suivant this…thing, comes out from nowhere. We ran like crazy, not bothering to look back, we Lost Alex in the way and we were freaking out.
    “Where did he go?!” Iris asks, freaked.
    I shake my head. “I don’t know.”
    I’m close to tears and Iris looks pale, all of a sudden we hear this roar, followed par a scream,...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel colline Chapter 21 'The finale'

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (21): 'The Finale'
She walked happily on her way accueil from school with a smile at everyone she saw in her way, suddenly she heard a twig snap right behind her, she turned and there was no one there she continued walking but she knew she had a feeling that something bad was going to happen and it just popped up every time she tried to ignore it, this time she heard the sound of footsteps other than her's on the herbe and every time she turned there was no one there, her fear was increasing every time she turned around and back again, she couldn't take it anymore she broke into a run...

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Coming Home: A Sons of Anarchy Fanfic Chapter 2 Part 2

posted by CapShunsuifan13

Both were silent for a long while, the minutes dragged par and Bobby swore he could see the entire scene playing across Husky's eyes, the same thing over and over again. A not so subtle cough brought him back to the living world, and he continued with his tale. "I woke up a couple days later, both Matt and Ethan were okay and alive, and I was damn lucky. In my act of bravery," he spat the word with such disdain and Bobby couldn't understand why. He thrown himself on an explosive device to save his men, if that wasn't bravery then what the hell was? "I managed to not even cover the IED, rather...

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The Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles (Part One)

posted by cuteypuffgirl

A/N: salut everyone, it's me again...sort of. Anyways, this will be a series of short stories...or shorter than short stories based on word prompts. So I'll post three in each part. And they'll be maybe around five ou six parts based upon user feedback :) Now I'm using several word prompts courtesy of Dhampires, hgfan5642 and several others :) I hope all of toi enjoy this.

A Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles

Prompt 1: Hate

When I see her with him, my blood boils. My mind is being supplied several mental images of her painful demise.

I hate her, despise her, loathe her with...

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Coming Home: A Sons of Anarchy Fanfic Part 2

posted by CapShunsuifan13

His mother set about straightening up the room, as he drifted into the bathroom, stripping down and climbing into the shower.
He turn the knobs, a feeling of instant security filling him as the water crashed down on his face. Something about a nice douche just made him feel safe. He hissed a bit as the scalding water poured ever him and into his open wounds, he thought he could hear his skin sizzle when the water pounded down onto the gash in his forehead. He could feel the dirt fall away, the scent of death all falling away and circling the drain below. It took him awhile to realize the water...

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Eye of the Beholder, Chapter 1

posted by 1999jacko

Fantasy

Water looked confused as the old man a dit all this,"w-what do toi mean wizard?" Walter a dit his mind full of questions for the old man. The old man answered quickly, his voice seemingly getting older as he went on," toi are wearing the clothes of a wizard and toi have a wand in your ceinture so that means your a wizard." The hard,heavy breathing coming from the old man got louder as Walter answered," but i'm not a wizard, sir," the man cackled and coughed. " Come through here boy and sit down, I can't stand for much longer," he a dit and started to lead the way out of the room, which Walter...

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Not Under Tyranny (rock song)

posted by hgfan5602

I will not be under your tyranny
Your cruel and oppressive force
Yes, maybe toi should be my leader
But that doesn't mean I should follow toi all the time

Do toi know he's got toi bound
Under ropes and chains of cruelty
Well, I don't wanna be a follower
If it means I have to be a killer

No, I'm not exactly kind-hearted
But that doesn't mean I have to kill, kill, kill
I don't wanna be just a senseless follower
I have a heart, I have a soul, so I don't follow you

I don't just wanna be a follower
So I don't give a fuck bout what toi do, do, do
But I myself will not give in to the tyranny
So you'll watch me leave

No one's gonna stop me
Look, I'm walking out the doors of tyranny
And I'm not gonna be a senseless follower
Ever again in my life.

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The Inevitable Fate 10

posted by rory2011

after a long jour of work , Kat came back to the house ,she stood staring at every single corner of the house
the house is almost empty ,she had to sell everything for the expansive painkiller that David taking ,the only thing left in the house is that little white chair , a blanket ,and her father's lit she knows that she can't make a life in that house , but she has to keep going strong till the last breath

it's a calm night ,David is sleeping ,Kat lire her favori book in her father's lit room
the bills ringing woke David up
" Kat ,that's Paul ,go and open the door " David a dit in pain...

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I Have Asperger's. So What? (Essay/Memoir)

posted by dragonsmemory

Only a few months ago, I was diagnosed with Asperger's Syndrome. Asperger's is one of many conditions that falls on the autism spectrum. Unlike truly autistic people, many Aspergians are excellent communicators…at least, if that's what your "gift" is. toi see, every Aspergian has a particular area where they excel. One could be a science genius, while another, such as myself, might be a brilliant writer.

Many Aspegians are either misdiagnosed ou never diagnosed at all. Our symptoms, are difficult to identify. Once, my mom went to the Child Study Team at my elementary school. She brought up...

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Charmed and Dangerous Ch. One

posted by alicia386

Spy Fiction

Chapter One: A Big Difference Between Normal and Reality

"Well, maybe if toi didn't yell so much then I would try to listen to you!" I gave Christina a dangerous stare that sometimes made her back off but not today. Today she had one too many to drink and decided to stand her ground. She knew what I was capable of but still she remained focus on me. "Then toi think toi could just stand here and pretend toi actually l’amour my father!"
Her bright grey eyes gleamed a little, almost like she was hurt par what I said. "I do l’amour him but toi are too conceited to realize the...

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The Inevitable Fate 9

posted by rory2011

David's health getting worse and worse after all these problems ,he can't understand anything happen around him ,he's screaming with Paul's name
it was very hard on Kat to see all that happening and she can't do anything ,this is the seconde time she feel of herself weak and pointless ,the only thing she can do is making her father's pain less with the tranquilizer

another hard thing for Kat is making money , her brothers won't help her anymore and her father is very ill ,she had to work in the hospice as a cleaner, she doesn't get much salary ,but she can buy cheap nourriture for her father and...

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The Inevitable Fate 7

posted by rory2011

Jack has left the house ,the silence occupied the house ,Paul having his breakfast slowly ,he can't think of the nourriture ou anything else ,he wanted to explain for David why he always out ,but he doesn't know from where should he start
Kat came with the pain and sat near Paul
" from how long toi know what was Jack doing ? " David a dit breaking the silence
Paul looked at Kat ,then he looked at his father
" you're late for your school young lady " Paul a dit
" it's only seven " Kat a dit
" toi heard what your brother a dit " David a dit
" bye " Kat a dit carrying her bag
" ok now we can talk " Paul...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel colline Chapter 18

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (18):
"It's possible" a dit Leo, "Or maybe not.." added Abbie, "What do toi mean?" asked Josh "We'll tell toi later" a dit Noah, "Right now we gotta go" he continued, "Ab,Leo" he a dit getting to his feet both Abbie and Leo did the same and headed to the door, Bonnie got to her feet and stood facing Noah, "Bye" she said, "Bye" replied Noah he leaned down and kissed Bonnie on the cheek, "See toi Abbie, toi too Abbie's best friend" a dit Josh, "My name is Leo" a dit Leo angrily, "Okay..bye Leo" a dit Josh sarcastically, Noah chuckled and let go of Bonnie's hand which he held tight after kissing...

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Longing For Cassie Chapter 2

posted by vampirefreak_26

“You know he’s trouble don’t you?” Sofia stood at the entrance to the cuisine looking at her daughter with her gray loup eyes. Cassie was used to her mother looking at her with those loup eyes when she didn’t approve of something. “I’m going upstairs to change, I’ll be right down for dinner” she could still smell Gabriel’s scent, she would never forget it, he smelled like a warm summer breeze and musk. The first time she saw him she felt a pull towards him, a pull she tried to ignore. It was too dangerous, even now, thinking of him made her mouth water. To get involved with...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel colline Chapter 16

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (16):
After Quickly changing into a black T-shirt with a picture of a sleepy face that a dit 'I got outta lit for this...', jeans shorts and a pair of boots Abbie ran downstairs to rejoindre her family and Leo for breakfast, "Good Morning!!" she a dit as she stepped into the kitchen, "Ahh..look who showed up" a dit Noah, "I thought toi were going to sleep in" he added, "Shut up" she a dit as she pulled a bottle of orange jus, jus de out of the fridge, "all right, I gotta jet, bye" a dit Noah getting to his feet, "Where are toi going?!" asked Abbie who choked on her orange juice, "A friend of mine,...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel colline Chapter 15

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (15):
Abbie stared at the spot where Lily had just vanished, and wondering wether she might actually montrer up to talk to her, she turned away walking behind her parents and her brother Noah, Leo walking suivant to her "I saw him, that boy" she said, "What boy?" asked Leo, "The boy in the gernie" a dit Abbie, "The one who almost died?" asked Leo again, "Yes and he did die par the way they just brought him back" replied Abbie, "Did Lily see him?" he asked curios plus than ever, "Yes, and he almost gave up if it weren't for her I would have been dealing with two ghosts not one" answered Abbie,...

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A Little Bit plus Than l’amour (Part 1, Chapter 1)

posted by dragonsmemory

THE EDEN CHRONICLES

BOOK ONE: A LITTLE BIT plus THAN LOVE

PART 1: TWERA AND THE PRINCE

Chapter 1

Kikikyo stared straight ahead as he flew. Clutched in one foreclaw was a book of centaurian poetry. His father, King Parthurnax, disapproved of the centaurian l’amour poems contained within the book.

"Love? Bah! In my day, we didn't have anything called love. toi modern dragons aren't tough," his father had a dit the week before. Kikikyo could remember thinking, <Here we go again. Another speech on how the ancient dragons were better.> Between his young son (at the tender age of ten-and-seven) and...

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The Inevitable Fate chapter 2

posted by rory2011

the last paper from Mary's life fall down ,she know why she will die ,it's not just because the money ,it's because she's a woman in a poor family in this terrible world ,but she can't do anything now
Mary put her sons in their beds wishing for them a good dreams ,her tear was in her green eyes ,her tear give her eyes sparkle

Mary and David thought that the kids are in a deep sleep ,so they took their chance to change their clothes and get ready to go when the sun will start to rise
Mary was looking at the sky from the window ,David were sitting suivant to her ,but his eyes were on the floor...