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NIGHTFALL: A NOVEL par AXEL MCCORMICK
Copyright: 2013

CHAPTER ONE:
CRYSTAL FALLS, MICHIGAN
FEBRUARY, 1850

The an is 1850. My name is Ashley Garland; I live in the small town of Crystal Falls, on the west coast of the United States. At the moment, I am being hunted, par what I do not currently know. All I know at present about my foe is that I fear for my life. In fact this whole ordeal has been about a week in the making. About a week ago, the people of Crystal Falls were gathered in the town hall, when a man suddenly began pounding on the door, pleading for help. After some of the citizens finally overcame their initial shock and opened the door, the man outside had collapsed to the ground, and was bleeding profusely from his neck. My father, the town’s doctor Richard Garland, immediately brought him accueil to give him a look-over. As my mother and I waited in the living room anxiously wondering if the man would be all right, my father worked tirelessly before coming out to tell us the man suffered from a neck wound, and was lucky to have survived at all. Yet at the same time, he was at a loss to explain what would cause such an epidemic like this. Ultimately, as the man did not regain consciousness, we decided to leave him in my father’s clinic overnight. However, after the incident, I had trouble sleeping, I had the suspicious feeling I was being watched, and I didn’t like it one bit, yet I could not for the life of me figure out what it was that was giving me the feeling. The following day, my father left early for the clinic, his night watchman had nothing to rapporter on the unconscious man who lay on a lit in the back of the clinic. The man did not regain consciousness for the rest of the day, but the whole town was anxious to know what it was that had attacked him. My father made a leap of logic that a dit the bite mark appeared to be human, but this information caused somewhat of a panic. The town was wondering who in their right mind would attack a man like it had happened. The answer, it seemed, would remain a mystery until the man regained consciousness, if that ever would occur, which according to my father was doubtful at best. Still, he had rationalized, it was only a guess. And the area that had been bitten had two marks that would be too deep for human teeth to break the skin without the others following. For the moment, people seemed to calm down about the incident, but still curiosity remained amongst the townspeople. That night, I got the sensation once plus that I was being watched. I kept telling myself it wasn’t so, but I still felt the feel of eyes creeping over me. The following morning, I awoke to find the window of my bedroom wide open, despite knowing that I had shut it the précédant night, I shrugged it off, thinking against hope that the wind had blown it open. The jour went par uneventfully, and my father tended to his other patients, however it was becoming increasingly evident at accueil that he was fascinated par the wound’s origin, and as the man had still not regained consciousness, it was still very much a mystery what had happened to him, except that he had Lost a lot of blood over a short period of time, still, this news only made the townspeople plus uneasy, although it would turn out to be nothing like it would be over the suivant few days. That afternoon, I walked down to the coast, and spent the entire rest of the jour hearing rumors from the townspeople about what had caused the bite, and human ou not, was the attacker still around nearby? All the rumors made me somewhat uneasy, as dusk finally arrived; my mother came and got me from the coast, telling me my father would be working in the clinic overnight, and that she didn’t want me out after dark until there was an explanation for the attack. As we walked back home, I felt a pair of eyes locked on me, there was nobody nearby, so I decided that that was impossible. Still, I couldn’t shake the feeling. Once we got home, I a dit goodbye to my parents and before climbing into my bed, closed and locked the window. That night, I began having dreams where I was being chased par something; much like the situation I am in at this very moment, however in my nightmares, the thing chasing me was VERY inhuman. Once I awoke the fourth morning, I immediately checked my window, and found it was closed this time, but one thing still remained, the lock was not latched as I had made certain of the night before. I immediately decided to let my parents know of the incident. Once I went downstairs however, my mother explained my father was at the clinic, as it seemed that his latest patient had finally responded somewhat to treatment. par somewhat, it meant that he had not yet gained consciousness at present, but it could mean his full recovery was not far off, and in a way, it wasn’t. After another sleepless night passed, this time without incident, my father came accueil early, telling my mother that the man had finally regained consciousness. The three of us walked to his clinic, and the first thing I noticed was the crowd outside the building. It seemed that everyone in town was there, anxiously awaiting any news from the patient. My father walked into the clinic, and motioned for us to follow him. Before shutting the door, he addressed the crowd. “My patient needs rest. Any news on his situation will be revealed whenever he feels he is able to talk about it. Good day.”
With that, the townspeople reluctantly returned to their homes ou work ou wherever they were needed. My mother and I followed my father into the back of the clinic. The only other person in the room was my father’s assistant Perry, who smiled upon seeing us. “He’s Lost consciousness again Dr. Garland. But this time it seemed it was because of exhaustion.” “Thank toi Perry. Did he say anything?” Perry nodded. “It didn’t make any sense. He a dit a man attacked him, but… it wasn’t human... exactly…” My father nodded. “Thank toi Perry. But you’re right. That doesn’t make any sense at all.” Perry nodded. “I’m sorry. Maybe he’ll remember plus when he wakes up.” he replied. With that, Perry left the room. “It really is nice to see toi again Mrs. Garland.” He said, addressing my mother, before turning to me. And of course toi too. Ashley. par the way, I’m sorry I didn’t make your birthday party. How old are toi again?” he asked. “Seventeen.” I replied. Perry nodded. “Well happy birthday. I’ll send toi your belated birthday present soon. I insist.” Before I could say anything, he had left the clinic. My father examined his patient again. “What happened to the marks on his neck?” I asked him. “They’re gone. I’ve never seen anything like it. They disappeared when he woke up this morning.” ”It’s bizarre.” My mother noted thoughtfully. After awhile, Perry came back to see us. “Dr. Garland, another person has been attacked!” My father immediately stood up. “What do toi mean?” he asked.
Perry hesitated before answering. “Same marks in the neck, except…” he struggled to find the words. “Except what?” asked my father. “He’s dead. Completely drained of blood.” He trailed off again before speaking. “It was Douglas.” He replied. “You’re telling me that Douglas Groves, the MAYOR of this town, is dead?” he asked. Perry nodded. “They found him just after dusk.” My father looked positively spooked par this news. “Wait here.” He a dit to my mother and me before turning to Perry. “Perry, keep them safe. I’m begging you.” Perry nodded without a word. My father turned to us. “I’ll be back as soon as I can.” He said, before walking out the door. I noted Perry lock it before he left. My mother suggested I go to sleep, until my father came back. Seeing as it was now around ten o’clock, I agreed, not knowing that it would be the last time I would see her. Around one I awoke in the lit my father kept in the back for Perry, who did not have a accueil of his own in town. I immediately felt that something was wrong. I called for my mother. No answer. I called again, no answer. I called for Perry. No answer. Feeling helpless, I climbed out of the lit and walked out into the hall. I immediately noted the blood on the floor near the entryway. Racked with fear, my mind was unsure of what to expect as I walked down the hallway dreading what I already guessed what was on the other end of the door. My fears were realized as I looked into that room and saw two bodies on the ground. My mother on the right, her neck torn into and bleeding out, Perry’s to the right, basically torn into so bad I was amazed that there was still blood dripping from his neck, and par that I mean that there was any blood left to drip out at all. My mother stared into my eyes, attempting to speak. “Asssshhhllleeyyy…” she gasped, it seemed to me she was pleading. “I’ll get dad.” I yelled frantically, and to my surprise, she beckoned me to come back. “Don’t let him get you…” I watched in horror as her eyes closed for the final time, and she went limp. I turned and looked at Perry, lying motionless in a pool of his own blood. He was already dead, I realized. I got up to leave, when I saw someone blocking the door. Their eyes were yellow, and the teeth… my god, the teeth… I’d never seen anything like them. I knew I was in immediate danger, and that I wasn’t getting out that way. Blindly, I turned and ran back through the hallway I’d just come through a moment ago. I ran to the back room, and blocked the door with a chair, before climbing out the window in the room. As I raced into the woods behind the building, I heard the chair I’d used to block the door smash into pieces behind me. As I got deeper into the woods, I thought I’d Lost my pursuer, only to hear the footsteps still following me. This pretty much sums up how I got into this situation in the first place. Do I glance behind me? I ponder. Ultimately, I decide to take a look. This is a poor choice, within secondes I crash into a tree. I collapse to the ground, filled with pain, I lose track of how long I lay in pain there on the floor of the forest. For all I know, I Lost consciousness at some point. I am not sure. After awhile, I realize I have to try to get moving again. I try and fail to pull myself to my feet; I nearly try again before I hear the footsteps again. “Ashley!” calls out a voice. A familiar voice. Yet at the same time, I know it is not possible, for the person the voice belongs to is dead… Suddenly, I hear a snapping sound. A screech I know I’ll never forget fills the night. Then, I hear the footsteps again, this time at a slower pace. “Ashley!” calls the voice. I look up, and wonder if I’m still lying in the lit in the backroom dreaming, because the person I see is Perry. He offers me his hand. I take it and allow him to pull me to my feet. “You… How’re you?”
I stutter. Perry shrugs. “He just knocked me down is all.” He replies. “Who? Who was it chasing me?” I ask him. “Your dad’s patient.” He says. But don’t worry about him now. He’s dead.” I am at a loss for words. “But you… toi were dead! Your neck, I was ripped open I saw it!” Perry’s smile fades. “You saw that?” he asks. When I nod, his expression turns dark. “Dang it.” He mutters. “That patient, what WAS he Perry?” Perry turns to me. “You want the truth Ashley?” I nod, and he sighs. “You know what Ash? I’m not hungry anymore, so I guess I’ll cut toi a break. But at the same time, I can’t let toi go. Not after this. See where being nosy gets you?” I stutter. “What do toi mean ‘hungry’?” I ask. Perry sighs, and before I can do anything, I am pushed back against the tree. The pain from before returns, and I find myself unable to move. As I gasp for breath, I feel an even worse pain in my neck. Then everything goes black…
Chapter 15
Sleeping in
    I yawned as I raised my head from the security of my lovely pillow, expecting the lovely outputting couleurs of my lit room I was surprised to see creepy bright white paint on the walls, with no pictures whatsoever.
    I jerked up from my position and noticed I was on one of those things in the doctors office the kid gets to sit on for whether it was for a check-up ou sickness, I quickly calmed down when I realized I was in the nurse’s office, our lovely nurse was on her computer typing, and I noticed a familiar pretty girl sleeping...
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posted by alicia386
I made these collages a while il y a and i have got to share them with you.




















































For some odd reason this things wont let me post it unless my article is longer so i am trying to make it longer. Just wasting l’espace here. I understand





































Will Bella ever stop loving Edward? Will Peeta ever cheat on Katniss? These questions and plus will be answered after these messages.

































K-Stew and Rob are OVER. Well, she did cheat on him with a MARRIED MAN WHO HAS KIDS.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantaisie :) Sorry for the mishap, fixed it!~
Chapter 34
        A way of escape
    Though I wanted to scream and fight, it was of no use, if we really were far away I’d just be making useless noises. Jess had taken everything out of my pockets, my phone, money, all that stuff. But she was merciful enough to give me entertainment, a tv stood on the far corner of the basement, it was on the news channel, and I kept it there for a daily update.
    It was worse than I thought.
    Mom’s...
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posted by Problematic129
    ~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantaisie :)~
Chapter 30
    Confusing sensations
    As soon as those words were uttered the world became weird. I felt weird, light headed, like I was flying ou something. I could hear screaming and shouts, they were so loud, and yet I couldn’t hear what they were saying.
    My eyes felt to heavy to open, and my head started to hurt just the faintest. Even though it felt like secondes when this weird sensation hit, I knew it was only minutes.
    I could distinctly...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Twelve

WE UNRAVEL THE LAYERS THAT PROTECT US FROM PAIN AND MISERY AS WE GET TO KNOW YOU. -Erica

      "You lie to me!" a dit my demon as he threw the spirit of Emma through the door. How he threw a transparent object through a solid object, I will never know. I do know that Emma was whimpering as she she laid motionless on the floor. I appeared from the bibliothèque before realizing that I wasn't suppose I be there anyways. Hopefully. He would be too focused on Emma to notice my mistake. "You a dit she would be here and she isn't! toi let her escape!"
      Emma's face was planted on the...
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posted by 1999jacko
[So your back for plus are toi young ones, well as long as toi don't interrupt I'll tell toi the suivant part.] Sam sat in the headmasters office staring at a still unconscious Drake, while the actual head master stood ripping Jake to pieces for putting canard, drake ' under' as he put it. Jake was sinking down into his chair, the fear of the head clearly montrer on his face trying to say," b-but he wouldn't co-" but toi could see the head just wasn't having any excuses. "JAKE GET OUT OF MY SIGHT NOW, I'LL DEAL WITH toi LATER!" the heads booming voice shouted at Jake, and Jake took his chance to run out...
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crime

Detective James Whitaker stood at the homicide scene, inspecting the body as thoroughly as he could, until he figured out what had happened. With all the forensic scientists gathered around him he started to tell them what had happened," well what happened was the killer was chasing the girl through the forest, and the girl tripped up and the killer slowly walked oveeer." James made his way swiftly through the branches and twigs until he reached a large arbre and took 3 steps forward, and then continued." Here, he raised his gun and aimed at the head and shot then ran as fast as he could...
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posted by Problematic129
In case were still doing genre~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantaisie :)*
Chapter 26
    The club of doom and popularity
    “Glad toi guys could all make it,” Meredith said, grinning like a Cheshire cat. “As toi know I’ve called toi all girl’s because the jour has finally arrived!”
    All the girl’s around us squeal, I try to contain my excitement but my bright grinning face is a dead give away.
    We’ve been waiting for this moment for a long time, ever since we’ve sat at that ‘cool table’ ou as...
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The dark shadows of the 5 tall men faintly lay on the mur of the old abandoned factory. Among those men was the Killer and the Leader of the group of men, but it was neither of them speaking it was the newest and most deadly member, who was trying to push himself into the spot of the killer of the group and push the old one out." Listen to me guys sure he got the job done and it was a clean job but he should of waited until the suspicion of us had moved on before killing her." He turned his attention to the leader and continued," if toi had donné me the job I would of waited because she didn't...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 11
                Game on
    “So I’ve been knocking on the door for ages,” Talia shrieks. “But toi never answered! Never! And you’re here! And Beth’s here!”
    One thing toi learn to not like about Talia, is that she never talks normal, yelling is her normal level of voice.
    “Oh…” I stall until a brilliant plan comes to me. “Beth and I were listening to musique quite loudly, getting ready for our sleepover with the girl’s...
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posted by campcheerio123
I did not write this song; all credit goes to Lenka

Underneath the moon,
underneath the stars
Here's a little cœur, coeur for toi
Up above the world,
up above it all
Here's a hand to hold on to
But if I should break,
if I should fall away
What am I to do?
I need someone to take
a little of the weight
Or I'll fall through
You're just the one that I've been waiting for
I'll give toi all that I have to give and more
But don't let me fall
Take a little time,
walk a little line
Get the balance right
Give a little love, gimme just enough
So that I can hang on tight
We will be alright,
I'll be par your side
I won't let...
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Chapter Eleven

      Dakota had learned a long time il y a that the hospital always monitored their patients and the ins and outs of the hospital to make sure everything was safe. This gave her the idea that maybe if she could somehow belette the footage out of the nurse's computer, then she would have a tape of Hazel Portwood admitting to the murders for Abigail and Gwendolyn Dalton. This could hopefully get Connor out of jail. It was a long shot and not very well planned out but Dakota had to take the chance.
      She sprinted back to the hospital hoping that they hadn't done anything to...
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Paul Dock is in the New York airport from plus than an hour. They've Lost his bag. He sigh, because he hate airplans and big cities and now he has to ours both. He was born in a little part of New Jersey that he wouldn't leave. But he couldn't refuse his niece invitation to her wedding day. he came there with a week of advance because his nice told him that New York is a city toi have to visit once in your life. When someone of the staff brings him the bag, he looks at him in a such bad way. He get out of the airport with just a warm bath in his mind. When he finally get the hotel, cold got...
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It's time to take the dance floor
NOW
As we hold hands
We jump up and down
And we swish across the dance floor
Like never before.

Oh it's time to take the dance floor
And it's gonna be now ou never
Cuz a Kiss isn't gonna wait forever
We're just gonna Kiss right now and dance

If you're right for me
I'll know if it is
Just tell me so
And I'll pull toi across the dance floor
Like never before

RAP
---------------------------------------------
Uh-huh
Get the DJ goin' now
Turn it up a bit
Get the disco ball out

No, no
My boyfriend and I don't want Celine Dion
So hurry up now and change the song
Yeah,...
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"Wh- what are toi two doing here?" I asked backing away as they walked toward me.

"Just wanted to drop in on our favori little Demon." smiled Eliza. Sweat beat from my forehead, I felt cold very cold.

"Your shaking like a leaf Katy." Jarred smiled and pinned me against the wall, he starred into my eyes his mouth played an evil smirk as he came closer then changed his course to my ear and he laughed. That voice I had once admired—became venomous lighting a spark of hatred in me. "Damn your still that little girl from so many years before, toi still fear me." he chuckled and continued,...
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Yeah Uhuh
Yeah Uhuh
Yeah Uhuh

(Verse 1)
I am in l’amour
with the guy who is sweet
till we meet it isn't possible

(Chorus)
We need to meet
before we go Undercover
for each other
We need to meet
before we go Undercover
for each other

(Verse 2)
We haven't met yet
Still Single hearted
thinkin' 'bout each other
everyday

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
Now & Then
Everyday, going separate
paths and ways
thinkin' we need to meet
in the middle before we go Undercover

(Pre-Chorus)
We never stopped goin'
separate paths and ways
passing broken hearts and scars
I'm gone, gone, gone, gone
Now,

(Chorus)

(Chorus)

I can't stand it any longer
goin' all crazy
when I get really lazy
Undercover

(Verse 1)

We need to meet before we go Undercover
posted by hgfan5602
Slowly,
Hand in hand,
We stroll towards the beautiful beach,
Never taking our eyes off the red sky.

We are together now,
And we face anything that will take us on,
With determination and unity,
Slowly.

The wave washes us into the ocean,
Taking us in,
Slowly, killing us bit par bit,
But we never let go of each other.

When we are together,
We will never die.
There is no chance of that,
It is impossible.

The power of being together
Surges into both of our souls,
And the angry waves crash against
Our faces,
But we still never let go.

We are undivided.
Nothing, ever, can keep us apart,
ou even separate us.
Because, toi see,
We are bound.

We are bound
par the ropes of love,
Forever.
Nothing,
No one,
Can cut those ropes.
Not now,
And not ever.
posted by IlovePatch97
I look down at the snow below
Thinking of its familiar glow

I remember the trees that tore at my wet clothes
And the horrid wind that stung my nose

I tripped and had fell to weak to move
Thinking I had nothing to lose

My eyes began to close and I started to drift away
My mind refusing to disobey

It took me par the hand and I felt warm
Almost glad to be taken par the storm

Now I watch from up above wondering what I did wrong
And why I was one chosen to sing the anges song
posted by sawfan13
Chapter 2




The suivant morning, Ginny and Promise were making breakfast, as Shawna was smoking a cigarette, dressed in
her usual phony Goth get up, trying to look as bad cul, ass as possible (she didn't. Of course it could never work. She was a spoiled brat from Philadelphia who won a ton of beauty contests from age one to about age eighteen.) Though, years of smoking and losing weight had made her not very beautiful at all. She always looked like she was starving and never wanted to eat. Her teeth were stained and rarely brushed. She had a hateful attitude and would hurt people without consequence. Ginny...
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My l’amour so beautifully bound in robes of scarlet hue
With nails so black scraping away at rotting church pews
I tell toi I l’amour toi plus than myself
But to understand, from me toi shall receive neither money nor wealth
What toi chercher for is not emotion ou passion, it’s much plus precise
It’s the golden fortune which comes with a price
So toi take the deal and strike my head
Your beating heart, now made of lead
Allow me the peace of mind to soften the last deadly blow
Perhaps this is how our story ends of toi the Raven and I the Crow



(Crows and Ravens, in European legends are known to symbolize death)