True Writers Article: A Death in the Forest, Chapter 2

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posted by 1999jacko

crime

Detective James Whitaker stood at the homicide scene, inspecting the body as thoroughly as he could, until he figured out what had happened. With all the forensic scientists gathered around him he started to tell them what had happened," well what happened was the killer was chasing the girl through the forest, and the girl tripped up and the killer slowly walked oveeer." James made his way swiftly through the branches and twigs until he reached a large arbre and took 3 steps forward, and then continued." Here, he raised his gun and aimed at the head and shot then ran as fast as he could away."Every single scientist stood shocked, their mouths wide open.

After about 2 minutes one shook out of it and said," sir, how could toi possibly know all that?" James stared intently at the scientist until explaining himself," well Jameson, if toi must know. Behind me are a set of footprints where the killer would of stood, then just below that buisson, bush over there a but of a gun is sticking out, so he would of dropped the weapon on the run. So that's how I know... please toi Jameson."As Jameson nodded, with only the slightest bit of embarrassment showing, James decided to montrer just how cool he is par leaning against the tree. Just as he lent back though he missed the arbre and, with a squelch, landed in the biggest pat of dog poo any of them had ever seen.

Jameson lead the laugh at James, but not for long as James stood up heaving with anger and shouted," JAMESON! shut up and pick up that gun now!" no movement was made apart from the laughter died down." JAMESON we don't have all jour so hurry up and PICK IT UP!" his face going red with embarrassment Jameson ran to pick the gun up from the bush.James knew that always works with the scientists so after all the commotion and died down and his manteau cleaned they all went to work identifying the victim, getting DNA and looking for any evidence in the surrounding area.

meanwhile at the old, abandoned factory...
John stood against the mur waiting for the killer to get here. He had his pistol loaded ready for anything, par the time the killer got there John had his best fake smile on and his gun behind his back."Hey Ron." John a dit to the killer, the killer, called Ron, a dit salut back but then all hell went down." Guess what the pigs found earlier today?... no guess's well I'll tell toi your gun." John a dit as everyone else including the leader stepped into the line of view all with pistols in their hands. " I'm sorry Ron but we have to kill toi now otherwise we all go down." John a dit as they all raised their pistolets to Rons' head, then the triggers went off and Ron instantly died with a étoile, star shape placed in his brain.

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Confessions of Laurie B. Ch.10

posted by alicia386

Thursday

Kyle is the worst boyfriend ever! The party ended with me in a coma. Apparently there was alcohol in my drink. I had an overdose and it almost killed me. Kyle swears he didn't do it. I want to believe him. I really want to. I know Kyle had done it because I know saw him poor something in there. At first I thought it was water ou something to make it sweeter. It wasn't water. I couldn't go to school today because they were pumping the alcohol out of my system ou something. I'm not entirely sure what happened. All I know is that for a couple if minutes I was pronounced dead. My heartbeat soon started thumping again but I was in a coma. My parents were so worried. I thought for sure they would be dead from shock. Kyle is banned from coming near me. My dad implied that rule. My mom kept crying whenever she talked to me. All she could manage to get out of her mouth besides whimpers were muffled words. I don't think I'll be seeing Kyle for a while now.

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Freak Revolution

posted by BlondLionEzel

Chapter 1

The suivant day, a knock came on the door.

"Is it them??" Lucy asked frantically.

Emily went to the door, and answered it.

"Hello!" Nick Wolfe, a half loup male a dit to the surprised Emily.

"Who are you???" Emily asked Nick Wolfe in a surprised manner.

"Well...I am Nick Wolfe, I go to every Hotel and free it's captured mutants" Nick answered in a very egotistical way.

"Oh?" Emily asked curiously.

"Is Nick Wolfe the god?" Lucy asked her mother.

"Well..." Emily tried to respond. Emily had felt that it would be right to talk to Nick Wolfe first, and then tell Lucy.

"You can think of me as whatever...

Invisible/Invincible

posted by alicia386

What a change Such a dramatic change

Once I was small and ignored

Now I'm called when their bored

ou looking for a friend

To talk to till the end I use to be invisible

Now I feel invincible

They can't hurt me

Look at what I can be

This is new

Something almost true

That great feeling

Was somewhat appealing

But soon disappeared

Whenever I neared

Now I am small

No longer tall

Completely ignored

Always bored

It happened so fast Invisible in the past

Then became invincible

And immediately back to invisible

It changes everyday I don't know what to say

Maybe it won't stay the same

I'll be forever lame

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Freak Revolution

posted by BlondLionEzel

Prologue

It is the an 2468, Half-Animal, Half Human beings have been captured and locked up in facilities called "Hotels". They are experimented on and live in small cages. But the mutants believed there would be a god who would bring them salvation. And in a place called Hotel 93, the legend would come true.

"Mommy...I'm really scared..." A young Half Snake Girl told her Half Snake Mother. She had rose hair, a green tail and brown eyes.

"I am too Lucy..." The Half Snake Mother told Lucy. This mother's name was Emily, she had blond hair and a Diamond Rattleback snake pattern tail, and green...

Kidnapped

posted by BlondLionEzel

Chapter 3

Nick was now adjusted to his life as Melanie's sex slave. Last Monday, Melanie pinched his nipples and got on haut, retour au début of him. Today was different though.

"Nick...I was thinking..." Melanie asked Nick, "Do toi want to go hardcore?".

"Hardcore? What do toi mean?" Nick asked Melanie.

"Well...I'll montrer you..." Melanie responded as she took off her shirt, causing Nick to blush.

"Do toi like what toi see?" Melanie asked Nick, noticing his blush.

"Yes I do..." Nick responded shyly.

"Good!" Melanie a dit as she quickly took off her bra, revealing a pair of huge, green, D cup breasts.

"Oh my god..." Nick...

Confessions of Laurie B. Ch.6

posted by alicia386

Friday

L. J can make me so mad sometimes. Today he told me to stay away from Kyle. I asked him why and he a dit that Kyle was not the guy I thought he was. I told him to elaborate but he just shrugged his shoulders. How dare he tell me to stay away from the cutest guy ever? Besides, we have like 7 days left in school before summer comes. I probably won't ever see Kyle again. I need to make my déplacer soon. Forget what L. J said. With the thought of L. J in my head, I walked up to Kyle and kissed him on the lips! Yes, I know that was wild and crazy and stupid. Trust me, the minute I realized what...

Confessions of Laurie B. Ch.4

posted by alicia386

Sunday

My mom and dad are atheist so I don't have to go through the constant struggle of attending church once a week ou those annoying pastor and church anniversaries. Today I decided to go to the mall with my Friends Jennifer and L. J. The relationship between my two Friends is a very complicated one. For starters, everyone thinks they hate each other. Then there are times when toi think they are flirting. I doubt they are ever going to get back together, but it is fun to watch their famous disputes. Today they were talking about Kyle. Jennifer was saying how much she believes that Kyle is...

Confessions of Laurie B. Ch.1

posted by alicia386

May

Wednesday

This is obviously my first blog. I really don't know what to write about. Maybe I can start with some identification. Hello, my name is Laurie Bailey. This is my last an in middle school. I won't go into too much detail about my location because I don't want creepy men looking for me. Well, anyways, I guess that is a good first blog. My sister, Velvet, thought I should express my feelings so I don't go walking around with unsettled feelings. I think she might believe I am going to strangle someone because I'm angry. Velvet bought me a journal and I was like blogging is so much...

Abandoned

posted by sadiebugz00

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ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective

A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees...

Abandoned

posted by sadiebugz00

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TORN
Derek’s Perspective

I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. I look around my extremely messy room with dirty clothes all over the floor. Carter happens to be sleeping on a few shirts of mine. My eggshell colored walls, which used to be white, are clearly covered in grime. There is a strong stench of wet dog, pizza, and some kind of rotting nourriture from underneath my bed. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind...

Avalon Pt.2 Ch.1

posted by alicia386

"Oh god," groaned Luca Edgewood. He glanced at his watch,. It was already past 8am. He dropped his skateboard, got on it, and rode away down the busy streets of Brunswick.

"Be careful today!" His mother shouted at him through the screen door, but he was to far to hear her warning. Lucas's mom was very suoerstitious woman who believed in witches, ghosts other Supernatural creatures. Luca thought all of this happened when his dad left.

Luca pushed back hard as he could with his right foot. He was already late. With all of his focus, he was barely able to dodge pedestrians, seeding cars, and occasionally,...

I don't know what to call this but it's the prologue of my new story :)

posted by Weasel1999

Prologue

The sun is just minutes from rising and the night is growing lighter. An alter made entirely of blue marble, jade, and amethyst is illuminated. Two tiny bébés lie on haut, retour au début writhing and screaming in discomfort. They are naked, only a few days old and the chill of the stone slowly seeping into their Bones will surely kill them. The larger of the two will not stop screaming while her twin just sobs quietly.
Their frail mother stands a few feet away determined to finish what she came here to do but her eyes are bloodshot and red raw from her constant tears. But she is not alone. Her husband...

war for freedom chapter 1

posted by juliet98

In the an 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied par a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone Lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It a dit that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...

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100 rooms prologue (should I continue?)

posted by Weasel1999

Prologue
She never knew she had an uncle until her parents died. It’s strange how- sometimes in life when toi lose important people in your life toi gain some more.
Her mother and father died in a house fire. No one knew how it started except the one daughter who managed to survive.
But she was in no state to tell. She suffered mild burns but her mind suffered worst of all. She never spoke again.
She was kept in hospital for six months but eventually she was packed off to her uncle Scipio. She was thirteen years old and many a dit it was a crime sending a child off to such an evil man as Scipio....

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Princess Elizabeth chapter 1

posted by riehlemarie

Once there lived a normal middle school girl, ou so she thought.She had long brown hair, green with a hin of blue eyes. Her name is Elizabeth. Elizabeth's mother, Rebecca, has blond hair, and blue eyes. Elizabeth always pondered about it.

When Elizabeth was 5 years old she asked her mom about it. Rebecca had to think fast so she made up a little story for Elizabeth so she wouldn't want to ask about it. So Rebecca told Elizabeth "Lizzie", [ Elizabeth's nickname] " toi look just like your daddy, but daddy left us." Rebecca thought Elizabeth would be fine without knowing the truth, that Elizabeth...

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The Dragon Princess

posted by BlondLionEzel

Chapter 3

Lawrence and The Dragon Princess now were thinking about their relationship, as they heard screaming outside.

"How dare toi take Lawrence away from people!" Adele yelled as the Townsfolk started to break down the walls!

The Dragon Princess had been taught Love, Compassion, and other nice things while with Lawrence, but now, she had just seen red. She attacked the Townsfolk.

"I shall destroy you, Bloodthirsty Beast!" Adele roared as she slashed the Dragon Princess!

"No..." The Dragon Princess thought about her doom, and that she would really never have true love.

"Now...to finish what i...

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toi Can Never Have Everything ou Tales of a Group of Outcasts Chapter Ten

posted by Sylvia_Puffin

Zoë
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I stormed down the steps, into the closest empty classroom, and over to someone’s seat. Then I sat down, buried my face in my hands, and sobbed.
    “Why are toi such a jerk, Ash?” I yelled at the ceiling. There was a faint echo.
    I jumped to my feet. The chair crashed to the ground. I kicked it as hard as I could.
    “You okay?” someone asked.
    I jumped, spun around. Lisa.
    “I’m fine,” I...

Pyscho Path

posted by Bluekait

If toi pick a type of horror story, I'll do a shout out. If toi haven't, here's a link:

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For any inspiring horror story fan can gladly vote here:

link
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Avery ran into the woods. Without looking back, she knew she was being chased par an un-natural force. She ran to the hut and locked the door behind her. Avery heard a loud thud. "Phew," she sighed. She climbed into lit and slept. The suivant morning, she was found dead at a gruesome sight.
Her head was found outside and the rest of Avery Wilson was nowhere to be found.
Her Friends followed her steps to see...

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A Witch's Crown (short story)

posted by alicia386

I was sitting in a wooden chair surrounded par strangers and my grandmother. The last thing I remember I was in my Alegebra class when I was called to the office. My grandmother was there with two other ladies. My grandmother a dit to get in the car and to not ask questions. I did what I was told and ended up here.

"Do toi think she has the power, Grace?" A short woman with dyed light blue hair looked to my grandmother for answers.

"I am postive," replied my grandmother. "She ahs been montrer signs since she was baby."

"Her mother failed to cut her powers off." A man suivant to my grandmother shook...

toi Can Never Have Everything ou Tales of a Group of Outcasts Chapter One

posted by Sylvia_Puffin

Note: There's some language, so if that sort of thing offends you, then don't read it.
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I screamed as someone grabbed me from behind and lifted me into the air. I dropped my fake leather bag and my unzipped denim veste almost fell off as my black high-tops swung out in front of me. Then whoever had grabbed me plopped me back on the ground, where I fell ungracefully onto my ass.
I tipped my head back, squinting against the bright lights in the school hall. Someone grinned down at me. I took in their features: dirty blond hair hanging...