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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 13
        Payback and revenge, a bad combination
    It was a few hours after the doctor showed me my gray hair, and I felt spooked. I couldn’t have been that stressed, could I?
    I ate extra plus nourriture than my normal amount, and went to sleep earlier than just staring at the clock willing time to run faster. I closed my eyes and felt the calm relaxation of sleep grab me quickly, I opened my eyes and saw that I was lying down in a beautiful herbe field.
    I rubbed my eyes, looking around, perplexed.     Was this a vision?
    If it was, I hadn’t had dream visions in a while. I stood up from the ground and dusted myself off. It was then a got a great view of what I was wearing. Instead of the hideously robe that reminded me I was in the hospital, I wore a short simple white dress. It went all the way to my knees, and made my blonde hair look golden.
    I was barefooted, I also wore no jewelry. Was I in someone’s memory? I heard a shout from afar, I froze for about half a second, before following it quickly.
    It lead me to a forest, the branches scratching me and dress, I huffed in frustration but kept on following the way I heard the voice. I felt pain in my arm, but I had to ignore it.
    I had to know who that voice belonged to.
    After a few minutes, I found myself running through the forest, as if I was being chased…or is I were doing the chasing. Then I heard a shout and a scream, I could pleas, then I heard laughter. Girl’s laughter. I took a step. One minute I was taking a step in the forest, the suivant I took a step in a clearing with a large lake.
    There were five stunning girls standing with cruel smiles as they giggled at a moving bag, whoever was in there was wreathing, screaming. At first I thought the girl in the bag was my sister, I thought this was how she died, but then I looked plus closely and realized my sister was one of the stunning, giggling girls.
    It was another prank.
    “Please! Pleaser don’t kill me!” The girl in the bag was sobbing now, and she had stopped kicking.
    The girl from the party, the one that my sister first talked to rolled her eyes. “Why should we?”
    “I won’t do it again!”
    “You should have thought about that beforehand,” a different girl sneered, sending a kick to the back that made my head ache.
    I looked out my sister disbelievingly, it was hard to regconize her with so much make-up on her face, she shook her head, glairing daggers at the bag. “You betrayed us, this is your punishement.”
    “I didn’t even flirt with Meldoy’s boyfriend, he tircked me into telling him.” The girl in the bag demanded.
    A girl with bubble gum hair shivered. “Let’s just get out of here guys. Untie her and ditch her here, she can find a ride.”
    “No!” The first girl, which I assumed was the leader barked. “She seduced my boyfriend, she told him all our plans, and now he broke up with me. And he told almost everyone, and know we owe a sh..t load of community service!”
    “There just stupid pranks!” The girl in the bag yelled.
    “They are our only way for revenge, that girl Haven totally deserved that after what she did. We make people pay, because they deserve it.”
    “And it’s fun!” One girl yelled, while the rest nodded in agreement.
    “And it’s fun.” The leader confirmed.
posted by alicia386
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Chapter Three

Mason stared off at the window. Was this new emotion joy ou sadness? He couldn't tell. When toi think about it, his life isn't all that complicated. He could be in a worse situation like having to remodel the house after a natural disaster hit. Instead he was a millionaire with girl problems. His father offered to have "the talk" with him but he refused. Cassidy had came par this morning. She asked him out on a rendez-vous amoureux, date and he a dit sure. He couldn't believe he a dit that. 

There was something interesting about Cassidy. She had long black...
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posted by Problematic129
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Summary
Zyanna Connor is just your not so average girl, and she’s in the middle of a tough decision. toi see her father is the legendary killer of his hometown, though nobody knows it. And when her and her brother déplacer back with her father, his identity is at stake and the legendary killer may be found. The threat is a group of kids that claimed to have seen him, and the only way to ensure safety is to silence them. But as Zyanna gets closer to them she starts to see different people, and she starts to care. Now Zyanna has to choose her family...
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Prologue


Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital lit were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.


It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, toi may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...
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posted by alicia386
Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a an and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, Ciara wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a mois before we started packing. Ciara is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane nourriture is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...
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posted by alicia386
Wednesday

First jour of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer ou Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read livres and she thought that maybe I could meet some new Friends that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is par tomorrow.
After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at écriture a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm écriture is in the in the section below. If toi like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen an old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.
I got dressed and slipped my veste with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. salut watch where you’re going! “Sorry toi Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle a dit for toi to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right toi will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

      Their headquarters was nothing plus then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger l’espace and tons plus gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different vues of the outside building. One monitor was montrer a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me. 
      Darrell stayed par my side...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
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Chapter 6




“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are toi bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris ou Patricia...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
17
    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy ou anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...
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Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he a dit hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his cercle and drew his...
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posted by Dhampires
The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's cœur, coeur whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~     
9
    Zaria
    We came to an agreement, if anything…unusual happened, we’ll check it out. If it happens to be another thing then we’ll comw to the conclusion that we and the book caused this. So on the suivant day, sadly where school wasn’t cancelled, I’d kept an open eye for anything weird.
    “Status report?” Stilere asks as she walks with me around school.
    “Nothing,” I sigh. “You?”
    “Same.” Stilere shakes her head....
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
8
    Terry
    “Yes, it was very bizarre, indeed, Michael. In the middle of the day, in the town of Spear Springs, a horrible storm occurs, nearly knocking people off their feet, it came out of nowhere ad stopped just as abruptly. And if that’s not weird, in a neighborhood of that same town all the windows of the houses on the block smashed at the same time! It’s really…” I zoned out on what the woman was saying.
    It wasn’t bizarre at all, the storm came from the book, again. Zaria, Alex, Iris,...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

      "You're lying," I a dit but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
      "That maybe, but would he really want toi to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add plus to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
      "You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most haut, retour au début notch...
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posted by 1999jacko
Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a oreiller case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back siège of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...
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just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if toi don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours il y a and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
2
Alex
    “Are toi okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris a dit giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. canard, drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to traverser, croix the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that canard, drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge par the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked fraise red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm Kiss on the check and saying, “I l’amour toi dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I l’amour toi two.” As he turned into the suivant road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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