DISCLAIM-seriously? y'all get it par now. Don Belisarrio and I are TWO DIFFERENT PEOPLE! Therefore, i own NOTHING to do with NCIS Enquêtes spéciales except DVD s. ou anything else i mention in this article. so yeah, stop lire this and get down to what u actually clicked for.
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PROLOGUE: An older gray haired man entered, and immediately all eyes went on him. He was almost never here, but he was the most famous man in the building. Everybody knew he was here for one thing, and would never stop until he got it. He was a dangerous man, and there was only one force strong enough to stop him alone.
PART TWO:
The elevator dings, and immediately Eli starts for his daughter. Unfortunately, 7 of her best Friends form an invisible bubble of manpower around her, deflecting his advance toward MTAC.
"Sorry, Eli. You're needed elsewhere," McGee says, rather bravely, considering he was a probie still.
"It seems that your country actually needs to know toi got here, although i don't see why they would care," Tony informed, not able to resist the sarcasm that is his trademark.
"I guess it COULD turn into an international incident if we didn't let toi go," Gibbs reasoned,
"And i might feu him for it." Vance concluded.
"Oh, but wait. The fun doesn't stop there!" Abby cheered. "After that, I get to test all of your clothes for any chemical i deem necessary. And my case load right now is really light, and i'm really bored and lonely down in Abbyville.. So, it'll probably be every chemical known to man!!!" Abby beamed.
"And I will be lending toi some scrubs. Then, I will need a full body exam, internal and external. Those trans-continental flights are just filled with germs. I shudder at the thought." Ducky said.
"And since I'm still new, and I've never participated in one of these," Palmer lied, "I need to take long, detailed notes. And maybe even participate. Right, doctor?"
"Yes, Mr. Palmer. That would be best for your experience."
"So toi won't be able to talk to Ms. David until the hearing." Vance said.
"Or, ever. Unless she wants to," McGee said.
"So, never." Gibbs and DiNozzo a dit in unison.
Before he could even get a word in edgewise, McGee, Vance, DiNozzo, and Gibbs wisked him away up to MTAC. Ziva just sat there, an indescribable pride and l’amour filled her, and she knew she had made the right decision.
"Don't worry, Z! We've got your back," Abby reassured her.
"But wait, I want to interrogate him. Off the record," Ziva stated.
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PROLOGUE: An older gray haired man entered, and immediately all eyes went on him. He was almost never here, but he was the most famous man in the building. Everybody knew he was here for one thing, and would never stop until he got it. He was a dangerous man, and there was only one force strong enough to stop him alone.
PART TWO:
The elevator dings, and immediately Eli starts for his daughter. Unfortunately, 7 of her best Friends form an invisible bubble of manpower around her, deflecting his advance toward MTAC.
"Sorry, Eli. You're needed elsewhere," McGee says, rather bravely, considering he was a probie still.
"It seems that your country actually needs to know toi got here, although i don't see why they would care," Tony informed, not able to resist the sarcasm that is his trademark.
"I guess it COULD turn into an international incident if we didn't let toi go," Gibbs reasoned,
"And i might feu him for it." Vance concluded.
"Oh, but wait. The fun doesn't stop there!" Abby cheered. "After that, I get to test all of your clothes for any chemical i deem necessary. And my case load right now is really light, and i'm really bored and lonely down in Abbyville.. So, it'll probably be every chemical known to man!!!" Abby beamed.
"And I will be lending toi some scrubs. Then, I will need a full body exam, internal and external. Those trans-continental flights are just filled with germs. I shudder at the thought." Ducky said.
"And since I'm still new, and I've never participated in one of these," Palmer lied, "I need to take long, detailed notes. And maybe even participate. Right, doctor?"
"Yes, Mr. Palmer. That would be best for your experience."
"So toi won't be able to talk to Ms. David until the hearing." Vance said.
"Or, ever. Unless she wants to," McGee said.
"So, never." Gibbs and DiNozzo a dit in unison.
Before he could even get a word in edgewise, McGee, Vance, DiNozzo, and Gibbs wisked him away up to MTAC. Ziva just sat there, an indescribable pride and l’amour filled her, and she knew she had made the right decision.
"Don't worry, Z! We've got your back," Abby reassured her.
"But wait, I want to interrogate him. Off the record," Ziva stated.
i need help cus i have writers block and i need help chapter 2 was complet crap so some one give me ideas
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter ou try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter ou try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter
