Please can people look at a rough cut to our musique video for When I grow Up? We would appreciate any input :)

i think this is wicked guys ! i look vers l'avant, vers l’avant to seeing so much plus from toi ! i think its great im 13 and i think this really inspires girls my age . ive shown Friends and they also l’amour it!
i like the end part as it fits the beat and is very fast.
i dont like the shaky footage
over all really good though very impressed ! xoxo