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Okay, everyone on this spot either despises the idea of Percy Jackson films ou just hates the one written and think it should either be banned and/or re-written. Oddsey has asked for a re-write in his/her article, so here it is folks, scene 1.

Now hear me out, Percy Jackson is a long story, some details have to be changed like were the story starts. I think I've done a better job then Craig Titley (guy in charge of the script for the movie). Without further a due, let me introduce to you, Percy Jackson and the Olympians, the Lightning Thief, the movie!

PS. grammar is not a strong point for me, I know.
(I`ve also included a liste of characters at the beggining, some may confuse toi but hear me out okay?)


Percy Jackson and the Olympians
The lightening thief
Based on the best selling book series par Rick Riordan
Script by: HecateA


Roles
Percy Jackson … 12 an old boy with black hair and green eyes
Grover Underwood … 12 an old curly haired boy with acne and pêche, peach fuzz, SHY. Wears Rasta casquette, cap most of the time.
Nancy Bobofit … 12 an old redhead, orange freckled girl
20 students
Small group of people at museum
Mr Brunner/ Chiron … adult (about 30 years old) man with brown eyes, beard and long hair, in motorised wheel chair
Ms Dodds … Woman with blond hair, cruel face, motif cachemire, paisley bourse, sac à main and leather jacket
Fates –incredibly old women, look alikes
Sally Jackson … 40 an old, brown haired woman with a little grey, pretty
Gabriel –Gabe- Smelly Gabe- Ugliano … practically hair-less, pot bellied adult man, looks not required
3 poker buddies, 1 is Eddy
Annabeth Chasse – 12 an old girl, blond hair, grey eyes (7 an old version too)
4 Volley-ball playing satyrs, 5 archers, 3 pegasi riders (include Silena Beauregard)
Mr D –Dionysus … man with black hair, tiger striped jacket, purplish eyes and beard ou moustache (optional)
Luke Castellan … elfish features, blond hair, blue eyes, 19 years old (12 an old version too)
20 kids in Hermes cabine (Connor and Travis actors must be there, both look alike and are elfish)
Assortment of 20 Naiads and Dryads
Clarisse Larue … looks not very important, tough looking (in first appearance is accompanied par two siblings, girls that look tough and mean-eyed
Thalia Grace … short black hair, blue eyes, freckles on nose, built like track runner
50 kids for each capture the flag team (Beckendorf, Lee Fletcher, Malcolm and Katie Gardner actors must be include din proper teams)
Oracle of Delphi … voice of woman, raspy
Argus … Man, late 20-early 30, 1000 eyes (added par special effects)
2 woman resembling Ms Dodds, bus driver, passengers on a bus
Medusa … Middle-eastern woman, coffee colour hands
rose poodle
Kronos … soothing and tempting voice
Echidna … fat woman wearing denim clothing, with Chihuahua
Safety guy, 3 people family (little girl)
Naiad voice … not particularly important
Ares … guy with sunglasses, buzz cut, dressed like a motorcycle (owns a Harley-Davidson) brown hair
2 fake zoo keepers
Lotus Hotel and Casino check in guys … not important
Nico Di Angelo … olive skin, black shaggy hair and eyes
Bianca Di Angelo … olive skin, black hair and eyes
Elvis guy … guy dressed up as Elvis
5 boys, 1 obvious leader
Crusty … extremely tall, eczema skin, toothy smile (teeth aren’t pretty)
Charon … wears an Italian suite, sunglasses
Crowd of people wearing normal clothing
Hades … olive skin, oily black hair, black eyes, tall, wears black robes
Crowd of people, 5 police men
Zeus … black hair and beard, blue eyes
Poseidon … black hair and short beard, green eyes
Mr Chase … glasses, man
Ms Chase … Asian woman, auburn streak in black hair
The Chase brothers … twin boys, about 6 years old



Scene 1
The museum
Percy, Grover, Nancy, Ms Dodds, Chiron, students, small crowd
(Mr Brunner is montrer the kids around the museum, talking about Zeus, Poseidon and the other gods, Nancy is throwing pieces of a sandwich, "sandwich" at Grover’s head. Camera on Percy, who is ticked off)
Percy (loudly) - Will toi knock it off? (Silence, kids laugh)
Chiron –Anything to say, Mr Jackson?
Percy –No Mr Brunner, nothing. (Tour continues)
Grover (whispering to Percy, Chiron talking in background) –Its okay dude, remember, toi have to be good ou the principal scratches toi out of the school.
Percy –He’s already expelled me for last year.
(Focus on Chiron)Chiron - Ms Dodds, would toi lead us back outside for lunch now?
Dodds –Gladly. (gives Percy evil look, class follows her out)
SCENERY CHANGE
Percy and Grover are now sitting on the edge of a statue, in front of the museum, talking about the exhibition. Nancy comes par and dumps her lunch on Grover.
Nancy (not sorry at all) -Oops. My bad. Percy gets mad; a wave of fontaine water drags Nancy into the fontaine
Nancy –AAHH!! Ms Dodds, Percy pushed me into the fountain!
Percy –What? Did not!
Ms Dodds –Enough Mr Jackson, follow me!
Grover (low voice) –Oh Styx.
Percy – What did toi say?
Grover (quickly) –Nothing!
Ms Dodds – Mr Jackson! Percy runs to his teacher, she brings him in an empty gallery. She turns her back on him.
Ms Dodds – toi have been causing us trouble honey.
Percy –Err… Yes ma’am.
Ms Dodds –You didn’t truly think your secret would stay hidden for ever did you?
Percy –Umm, ma’am? What are toi talking about?
Ms Dodds –DON’T PLAY INNOCENT! Hand it over and toi will not suffer eternal torment! Ms Dodds changes into the form of a fury, a creature with leathery black wings, talons and fangs, still Ms Dodds’ head
Percy (backing away towards the wall) –OH MY GOD!
Ms Dodds (hovering in mid-air, her voice like a hiss)–Give it! (Chiron comes rolling in his wheelchair)
Chiron –Percy, catch! He uncaps a black plastic pen, it transforms in mid-air into a sword, and Percy catches it and lunges blindly. It cuts Ms Dodds who yells and turns into a pile of dust. When Percy turns around, Chiron is not there and the sword has turned into a pen. Percy, troubled and traumatised, walks out of the museum. It is raining.
Nancy –I hate this weather!
Girl – The wheater’s been freakish since January.
Percy – Have toi seen Ms Dodds? (Girls roll their eyes and walk away.) He goes to see Chiron, who is lire a book)
Chiron –Ah Mt Jackson, thank toi for returning my pen. In the future please bring your own écriture utensils hum?
Percy –Err sir, what just happened? The pen, Ms Dodds…
Chiron –You borrowed a pen Percy, that is all. And as far as Ms Dodds is concerned, I know nothing of a Ms Dodds.
Percy –Yes Ms Dodds. The Pre-algebra teacher. The other chaperone?
Chiron –That would be Ms Smollett. Are toi feeling all right?
Percy –Yes sir. He walks away confused, to where Grover is. He is covering his head from the rain with a flyer.
Grover – There toi are man! I was wondering where you’d gotten to!
Percy –Grover, where’s Ms Dodds?
Grover (hesitates) –Ms who?
Percy –Ms Dodds! The pre-Algebra teacher?
Grover –Ms Smollett?
Percy –No common dude, not funny.
Grover –I’m serious. There has never been a Ms Dodds teaching at Yancy Academy!
Percy –Yes there has! She was blond, she always wore a little jacket, she scares toi half-to-death and she just turned into…
Grover –School has got toi way too stressed. Good thing it finishes tomorrow right? Percy: stunned silence
Percy –Yah… Right…