Here is chapter two, commentaire please

(Still Jason's point of view)

Jason watched as the ship came to shore, the figure jumped from his spot and landed cleanly on his feet. Jason asked "who are you?" The man replied "name's Sinbad, yours?" Piper took over and a dit "I'm Piper, that's Jason, and that's Leo." Sinbad looked at them, and he asked "your demigods right?" Jason nodded and a dit "I'm the son of Zeus, and Piper is the daughter of Aphrodite, and Leo is the son of Hephaestus." Sinbad replied "pleased to meet you." It was quit for a moment an then Jason asked "would toi like a tour of the camp...

salut guys!! I'll be uh posting a prévisualiser of the fanfiction I'm gonna post. Basically a crossover. Just tell me what toi think of it, and I'll post the rest as soon as I'm done. [Hi book-worm!! *waves] So yeah. There. After this. Hah. Okay.



1. SADIE: Camp...Strawberry Services?!

Hey – okay, wait a second…[taps on microphone] salut Carter! Is this thing working? What – of course I’m asking you! You’re the nerd here! [silence] Oh, ah, I see the tiny red light. Never mind, it’s working!
 

Okay, let me start that introduction in a better way. Ahem. Long time no see, mates! Sadie Kane is back,...

Annabeth

I was walking through the trône room, talking to my mother, Athena. Yes, the goddess of wisdom and war strategy. We were admiring my work.

"Very good Annabeth. I'm glad to say my own daughter is-- A SPIDER!!!!"
I looked at Athena, confused. I'm not a spider! That's when she pointed to her statue and screamed.

I cringed, then looked at the statue. How bad could it be? The worst thing that could happen is it could be a- "SPIDER!!" I screamed.

I looked at my mother, terrified. Her grey eyes were wide, full of fear.
"DON'T LOOK AT ME!! GO GET SOMETHING SO WE CAN KILL THIS DESPICABLE THING!"...

salut guys, i was just wondering, judging par this prologue, would read my fanfic if i wrote one? now, im not saying that i'll actually be écriture one, cuz i have a really busy summer, but i just want your opinion of it. like, is it any good? I would HIGHLY appreciate constructive critiscim. i want toi to nit-pick. Spelling mistakes, grammar, choppy ou awkward sentences, run-on sentences, being too descriptive, out-of-character thoughts ou actions, stupid/weak ideas, anything! just be polite about it :)
PS: i know, its a bit long for a prologue, but i couldnt help myself!

And voila! Here it is:

The...

Alternative Endings of Percy Jackson (Part 1).
So, this is how I entertain myself, ticking people off, especially PJ’s fans!
R U READY TO BE TICKED OFF?    
I heard IT’S A YES!

1/The X-files ending: Since he killed a minor god, Percy is taken to the court of Olympia. He claims to have been controlled by…aliens. The gods don’t believe him. But Annabeth and Grover believe that the gods are hiding aliens to fullfill their dark conspiracy of making a god-alien…hybrid race that could become slaves for the aliens when the colonization begins. In the ending, all the gods...

So hi, well I've been thinkin' about my chapter story The Somewhat Less Important Chronicles of Elle Trick, and how there's just soo much stuff that toi guys should know to really get her. So here it is,

December 21, 1993- Elle and her twin Missy are born, although both have different mothers. Missy and Elle are twins entirely on accident. They never meet until they are seventeen.

January 4, 1994- Elle has her first vision, this is of fire, later that jour her brother burned is hand on the stove.


May 19, 1999- It is revealed to Elle and Garcon that they are demigods.


January 1, 2007- Jumelle and...

i see the hottest girl at camp.
first things first,your not a demigod until toi meet Lupa so dont get your hopes up to be a demigod.Im Jason Grace son of jupiter and well extremely good at sword fighting and lupa says i'll be special someday.
Lupa is a she loup yes i a dit a she loup dont let her see toi laugh cause she'll rip to shreds.
She meets demigods and lead them to the loup house and choose if your weak ou not.So sad for gary truckner.
Anyway as i'm introducing people i should tell toi my life is weird.I was taken away par juno and my sis Thalia (probally not a demigod but i have a strange...