Here is chapter two, commentaire please
(Still Jason's point of view)
Jason watched as the ship came to shore, the figure jumped from his spot and landed cleanly on his feet. Jason asked "who are you?" The man replied "name's Sinbad, yours?" Piper took over and a dit "I'm Piper, that's Jason, and that's Leo." Sinbad looked at them, and he asked "your demigods right?" Jason nodded and a dit "I'm the son of Zeus, and Piper is the daughter of Aphrodite, and Leo is the son of Hephaestus." Sinbad replied "pleased to meet you." It was quit for a moment an then Jason asked "would toi like a tour of the camp and meet Chiron?" Sinbad a dit "okay fine with me." So, Jason took the lead and was followed par Piper and Leo. Sinbad asked "so is this place like a summer camp ou something?" Before Jason could reply, Piper a dit "yes but most campers stay an around." Sinbad didn't respond but only nodded. Jason pointed towards the two big cabins and a dit "the white one is for my father Zeus." Sinbad guessed "the king of the gods?" Jason nodded and added "the smaller one is for Hera, Queen of the gods." He didn't want to go there, considering what happened on the quest he did with Piper and Leo. Jason a dit "okay, let's go and see Chiron." Sinbad followed them to see the camp activities director who was not far from them. Jason a dit "sir, Sinbad has arrived." Chiron replied "good, because we all need to talk."
(Still Jason's point of view)
Jason watched as the ship came to shore, the figure jumped from his spot and landed cleanly on his feet. Jason asked "who are you?" The man replied "name's Sinbad, yours?" Piper took over and a dit "I'm Piper, that's Jason, and that's Leo." Sinbad looked at them, and he asked "your demigods right?" Jason nodded and a dit "I'm the son of Zeus, and Piper is the daughter of Aphrodite, and Leo is the son of Hephaestus." Sinbad replied "pleased to meet you." It was quit for a moment an then Jason asked "would toi like a tour of the camp and meet Chiron?" Sinbad a dit "okay fine with me." So, Jason took the lead and was followed par Piper and Leo. Sinbad asked "so is this place like a summer camp ou something?" Before Jason could reply, Piper a dit "yes but most campers stay an around." Sinbad didn't respond but only nodded. Jason pointed towards the two big cabins and a dit "the white one is for my father Zeus." Sinbad guessed "the king of the gods?" Jason nodded and added "the smaller one is for Hera, Queen of the gods." He didn't want to go there, considering what happened on the quest he did with Piper and Leo. Jason a dit "okay, let's go and see Chiron." Sinbad followed them to see the camp activities director who was not far from them. Jason a dit "sir, Sinbad has arrived." Chiron replied "good, because we all need to talk."