Hopefully this is a little longer and maybe better??
I was happy to find both my house and car keys along with my iPhone in my back pocket. I unlocked my car and sat down on the driver's seat. I reached into my zippered pocket and found the folded piece of paper that my mystery assailant had placed there. As I unfolded the paper I saw that the letter on it was typed. "Hmmmm," I wondered, "Did they type it so i wouldn't recognize their hand writing??"
Dear Emily, "Wait... Whoa.. Creepy.. How does he know my name?!?!? How did he know I was going running in the forest?!?" I thought this to myself, starting to really freak out, but I continued lire the letter.
I am soooooooooo sorry for scaring you. I wouldn't have done it if it wasn't necessary. It's important that toi don't know who I am ou at least for a while. Eventually I will montrer toi who I am and then toi will understand everything. Hopefully toi will then forgive me for scaring you. Can toi meet me tonight below your bedroom window as soon as your family is asleep? Please be there. I will be waiting. Oh and don't call the police and don't be scared of me.
From,
Someone Unknown
P.s. Until toi know who I am, toi can call me James.
When I got accueil I went upstairs and got in the shower. Should I meet him outside tonight? Should I call the police?? Should I tell my parents about it? I was so unsure of what to do. Everything I had been taught about strangers went against meeting him but my instincts were telling me that he meant well and that I would be making a really big mistake if I didn't meet him. "Urrrhhhh!" I moaned.
"Emily, are toi okay?" asked a voice just outside the bathroom. I completely forgot that my friend Alicia was coming over today to sleepover. I would have to tell her about James, then.
"I'm fine!" I yelled. "I'll be out in a sec.!"
"You're wet," remarked Alicia.
"Wow! Really?," I replied," I had no clue showers could do that to you!"
"Sarcasm is greatly frowned upon in this country," my friend commented.
"I believe the word toi are looking for is cannibalism," I answered. (Note to readers: Don't freak out on me.. It's a quote from Charlie and the chocolat Factory...".. which is called cannibalism, and that my dear children is frowned upon in many countries.")
"Fine," sighed Alicia, giving in, " What do ya wanna do? We can play Wii ou Ripstick ou Tandem (this is a two person bike) ou climb a arbre ou watch TV ou sing.."
"Let's Ripstick around the neighborhood."
We went to the garage and grabbed the Ripsticks and left out the side door. As we started down the colline I asked Alicia what she wanted to talk about. "I got nothing," she replied.
"Okay then. Umm.. Yeah I kinda have something to talk about... Sooo.. " I a dit and I told her my story. When I finished, all Alicia did was stare at me with her mouth wide open. "HE WANTS TO MEET toi AT YOUR HOUSE TONIGHT!! HOW DOES HE KNOW WHERE toi LIVE?!?!?" she yelled.
"I don't know. I was wondering the same thing but at least since you're here it will be a little safer when I meet him because toi can watch from the window," I replied.
"Fine," sighed Alicia, "Have it your way but I think toi should call the police. Don't blame me if you're kidnapped and never seen again."
"Thanks for the reassuring words. And if he wanted to kidnap me he would have done it on the trail."
"What do toi think he wants?'
"I really wish I knew..."
I was happy to find both my house and car keys along with my iPhone in my back pocket. I unlocked my car and sat down on the driver's seat. I reached into my zippered pocket and found the folded piece of paper that my mystery assailant had placed there. As I unfolded the paper I saw that the letter on it was typed. "Hmmmm," I wondered, "Did they type it so i wouldn't recognize their hand writing??"
Dear Emily, "Wait... Whoa.. Creepy.. How does he know my name?!?!? How did he know I was going running in the forest?!?" I thought this to myself, starting to really freak out, but I continued lire the letter.
I am soooooooooo sorry for scaring you. I wouldn't have done it if it wasn't necessary. It's important that toi don't know who I am ou at least for a while. Eventually I will montrer toi who I am and then toi will understand everything. Hopefully toi will then forgive me for scaring you. Can toi meet me tonight below your bedroom window as soon as your family is asleep? Please be there. I will be waiting. Oh and don't call the police and don't be scared of me.
From,
Someone Unknown
P.s. Until toi know who I am, toi can call me James.
When I got accueil I went upstairs and got in the shower. Should I meet him outside tonight? Should I call the police?? Should I tell my parents about it? I was so unsure of what to do. Everything I had been taught about strangers went against meeting him but my instincts were telling me that he meant well and that I would be making a really big mistake if I didn't meet him. "Urrrhhhh!" I moaned.
"Emily, are toi okay?" asked a voice just outside the bathroom. I completely forgot that my friend Alicia was coming over today to sleepover. I would have to tell her about James, then.
"I'm fine!" I yelled. "I'll be out in a sec.!"
"You're wet," remarked Alicia.
"Wow! Really?," I replied," I had no clue showers could do that to you!"
"Sarcasm is greatly frowned upon in this country," my friend commented.
"I believe the word toi are looking for is cannibalism," I answered. (Note to readers: Don't freak out on me.. It's a quote from Charlie and the chocolat Factory...".. which is called cannibalism, and that my dear children is frowned upon in many countries.")
"Fine," sighed Alicia, giving in, " What do ya wanna do? We can play Wii ou Ripstick ou Tandem (this is a two person bike) ou climb a arbre ou watch TV ou sing.."
"Let's Ripstick around the neighborhood."
We went to the garage and grabbed the Ripsticks and left out the side door. As we started down the colline I asked Alicia what she wanted to talk about. "I got nothing," she replied.
"Okay then. Umm.. Yeah I kinda have something to talk about... Sooo.. " I a dit and I told her my story. When I finished, all Alicia did was stare at me with her mouth wide open. "HE WANTS TO MEET toi AT YOUR HOUSE TONIGHT!! HOW DOES HE KNOW WHERE toi LIVE?!?!?" she yelled.
"I don't know. I was wondering the same thing but at least since you're here it will be a little safer when I meet him because toi can watch from the window," I replied.
"Fine," sighed Alicia, "Have it your way but I think toi should call the police. Don't blame me if you're kidnapped and never seen again."
"Thanks for the reassuring words. And if he wanted to kidnap me he would have done it on the trail."
"What do toi think he wants?'
"I really wish I knew..."
On the drive accueil Semra kept looking over at me to see if I'm all right.
"are toi sure your ok!?" Semra a dit nearly shouting.
"I a dit I'm fine! Stop worrying!!" I a dit to her while laughing.
"what toi laughing at!?" she said
"nothing…" I replied, I was laughing at Harry, I could tell that he was finding it hard to talk to me.
I arrived back accueil at 7:30pm, I washed my head and then went to bed.
Harry P.O.V
I waved good-bye to Lillian and headed back inside to the boys.
"hi guys!" I said
"hey why did toi leave straight away after the last song?" Niall asked
"he saw a girl being trampled so he went to help." Louis said
"good on ya mate." a dit Niall
"is she ok now?" asked Liam.
"yeah she's fine but she did have a huge cut on her head!" I a dit while sitting down on the chair.
"really!? How did she get the cut?" Zayn said
"she banged it on a metal bar." I said
"ouch!!" Louis said
"yeah but she's ok now." I said
after we talk then we all went home.
"are toi sure your ok!?" Semra a dit nearly shouting.
"I a dit I'm fine! Stop worrying!!" I a dit to her while laughing.
"what toi laughing at!?" she said
"nothing…" I replied, I was laughing at Harry, I could tell that he was finding it hard to talk to me.
I arrived back accueil at 7:30pm, I washed my head and then went to bed.
Harry P.O.V
I waved good-bye to Lillian and headed back inside to the boys.
"hi guys!" I said
"hey why did toi leave straight away after the last song?" Niall asked
"he saw a girl being trampled so he went to help." Louis said
"good on ya mate." a dit Niall
"is she ok now?" asked Liam.
"yeah she's fine but she did have a huge cut on her head!" I a dit while sitting down on the chair.
"really!? How did she get the cut?" Zayn said
"she banged it on a metal bar." I said
"ouch!!" Louis said
"yeah but she's ok now." I said
after we talk then we all went home.
Lillian's P.O.V
I was on the ground being trampled, my head was hurting so much when I banged it on the metal bar. I couldn't really hear anything only bits of the song 'I want'. Lots of girls were jumping on me, all ready I had tonnes of bruise all on me. I tried saying help but nobody could hear because the girls screaming and the musique was so loud.
Harry's P.O.V
" I want, I want, I want"
" but that's crazy!"
"I want, I want, I want!"
"and that's not me!"
"I want, I want to be loved par you!!!!"
I was about to walk over to the other boys when I noticed a girl on the ground, I could see she was trying to get back up but she couldn't. I looked at Louis and he saw her too, so I rushed off stage (because I was closest) to try and help the girl who was being trampled.
Lots of girls thought I was coming to them, so it was kinda awkward for me. I helped her of the ground and took her outside without any of the girls following me.
I was on the ground being trampled, my head was hurting so much when I banged it on the metal bar. I couldn't really hear anything only bits of the song 'I want'. Lots of girls were jumping on me, all ready I had tonnes of bruise all on me. I tried saying help but nobody could hear because the girls screaming and the musique was so loud.
Harry's P.O.V
" I want, I want, I want"
" but that's crazy!"
"I want, I want, I want!"
"and that's not me!"
"I want, I want to be loved par you!!!!"
I was about to walk over to the other boys when I noticed a girl on the ground, I could see she was trying to get back up but she couldn't. I looked at Louis and he saw her too, so I rushed off stage (because I was closest) to try and help the girl who was being trampled.
Lots of girls thought I was coming to them, so it was kinda awkward for me. I helped her of the ground and took her outside without any of the girls following me.
Skylar Rae Jones - 17 yrs old
