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The Navy-blue building of NCIS Enquêtes spéciales is in perfect condition. Big Palm Trees surrounds it with colorful fleurs below; a lot of benches too. Three security guards are in the gate, Alert. Gibbs,Tony,McGee and Abby, Talking and laughing unaware of the news.
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As the elevator opened Kate and Ziva ran up to them.
"Gibbs!" a dit Kate."This just came in, the FBI confirmed that there's gonna be a---"
"Slow down Kate. Tell me Ziva." Gibbs interuppted.
"There's gonna be a bomb in Washington DC today as the PBI confirmed." Ziva a dit calmly.
"Are toi sure?"said Gibbs, looking at Kate and Ziva suspiciously.
"We're completely sure." Kate a dit truthfully. Tony and McGee dropped their gears in shock. Abby's face looked terrified.
"I-I-I need to phone my parents! Get Bert! G-G-Get my e-equipment safely!"she said, forgetting that her parents are deaf. Ziva calmed Abby down.
"Don't worry, toi know us we'll find it and detonate it par then" Ziva whispered. Tony looked around the building looking at the other agents.
"Should we tell them?" Tony muttered pointing at them.
"Not yet DiNozzo. We don't want panic." Gibbs replied.
"Well,does the director know about it?" McGee said, talking to Ziva.
"No Jen doesn't know anything yet. I think we should tell her,"
"NO!" a dit Tony and Gibbs together. Ziva continued," Then when do we tell her?"
"We don't,"Gibbs a dit carefully." Get to work. McGee check the NCIS Enquêtes spéciales surveillance video, Kate and Ziva go to the FBI, find out who told them the information, Tony check when the bombs exploding, now!"
They all scrambled, Kate and Ziva walked to the elevator, Tony and McGee did went to their office.
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Kate & Ziva drove to the director of the FBI. Ziva knocked a couple of times in the wooden polished door.
"Come in." a familiar voice said. It was the director, Tobias Fornell, wearing a tux with a blue neck tie. He has the same silver hair as Gibbs.
"I see that Gibbs sent toi here." Fornell said.
"Who told toi about the bomb?" Ziva said, ignoring what Fornell just said.Fornell glanced at them with an irritated face.
"Dean...and Sam Winchester,brothers,they're...undercover now.2 of our best." he a dit reluctantly.
"Where did they a dit the bomb was in DC?" Kate said,walking towards Fornell.He hesitated for a moment and then a dit "They're not exactly sure where in DC but Winchester overheard them talking about your..."
"Your what?" Kate said.
"Look Agent Todd and Agent David we're doing everything we can to find and stop this bomb."Fornell a dit irritated again.
"But--"
"You're dismissed." Fornell cut in. Ziva gave him an evil stare and they walked out.
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"What's taking them so long?" Gibbs a dit as he looked at his worn-out watch.
"Boss I found something!" McGee suddenly said. Gibbs and Toy ran up to him. "I looked at the surveillance video of NCIS Enquêtes spéciales and I found this." He pointed at two men who looked like maintenance workers. "What's so fishy about that McGoo?" Tony teased.
"Well first of all, uh they're not fixing the elevator and seconde of all there's a thick suitcase beside them. W-Wait i-it can't be." he stopped suddenly.
"What McGee? Spit it out." a dit Tony.
But Gibbs realized what was inside it.
"Its the bomb." Gibbs a dit in a low voice.
McGee didn't look surprised but fear filled his expression. Tony's smile faded.
" We need to inform Kate and Ziva." warned Tony.
"Tony toi do that. McGee check them two." a dit Gibbs pointing at the two men.
"On it boss!" They a dit in unison.
Gibbs stood up on his table. He whistled loudly, loudly enough for everyone to hear.
"There's a bomb on his building. Evacuate on the stair exits only. I repeat, on the staircases only. Make it as calm as possible." Gibbs bellowed. There was a noise as they raced up to the stairs. The phone rang. Tony picked it up."Boss its for you." Gibbs jumped off the table, tableau and picked up the table. "Gibbs." he said. While Gibbs is talking on the phone plus people exited on the stairs looking at them strangely. Gibbs put the phone down and a dit "That was Fornell. Kate and Ziva just left. DiNozzo did toi call them?"
"Yes but their phone's turned off." Tony replied.
"Boss. I found the two men." McGee a dit to Gibbs. "Two FBI agents,brothers, the older one is Dean Winchester and Sam Winchester... they're undercover now."
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Kate and Ziva closed the door of their NCIS Enquêtes spéciales car.
" Why is it so quiet? Did Jenny give them a jour off?" Kate said. They chuckled. they looked in front of the NCIS Enquêtes spéciales building and walked in. "No bodyguards either. Weird." Ziva said, now looking suspicious.
"We better tell Gibbs." Kate said. They entered the elevator and Ziva pressed the 3rd floor button.
They rose up a few floors and then suddenly they felt the elevator shook violently and came to a stop.
"What's going on?" panicked Kate. She stomped and kicked the elevator.
"Shh!" a dit Ziva."I think I can hear something. She was right there is a quiet ticking around the elevator.
"Oh no.. oh no!" Kate said, she looked around the elevator."Its the bomb. Quick Ziva, get your phone!"
Ziva quickly shuffled around to get her phone.
"I got it."Ziva said. She pulled it out from her black bag.
"Oh no!" she exclaimed. It a dit "NO BATTERY" on her phone.
"Oh great, just great." Kate a dit sarcastically.
"Now what do we do?" Ziva said. She lokked at her bag again. "Nothing we can use from a situation like this." She took out a pair of handcuffs,two guns,5 dozens of bullet packs,3 pairs of gloves for crime scenes, 1 camera and a pack of gums.
"How about we try to open the elevator." Kate suggested.
"It will not work. The bomb might be around this elevator and we might trigger it." She murmured.
"HELP! Is someone there?Gibbs?Tony?McGee?"cried Kate.Ziva pushed all the buttons in the elevator. They heard the ticking getting faster and faster."Stop,Stop!" exclaimed Ziva."Don't move."They listened intently as the ticking get slower and slower. "It is best not to déplacer the elevator too much." she said. The elevator looked like there was a lion inside, because there were scratches in the silver-coloured elevator everywhere. Ziva fidgeted sround her black belt. Then she took out a leather case containing a shiny knife, while Kate looks at her blanky. Ziva inserted the couteau between the doors and tried to open it. It wouldn't budge; the beeping went faster again. Ziva stopped immediately. The beep went to a normal pace again. Kate who looked at her with wide-eyes a dit "That was close."
"Yeah."she replied.
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to be continued
The Navy-blue building of NCIS Enquêtes spéciales is in perfect condition. Big Palm Trees surrounds it with colorful fleurs below; a lot of benches too. Three security guards are in the gate, Alert. Gibbs,Tony,McGee and Abby, Talking and laughing unaware of the news.
------------------
As the elevator opened Kate and Ziva ran up to them.
"Gibbs!" a dit Kate."This just came in, the FBI confirmed that there's gonna be a---"
"Slow down Kate. Tell me Ziva." Gibbs interuppted.
"There's gonna be a bomb in Washington DC today as the PBI confirmed." Ziva a dit calmly.
"Are toi sure?"said Gibbs, looking at Kate and Ziva suspiciously.
"We're completely sure." Kate a dit truthfully. Tony and McGee dropped their gears in shock. Abby's face looked terrified.
"I-I-I need to phone my parents! Get Bert! G-G-Get my e-equipment safely!"she said, forgetting that her parents are deaf. Ziva calmed Abby down.
"Don't worry, toi know us we'll find it and detonate it par then" Ziva whispered. Tony looked around the building looking at the other agents.
"Should we tell them?" Tony muttered pointing at them.
"Not yet DiNozzo. We don't want panic." Gibbs replied.
"Well,does the director know about it?" McGee said, talking to Ziva.
"No Jen doesn't know anything yet. I think we should tell her,"
"NO!" a dit Tony and Gibbs together. Ziva continued," Then when do we tell her?"
"We don't,"Gibbs a dit carefully." Get to work. McGee check the NCIS Enquêtes spéciales surveillance video, Kate and Ziva go to the FBI, find out who told them the information, Tony check when the bombs exploding, now!"
They all scrambled, Kate and Ziva walked to the elevator, Tony and McGee did went to their office.
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Kate & Ziva drove to the director of the FBI. Ziva knocked a couple of times in the wooden polished door.
"Come in." a familiar voice said. It was the director, Tobias Fornell, wearing a tux with a blue neck tie. He has the same silver hair as Gibbs.
"I see that Gibbs sent toi here." Fornell said.
"Who told toi about the bomb?" Ziva said, ignoring what Fornell just said.Fornell glanced at them with an irritated face.
"Dean...and Sam Winchester,brothers,they're...undercover now.2 of our best." he a dit reluctantly.
"Where did they a dit the bomb was in DC?" Kate said,walking towards Fornell.He hesitated for a moment and then a dit "They're not exactly sure where in DC but Winchester overheard them talking about your..."
"Your what?" Kate said.
"Look Agent Todd and Agent David we're doing everything we can to find and stop this bomb."Fornell a dit irritated again.
"But--"
"You're dismissed." Fornell cut in. Ziva gave him an evil stare and they walked out.
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"What's taking them so long?" Gibbs a dit as he looked at his worn-out watch.
"Boss I found something!" McGee suddenly said. Gibbs and Toy ran up to him. "I looked at the surveillance video of NCIS Enquêtes spéciales and I found this." He pointed at two men who looked like maintenance workers. "What's so fishy about that McGoo?" Tony teased.
"Well first of all, uh they're not fixing the elevator and seconde of all there's a thick suitcase beside them. W-Wait i-it can't be." he stopped suddenly.
"What McGee? Spit it out." a dit Tony.
But Gibbs realized what was inside it.
"Its the bomb." Gibbs a dit in a low voice.
McGee didn't look surprised but fear filled his expression. Tony's smile faded.
" We need to inform Kate and Ziva." warned Tony.
"Tony toi do that. McGee check them two." a dit Gibbs pointing at the two men.
"On it boss!" They a dit in unison.
Gibbs stood up on his table. He whistled loudly, loudly enough for everyone to hear.
"There's a bomb on his building. Evacuate on the stair exits only. I repeat, on the staircases only. Make it as calm as possible." Gibbs bellowed. There was a noise as they raced up to the stairs. The phone rang. Tony picked it up."Boss its for you." Gibbs jumped off the table, tableau and picked up the table. "Gibbs." he said. While Gibbs is talking on the phone plus people exited on the stairs looking at them strangely. Gibbs put the phone down and a dit "That was Fornell. Kate and Ziva just left. DiNozzo did toi call them?"
"Yes but their phone's turned off." Tony replied.
"Boss. I found the two men." McGee a dit to Gibbs. "Two FBI agents,brothers, the older one is Dean Winchester and Sam Winchester... they're undercover now."
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Kate and Ziva closed the door of their NCIS Enquêtes spéciales car.
" Why is it so quiet? Did Jenny give them a jour off?" Kate said. They chuckled. they looked in front of the NCIS Enquêtes spéciales building and walked in. "No bodyguards either. Weird." Ziva said, now looking suspicious.
"We better tell Gibbs." Kate said. They entered the elevator and Ziva pressed the 3rd floor button.
They rose up a few floors and then suddenly they felt the elevator shook violently and came to a stop.
"What's going on?" panicked Kate. She stomped and kicked the elevator.
"Shh!" a dit Ziva."I think I can hear something. She was right there is a quiet ticking around the elevator.
"Oh no.. oh no!" Kate said, she looked around the elevator."Its the bomb. Quick Ziva, get your phone!"
Ziva quickly shuffled around to get her phone.
"I got it."Ziva said. She pulled it out from her black bag.
"Oh no!" she exclaimed. It a dit "NO BATTERY" on her phone.
"Oh great, just great." Kate a dit sarcastically.
"Now what do we do?" Ziva said. She lokked at her bag again. "Nothing we can use from a situation like this." She took out a pair of handcuffs,two guns,5 dozens of bullet packs,3 pairs of gloves for crime scenes, 1 camera and a pack of gums.
"How about we try to open the elevator." Kate suggested.
"It will not work. The bomb might be around this elevator and we might trigger it." She murmured.
"HELP! Is someone there?Gibbs?Tony?McGee?"cried Kate.Ziva pushed all the buttons in the elevator. They heard the ticking getting faster and faster."Stop,Stop!" exclaimed Ziva."Don't move."They listened intently as the ticking get slower and slower. "It is best not to déplacer the elevator too much." she said. The elevator looked like there was a lion inside, because there were scratches in the silver-coloured elevator everywhere. Ziva fidgeted sround her black belt. Then she took out a leather case containing a shiny knife, while Kate looks at her blanky. Ziva inserted the couteau between the doors and tried to open it. It wouldn't budge; the beeping went faster again. Ziva stopped immediately. The beep went to a normal pace again. Kate who looked at her with wide-eyes a dit "That was close."
"Yeah."she replied.
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to be continued
Bottem: Gibbs, Abby, Tony/ Top: Ducky, Mcgee
