I'm only going to post crappy chapter one and part of ch 2. Tell me your thoughts criticism whatever.
Chapter 1 Leaving
“There was a world so far away and different from Blazenta that many people don't know it existed. The people there were called humans instead of magicals” a dit the teacher, Ms C. Swan, to her students, “It was called Earth and only one person is still alive from the planet”. The students, ten thirteen-year-old boys, were very interested in what Ms cygne had to say. “Her name is Axelia. She is my good friend and she will...
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