moonshining nightday Article: moonshining night jour part 14

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posted by leisha4

does he die? does he die? does he die? does he die?
well lets find out lol! this is typed up soo fast it might not make sense but i couldnt just leave toi hanging with jacobs life is on the line sooo heres part 14

part 13

Jacob started to growl in frustration. He ran at grace and she drops Charlie, Alice grabs him and turned him towards the corner of the room. Grace advanced at Jake and then...

Jake fell down on the floor shaking uncontrollably...

Grace has bitten him he is going to die.

Jake shifted painfully into human form and I let out a scream, all around me they shouted "NOOOO"

But it was too late

The venom has already spread

He is dying

And Renesmee, the Cullen’s and I can’t do anything about it.

Part 14

Nessie walked into the house and then stared at the floor where Jake was quivering, she looked petrified for one seconde looked around at us all in disbelieve and rushed towards Jacob pushing her family away from her as she ran. I was so busy with everyone else that I didn’t notice that she wasn’t anywhere near me ou Edward.

"Jake..." she screamed pain evident in her voice as she fell down on her knees suivant to him.

Jakes eyes rolled around trying to find her but it was like he couldn’t see, but he answered anyway. "yes." he whispered.

"You’re going to be alright. We're going to make toi better. You’re going to get through this and be sûr, sans danger and toi will survive." Nessie urged and comforted him. I could tell that Nessie was forcing herself to believe this so she wouldn’t fall to pieces. It all suddenly seemed to get too much for Emmett, jasper and even rose (shock there) looked upset.

Alice looked rather ... amused actually which shocked me (THIS IS A NOTE TO THE fans WHO READ THIS- I’m not trying to be mean) properly because she’s thinking of cloths and the usual but at the same time rather fierce and intimidating.

Emmett saw that soon Nessie was going to stand up for what grace had done and she’s properly die cos she’s half human and vampire she really didn’t have that much chance of survival. Emmett grabbed grace par the neck and jasper her hands and Emmett growled at her

"Give us one good reason as to why we should let toi live."

"And yes toi have the right to feel very scared" added jasper.

"And trying to lie is a waste of time too; Edward Cally, jasper and Alice will know that toi are lying." Emmett pointed out

"So what do toi say grace and be careful these words could be your last" Carlisle a dit softly.

I looked over to Jake and my daughter. Renesmee held jakes hand her eyes pouring down in tears of distress with her other hand she felt his forehead carefully. "Crap oh my god he’s heating up" she squeaked

I ran and put my hand on his forehead to cool him like he did for me when Renesmee was still inside me as a human. Jake lying there fighting for his life reminded me of the pain it would have caused him to do this to me because if he died how would i be able to live with the pain?

Suddenly a searing pain in my head and eyes filled me and out my eye popped a tear that was burgundy, it fell down on the bite makes that grace had donné him.

Jake closed his eyes, breathed once in and out then he opened his eyes and smiled at Renesmee and me.

"Jake?" Edward asked

"So what did i miss?" Jake said

"Quite a lot" i answered

"Such as...?"

"Me saving your life"

thereisa_bella, teamalice_0 and 5 others like this

leisha4 ill talk to you when i get back im off to find out if i get a job or not. wish me luck if you find this then let others know ive not got time to tell everyone. talk soon and i hope your all relieved that jake is fine bellas power to stop her feel any pain that would destroy her works on werewolves that have been bitten so hes saved as well as vampires (speciffically edward...)! thanks for reading this it means a lot talk soon.

0hjess I love this chapter! I really did not see that coming!! Nice little twist :P Can't wait for the next!!!!!!!! P.s Good Luck regarding the job!

Nikkiekierans Plzzzzz write more asap I LOVE this story.....Good look with the job ^_^

Sacred_Love1550 I totally agree with everyone hon! I loved this! And I'm sooooo glad Jake didn't die!!! Awesome twist by the way! Love it!!!

arianaggs i love it wow he didn'i die love it great do more

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moonshining night/day part 9

posted by leisha4

this is it the last one till september. hope toi enjoy it and have a great summer (or winter depending on where toi live lol!) ill talk to toi all on the seconde of september, and as ive got 12 frees suivant an ill spend alot of time typing up this story.
its short but hopfully toi will like it. thank toi all for lire them. :)

part 8
Rosalie stepped vers l'avant, vers l’avant “Emmett toi didn’t let the sun go to your brain too much did you?”

Jacob came in “what brain? I thought Emmett was just muscles and a head full of concrete.”

“My head isn’t full of concrete ...” Emmett stopped when Cally...

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moonshining night/day part 7

posted by leisha4

salut guys. just letting toi know that i felt really ill last night so its kind of a mericle (see i cant even spell right) that i managed to come in to school today, espesally to post this article and to get my £30 for EMA. but i managed it. because i felt and still feel ill/weird, i havent managed to put as much detail into the story as i wanted to so ill change a few things around on monday probably. but anyway heres the suivant part.

part 6

“Hello?” I asked.

“Mom? Where’s Alice? I knew I dialled the wrong number.” Reneesmee a dit when I froze.

“Reneesmee, oh god where are you?”...

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moonshining night/day part 8

posted by leisha4

hey.okay two things ive got to do. first Bella and Edward are supposed to be inside the house not out it. Soz for the mistake :) and i apologise again because Carrie ann was trying to do what Stephanie Meyer did in breaking down with the house standing up and the game with the score.
second is, remember carrie anns in france and im not on after friday till september. anyway thanks.

The suivant jour was the jour that Nessie was bringing Cally and Kris to meet us. Alice was running around trying to make sure that the house was cleaner then the already spotless state it usually is in.
It was just before...

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moonshining night/day part 6

posted by leisha4

salut people. heres the long awaited part 6. i finally got it done! i really hope it makes sense because i had to add quite abit of extra detail to make this part make sense and to keep the interest. thank toi all for lire it. i hope toi like it :)

part 5
We made it to forks hospital quickly, for human eyes maybe but the car wouldn’t go fast enough for me.
I walked to the reception and asked to see Charlie, but they wanted to know the relationship between us. It took another half an heure till I could persuade the nurse to let me see him. I took a seep breath before I walked into the room....

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moonshining night/day part 5

posted by leisha4

salut ive done the suivant part. i think that carrie ann a dit that sue and charlie got married in the book which would be carried on from the end of BD. i hope toi enjoy this and i isnt too long but it was all i could write in half an hour.

part 4
Jacob called 5 minuets later “what was the rush?” I asked.
“Bella?” he asked. “Yes?” I responded. “Edwards going to kill me.”
“Probably depends why?”
"Nessies has been kidnapped par the Volturi.”
“What?” I shouted, and then abruptly ended the call and rushed out the house. I needed air...
could my jour get any worse??

Part 5
I didn’t...

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moonshining night/day part 4

posted by leisha4

salut everybody. sorry its taken so long i've had quite a lot to do. its not long but i hope toi like it anyway :) Cari i hope the last bits okay toi logged off when i needed the answer so i just went with my instincts, i hope thats fine with you??

part 3
Carlisle wasn’t listening to much of our conversation. He seemed preoccupied in his own thoughts.
“Are toi okay?” I asked him. Edward suddenly let out a growl, letting go of my waist, he stalked out.
“What’s the matter?” Emmett asked.
“I know who’s after us.” Carlisle a dit dully.
“Who?” Esme pleaded.
“Victoria’s sister,...

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Moonshinging night/day Part 3

posted by leisha4

Hey. two in one day! Here’s the suivant part.

part 2
“Are toi okay?” esme asked
“no.” I replied holding Edward.
“What’s the matter Bella”” jasper asked.
I let go of Edward and turned towards the rest of my family. All of them had their faces full of worry. I couldn’t hurt them again, this is my last time I told myself. I took a deep breath that whizzed down my throat. “ I’m so sorry.” I told them” I’ve put toi in danger again.”

Part three.
“Well there’s no surprise there then.” Emmett chuckled. Rosalie threw a look of pure disbelief I his direction. Emmet...

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moonshining night/day part 2

posted by leisha4

hi again. some people wanted plus to this story, so I’ve done a bit more. I’ve had a lot of coursework to do so this is sort of short so hopefully it will keep your interest.

Part 1
“Bella what’s the matter?” Edward asked anxiously.

I let my shield down, heft it right out my brain so that it wouldn’t protected me anymore. And shouted with my mind in to Edwards.

“His got amnesia.”

Edward looked confused “who?” he asked out loud?
“Charlie” I whispered with my mind just before it snapped right back.

Edward flinted towards me in less the 3.2 of a seconde and he had me in...

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moonshining night/day part 1

posted by leisha4

This isn’t my story it’s my sisters, but I’ve got free lessons at 6th form so I’ve got plus time then my sister (cullen171717) I’ve helped to improve some of it, but the ideas are my sisters. Let me know what toi think. It’s set about 40-50 years after breaking dawn ends.
Part 1.
I’m bored. I told myself for the thousandth time. There isn’t anything on TV, Edwards gone hunting with Emmett and Jasper, and I can’t find any of the others anywhere. Renesmee has gone off with Jacob on a seconde honeymoon to the amazone, amazon to visit Zafrina and Senna.
Alice appeared out of thin air, holding...