It was the summer of 2006 that my whole world would be changed forever. I was only seventeen at the time. I lived in a very small town in Vermont with my parents and my snotty nineteen an old sister. Oh where are my manners, my name is Courtney Brown ou should I say Courtney Jackson. But i'll get to that in a little while, first I want to tell toi a little bit plus about me. During the summers I would work in this pizza place so I would earn extra money, (well that's what I told everyone but the real reason was so I didn't have to hear my parents argue.) My princess sister Heather (that's what I call her because that is exactly how she acted,) lived with us. She didn't go to college she basiclly sat on her duff all jour while everyone around her did their job for the day. But for some strange reason my parents doted on her because she was the beautiful one, the precious one, and the brillant one. So in my parents eyes I was the rebel of the family. My parents constantly argued all the time usually it was over something stupid ou insignificant. But there was one thing in my life that was always a bright spot that was, Michael Jackson. I will have to admit I was pretty much a fanatic. I had every album, every movie, and every magazine he every was on! I started becoming a fan when I was six and never stoped. It always seemed like when ever I had a bad jour at school ou my parents arguements got really bad, he was always there to get me through it. That's why one jour when I was eleven, I started to write l’amour stories that transpired between me and Michael. And ever since that jour I have never stoped. I never told anyone about them except my best friend in the whole wide world Kayla. She also worked with me at the pizza boutique but we always had a ball together. Sometimes that was my only excape from the real world was to shut my door and drown myself in my dreams with him. Little did I know one jour they would happen.......

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