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Twilightsauce

I woke to an annoying beeping sound.
“Uhg,” I knew where I was. I was in Carlisle’s miniature ‘hospital’. “Jacob? Mum? Dad?” I questioned groggily.
“Were right here sweetie,” I heard mums wind chime voice tingle “um... toi passed out.” She mumbled, sounding nervous. That was strange, mum NEVER sounded nervous.
“How long have I been sleeping?” I groaned.
“17hours,” Dad a dit smiling when I gave him a puzzled look, “morphine.” He replied flatly.
“Oh.” I sighed as my eyelids fluttered open revealing mum, dad and Jacob sitting around my lit with the rest of the Cullen’s standing at the foot.
“Don’t worry love, you’ll be back to normal in no time,” Jacob reassured me, sounding hopeful.
“I know. What exactly happened?” I asked eagerly.
“It was the punch,” Carlisle a dit as he stepped vers l'avant, vers l’avant slowly, “your father told toi there was alcohol in there but neither toi nor Emmet knew what it would do to your body if toi drank it. toi are not human which means toi cannot tolerate some stronger human substances, alcohol being one of them. When toi drunk the coup de poing toi started screaming in agony and then toi had a fit; we managed to stabilize toi but your powers may not work for a while and toi will feel very weak so toi are NOT allowed to déplacer until I say so.”
“Yes sir,” I muttered sarcastically as everybody chuckled.
“Nessie, toi need rest,” mum a dit sounding concerned, “I think toi should try and sleep.”
“Muuuum; I was out for 17hours, I want to get up!” I wailed dramatically.
“Not a chance. toi heard what Carlisle a dit Nessie. Anyway if toi don’t behave we will just sedate toi again.” Dad a dit in a matter of fact tone.
“Grrrrrr toi are so annoying!” I muttered under my breath as dad and Jacob chuckled.
“Why don’t toi go and play X-box with Emmet, Rose, Jasper and Alice?” Esme suggested, “I’m sure if toi just sat on the sofa it wouldn’t do toi any harm? We can set your drip and cœur, coeur monitor up in the sitting room.”
“I don’t need any of that I feel fine, can I Dad, Mum pleeease?!” I squealed.
“Yes toi do young lady the drip is the thing that is making toi feel fine, but I am sure toi can play X-box if toi promise not to get to excited” Mum sighed raising her eyebrows knowing I was prone to hyperactivity.
“Thanks so much!” I giggled as Dad scooped me up while mum got all my equipment.

When I was finally wired up in the sitting room, Emmet handed me a controller while Alice played with my hair promising that she would give me a makeover when I was better.
“Hey Nessie, look I am so sorry about your party. I should have been plus responsible and not donné toi that drink.” He mumbled sounding unusually solemn.
“Emmet, I don’t blame toi at all. I tricked toi into giving me the punch; no one can resist my amazing charm and fabulous looks!” I joked with him, “I just hope dad hasn’t donné toi too much of a hard time.” I a dit suddenly serious.
“No he was really forgiving considering I had put your life at risk. Now let’s play some X-box!” he said.
As the game started I rested my head against the beautifully soft pillow, I wanted to play but I was starting to feel a little tired again; man I was never drinking alcohol again I was fed up of being ill. I heard Alice quietly leave the room. Could not hold my eyes open any longer and I let my mind sink into peaceful dreams.
Daphne was lying on the bed, Mitch on haut, retour au début of her, when they heard the door open. Daphne pushed Mitch off of her. “Quick, get under the bed”
Mitch reluctantly shoved underneath the lit while Daphne put on her clothes. She walked downstairs where Cas was waiting in the hallway.
“What were toi doing?” he informed.
“Not that it’s any of your business,” Daphne started with raised eyebrows. “but I was sleeping. I was tired”
Cas nodded in understanding.
“What’s that?” Daphne asked, with a nod at the vase.
“Oh” Cas said. “Macky gave this to me as a token of his gratitude”...
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Daphne was cooking dîner and Cas was putting the table. He was doing it with so much caution it made Daphne giggle. He looked at her and frowned. “What? Am I doing it wrong?” he asked concerned.
“No, honey, but it’s called putting the table. toi don’t have to put so much effort to it”
The door opened and Zoey walked down. She raised her hand. “Wait…Just hear me out” she said. “I’m sorry. I totally overreacted. I didn’t mean to be such a bitch. It’s just that I’m worried. I’m trying to look out for my little sister”
Daphne smirked. “And I l’amour toi so much for...
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One week later

A corrosive, burning pain spread across Caroline’s face and with a shriek she woke up. She wanted to wipe the vervain of her face, but her hands were tight. She was sitting in some kind of room. There was a lit and a desk. There were curtains and a carpet. toi couldn’t say Klaus was no good host. But despite the nice room, Caroline would l’amour to get out of it, after spending a week in it. A hand holding a napkin stretched to her face and cleaned it. “I’m sorry I had to do that” Caroline opened her eyes and looked at the girl. “Yeah, I bet you’re sorry” Caroline...
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Meg took Cas’ scarred hands in hers and looked at them closely.
“Where did toi leave the bandage?” she asked.
“Bathroom” Cas mumbled numb.
Meg let go of him and climbed off the bed. She left the room and headed to the bathroom. She opened the door and held her breath.
Cas pushed himself up and stumbled out of bed. He staggered to the window and opened it. He looked down and tried to figure out the best way to fall down. He had to be dead, not crippled.
Meg cleaned up the blood and collected the bandage, before she went back to Cas’ room. She opened the door and dropped the bandage....
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Jeremy was walking outside. After his meeting with Veronica he didn’t want to go straight home. He told Alaric he’d go see Bonnie and since Ric would definitely check his alibi he was now on his way to Caroline’s.
When he was almost there he saw there was light burning upstairs. A window swung open and a guy, who Jeremy didn’t recognize, climbed over the edge and climbed downstairs using the pipes. He landed on his feet, but then Lost his balance.
For a moment Jeremy considered helping the guy, but then decided to stay put. The guy scribbled up and walked away.
Jeremy pulled out his...
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The suivant morning
Elena had just left for school and Damon was cleaning the table, when he heard strange noises.
“Show yourself” he a dit annoyed. What was it with people thinking they could just walk in here like they owned this place? He did. And Stefan and Elena did. Anyone else should learn how to knock.
The weird noises stopped and an old familiar appeared.
“No, not toi again” Damon groaned. “Whatever you’re selling, I’m not buying it”
“I need your help” Derek a dit nervous.
“Why is that?” Damon a dit sarcastic.
Derek conjured his cell phone and showed Damon the last few...
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chapter 18 and 19 happen at the same time ;)


Jeremy opened his eyes and looked around. He was in the hospital, but everything was bright and it was extremely quiet.
“Hello, Jeremy”
Jeremy turned around and couldn’t believe what he saw. ou who he saw.
“You seem to be a little shaken. What’s wrong?”
“Am I dead again?” Jeremy asked.
“No, don’t worry. You’re unconscious. Though toi almost died. Your friend Bonnie tried to kill toi again”
“Do toi have any idea how contradicting that sentence sounded? Friend and kill are two words that don’t fit together”
“This had to happen....
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Caroline was in her mom’s study room she used to do some paperwork, searching Amber Lindy’s file. After what Matt told her it was easy to put the pieces together. A girl she had never seen before and who could hear everything? A girl who could drink without having to montrer her id? It was close to obvious who this chick was, but Caroline wanted proof before she informed Damon and Elena… and Katherine.
“What are toi doing here?” Caroline turned around. Her mother was in the doorway, an austerely expression on her face. “Nothing” Caroline a dit fast, too fast. She raced to her mom...
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Caroline was standing at the edge of the woods, waiting for Matt. They would meet each other here, to have lunch. She was about to call him, when she saw him coming her way. “Sorry I’m late” Matt apologized. “I was occupied par this annoying kid who had all sorts of questions about me. I didn’t even know who she was” Caroline pulled a wondering face. “What kind of questions?” she carefully asked. She motioned with her head to the woods and they started walking. Matt shrugged. “She asked if I believed in monsters. I don’t know where it was coming from, she just started talking...
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Okay shapter 10 is finally ready and chapter 11 is well on its way (I think toi will like chapter 11!) so keep looking for it!
aMBER/ tWILIGHTSAUCE

Everyone was on guard; I was still recovering from Nahul’s... I couldn’t think about it brought back the unpleasant memories.
I had been right about what Jacob and dad had been doing, Nahul was dead. There was however one consisting problem, the newborns. The strangest thing was that everyone went on as normal except that they whipped around at the slightest sound that could mean an intruder. It was funny, everyone was on guard but they all acted...
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Dean opened the door of Cas and Meg’s house and whistled when he entered the fancy hallway. “Wow” he said. “You sure toi don’t need an extra room mate to fill in the space?”
“We have plenty bedrooms” Cas replied. Dean turned around and raised his eyebrows. “I was joking”
“Oh” Cas a dit soft, looking away. He felt something soft in his back and stepped aside; Sam was passing through with his luggage.
“Where can I drop these?” he asked, lifting the bags.
“Here” Cas answered. He tried to scratch his neck again, but Dean grabbed his hand. “Aaahh!” Cas exclaimed...
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Isabel braced herself before she opened the door to the police station. She hadn’t been here since the slaughtering a few weeks ago. Her superior had sent her on a vacation.
“Isabel, what are toi doing here?” a man asked, as he looked up from his desk.
“Hi, Victor” Isabel greeted the man and she smiled weak. “I’m just…picking up a few things I forgot. Personal stuff” she explained as she walked to her office.
“Why didn’t toi give us a call. We would’ve sent someone” Victor commented.
“I wanted to save toi the trouble” Isabel shrugged and she entered her office....
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Hullo my lovelies. My name is alexischaos2004 ou Alexis. Today, I am going to review a fanfiction based off of Naruto, and it is pretty bad. I got the bits from the fanfic from another review on it. So, let's go!


"ARE toi &&& KIDDING ME? I can't believe we && &$& $& &&&)(&# &$#&T&S two trips to the dentist!"

First, who says actual text symbols in a sentence? Nobody could actually say them. Next, please work on your grammar. I'm not really sure the world of Naruto even has dentists. (It was written like this on the other review on this...
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Elena was too ashamed to leave her room and she didn’t open when someone knocked. And thus Caroline invited herself in. She found her best friend sitting in a corner, her arms thrown around her knees.
“Ah, poor thing” Caroline sighed compassionate as she walked to Elena, a box in her arms. “Damon told me what happened. toi okay?”
Elena shrugged and wiped her tears. “He’s says this is normal. How would he know? He’s a dude, isn’t he?”
“But he’s right” Caroline a dit and she sank down suivant to her.
“My stomach hurts” Elena sobbed. Caroline searched through her box and...
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Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s jour party. Just a few plus steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...
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posted by alexischaos2004
"Alright than." Silver nodded slowly, turning back to face down at his notebook and pencil. Shadow panted, looking up at the clock on the wall. It was 2:59, and they would leave class at 3:00. "One plus minute...." Shadow mumbled to himself, his eyes still locked onto the clock, panting. Now, it turned 3:00, and Shadow immediately got up out of his siège and skated off. Silver watched his whole class leave, and he followed. He pushed his chair under his desk, and took his notebook and pencil with him as he hovered down the hallway. Shadow looked behind him, and teleported to his house.

"...Shadow?"...
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Veronica parked her car in front of her Supernatural prison. She stepped out and walked to the back of her car.
Two of her minions, guarding the entrance, came towards her to give her a hand. Veronica unlocked the tronc and the two men grabbed Jeremy’s arm.
“Lock him up” she ordered furious. They both held him tightly, though he was in no condition to fight them. “Is Rachel inside?”
One of them confirmed that and she headed to the entrance. Rachel was pacing through the room where Caroline, Stefan and Katherine were captivated.
“Can I talk to toi for a moment?” she asked dead serious....
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Matt, Keith, Bonnie, Jeremy and Veronica were sitting around the cuisine table. Veronica had donné each a cup of coffee, in order to stay awake.
“Thank you” Jeremy a dit uncomfortable. “You don’t really know Elena. It’s not like toi owe her anything”
Veronica cast him a grin that didn’t reach her eyes. “Anything for my soldiers” she replied charming.
“How’s that going?” Matt asked, trying to keep a conversation. “Do toi need anyone else in your…army?”
“Why? Interested?” Veronica returned, raising her eyebrows. “For now the training’s canceled” She turned...
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“Caroline!”
Caroline was walking on the parking lot of the school. Her conversation with Matt had lasted longer than either of them had expected. She recognized Tyler’s voice, but didn’t bother to turn around. When she reached her car and opened the door Tyler rushed to her and slammed the door.
“Tyler!” Caroline exclaimed reproaching.
“I’m sorry” Tyler said. He took a deep breath. “I saw toi talking to Matt” he started.
Caroline quickly turned around. “Oh no. No, no, no, no. toi do not get to play jealous boyfriend. toi had your shot, toi blew it. Now toi can go back to...
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