Volt, étoile, star malgré lui Article: Bolt's holiday in Denmark. Part 2

posted by pikachuboltfan8

Bolt, Violet, Rhino, Mittens and Penny sat in chiens compartment as an inspector asks for the ticket.
(Can I see their ticket?) Penny: Yeah right here.
* Displays the ticket *
The inspector says: Thank you
(the train's speakers: Attention please., we will be at Copenhagen Central Station, in a few minutes)
Bolt: That's what I call "a big railway station."
Violet: So toi must try to see how the railway station in Paris looks.
Mittens: What kind of a long shed is that?
Violet: It is where the so-called IC3 trains are cleaned, checked to see if there are forgotten things in the cars.
Bolt: toi would think you've been around the world round.
Violet: almost actually. My earlyer owner lives in this country.
Penny: This place is huge!
To be continued ...

theJF A nice little continuation! Only two things stick out to me as possible edits; The first thing Penny says, "Yeah so like." Help me understand, but is she trying to tell the inspector "Yeah, right here." or is it something else? And the only other thing would be "earlier" instead of "earlyer", towards the end. Others than that you're looking good, and I personally like the extra train info here and there. I take it you're a fan of trains? ;-)

pikachuboltfan8 yeeep. train nerd. 100% baby!!!

pikachuboltfan8 slash fan

pikachuboltfan8 dumbass Google Translate.

pikachuboltfan8 google is sometimes just like dumbasses.

pikachuboltfan8 Im not calling you a dumbass, im calling Google Translate a dumbass system.

theJF Right, no problem. Maybe a different word besides "Dumba**" could be found instead to describe the often abysmal state of Google Translate? :-) Oh and I figured as much about the train thing; I've dabbled with model trains in the past myself, and have always been somewhat interested in the real deal since I was quite young too.

pikachuboltfan8 You took the sunglass smiley.....now i got gangnam style/gentleman stuck in my mind.

theJF Hehe, lol.

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Bolt 2 Chapters 1 through 3

posted by boltrocks2233

Chapter 1
Penny's First jour

"Penny, come on, you're going to be late" a dit Bolt, as he paced across the floor. "Bolt, hold on! I'm hurrying as fast as I can!" shouted Penny from her bedroom. "Quit your barking already!" Bolt ran along behind Penny as she raced out the door to the bus. Bolt came to a halt and shouted "Wait a minute, what is that yellow machine?!" Mittens ran out the door and a dit "It's called a bus - people use it to go places when they don't have cars." "Wait a minute, there's a car in the driveway." Bolt replied. "Penny is too young, and her mother is too busy" a dit Mittens....

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Bolt's First Camping Trip: jour and Night 2

posted by boltgirl21

jour 2 - So that happened and amazingly they remembered what happened. When Penny and her mom woke up and opened the door to the RV, Bolt and Mittens ran out in a panicky way. But Rhino just rolled happily away in his ball to meet his new Friends at a pine arbre where they a dit they would be. Everyone was awake and the other chiens and chats ran panicking to Duke, who was keeping calm and sitting on the stump. "Are we going to die?" Lila shouted breathlessly. "What's going to happen Duke?" Buddy a dit his face in Duke's face. "Duke are we sûr, sans danger with these insane spirits!?!?" shouted Bolt. "Settle...