But I got the first episode (chapter) down. Dunno if I can post the écriture part of it down today, but I'll try. It's only a few paragraphs long, but I'm considering making it longer, with your help if you'd like. I'm usually a self-hater so I won't really like it when I post it cause that's just me, I guess lol
I'll post it and ask what I should change with it. I'll add commentary throughout the chapter so it's easier to understand. :D
And yeah, it'll still be animated, just not yet. I'm planning on écriture the whole story out for toi to read and visualize so it'll be easier to make.
I'll post it and ask what I should change with it. I'll add commentary throughout the chapter so it's easier to understand. :D
And yeah, it'll still be animated, just not yet. I'm planning on écriture the whole story out for toi to read and visualize so it'll be easier to make.
Fathers and Sons
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank toi for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a jour man."Jake a dit as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something plus than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank toi for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a jour man."Jake a dit as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something plus than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.