here's a story i'm sure will be an insight,
about a kid who decided to put up a fight,
so he travelled down to the land of the damned,
with a new sword, a shield, and a simple thing planned.
so he crossed his eyes as a retarded man does
in a corner in his house till his vision was like fuzz
the portal opened up as it had before
but this portal was only a one-way door
he went down there with only one a single task
to put his foot straight up grim reaper's ass
so he went down there with cold blooded steel
that in many ways had a demonic sorta feel
once he was down there there was no turning back
only way out was to find that undead maniac
but this was what he had planned to do
so he began his mission of chercher and rescue
he jumped on the escalator and started going down
to that small, pathetic skeleton town
he walked past the behemoth like he wasn't even there
and the behemoth did nothing but sit there and stare
so he walked through the ghetto with all those wannabe G's
who were actually nothing but losers with poo-brain disease
but he knew exactly what they really were
they were nothing but dead people in a god-forsaken world
as he continued he ran into a group of goons
who wanted to eat his flesh like a bunch of buffoons
he cut them down and thought to himself
"i bet one of their skulls would look cool on my shelf"
but he didn't care nor did he even try
cause those fucking skeletons wouldn't just stay down and die
so he continued on after giving them the slip,
the were as easy to fool as a couple of dip-sticks
he made it to the place where jake Lost his mind
he could now see the white château as it had shined
and now he thought it to be kinda ironic
how jake Lost his mind in the river of psychotic
so he marched towards his final destination
with no signs of anything but determination
when this is over he was to feel
as he did before his terrible ordeal
so finn decided to carry through with his plan
so walked up to the place where death did stand
he asked death for something to be brought back to life
since he felt that the only place it could be is the afterlife
death just pointed to the mur of instruments and a dit with a dreary tone
"you have to beat me with one of those instruments ou else you'll be bones"
so he looked at the mur and grabbed the guitar
then he bashed it over death's head like a grade-A Rockstar
death was confused and mad but soon he saw
he set himself up for that embarrassing fall
technicalities had gotten him in the end
suivant time he will be sure to not let them win
but he is a man of his word
even if what he meant had been pretty much blurred
he decided to give finn what he had technically won
and sent him back to his world with his mission done
finn smiled with joy and walked with pride
cause he felt as good as he had BEFORE his cœur, coeur had died.
about a kid who decided to put up a fight,
so he travelled down to the land of the damned,
with a new sword, a shield, and a simple thing planned.
so he crossed his eyes as a retarded man does
in a corner in his house till his vision was like fuzz
the portal opened up as it had before
but this portal was only a one-way door
he went down there with only one a single task
to put his foot straight up grim reaper's ass
so he went down there with cold blooded steel
that in many ways had a demonic sorta feel
once he was down there there was no turning back
only way out was to find that undead maniac
but this was what he had planned to do
so he began his mission of chercher and rescue
he jumped on the escalator and started going down
to that small, pathetic skeleton town
he walked past the behemoth like he wasn't even there
and the behemoth did nothing but sit there and stare
so he walked through the ghetto with all those wannabe G's
who were actually nothing but losers with poo-brain disease
but he knew exactly what they really were
they were nothing but dead people in a god-forsaken world
as he continued he ran into a group of goons
who wanted to eat his flesh like a bunch of buffoons
he cut them down and thought to himself
"i bet one of their skulls would look cool on my shelf"
but he didn't care nor did he even try
cause those fucking skeletons wouldn't just stay down and die
so he continued on after giving them the slip,
the were as easy to fool as a couple of dip-sticks
he made it to the place where jake Lost his mind
he could now see the white château as it had shined
and now he thought it to be kinda ironic
how jake Lost his mind in the river of psychotic
so he marched towards his final destination
with no signs of anything but determination
when this is over he was to feel
as he did before his terrible ordeal
so finn decided to carry through with his plan
so walked up to the place where death did stand
he asked death for something to be brought back to life
since he felt that the only place it could be is the afterlife
death just pointed to the mur of instruments and a dit with a dreary tone
"you have to beat me with one of those instruments ou else you'll be bones"
so he looked at the mur and grabbed the guitar
then he bashed it over death's head like a grade-A Rockstar
death was confused and mad but soon he saw
he set himself up for that embarrassing fall
technicalities had gotten him in the end
suivant time he will be sure to not let them win
but he is a man of his word
even if what he meant had been pretty much blurred
he decided to give finn what he had technically won
and sent him back to his world with his mission done
finn smiled with joy and walked with pride
cause he felt as good as he had BEFORE his cœur, coeur had died.
the scene start with an alarm ringing at 06:00 AM so finn and jake wake up,so they get ready for school,so theyre a dit bye to joshua and margaret (their parents)
while in the way,they met bonnibel,so they walk together,when they walk in the corridor,they met tiffany,finn's enemy from other class,
tiffany:well well,who is it now(intimidate)
finn:what do toi want now tiffany
tiffany:oh i'm just pass par and (suddenly confront finn)
finn:what the.. toi shrimphead!
so they had a great fight jake helps finn and bonnibel just watch them fight and finn wins,tiffany runs to his class
finn:yea run toi wimp
so the go to the class
to be continued
ps:sorry for the bad english,i'm just a kid from jakarta
while in the way,they met bonnibel,so they walk together,when they walk in the corridor,they met tiffany,finn's enemy from other class,
tiffany:well well,who is it now(intimidate)
finn:what do toi want now tiffany
tiffany:oh i'm just pass par and (suddenly confront finn)
finn:what the.. toi shrimphead!
so they had a great fight jake helps finn and bonnibel just watch them fight and finn wins,tiffany runs to his class
finn:yea run toi wimp
so the go to the class
to be continued
ps:sorry for the bad english,i'm just a kid from jakarta
K guys dont get me wrong I know there is a adventure time game coming out but I have a better idea. It's called Adventure Time : Rivals
in rival's it is basically a open world too explore in combat you'll be in a first person aspect. So there are teams in this game. Heroes and Villian's. The Heroes have too run around Ooo to different kingdom's and protect them from the opposing team. toi can choose any character in any genre except Heroes get the goodies and the villian's get the badies the main goal of this was to see what a mmorpg will affect adventure time and it sounds pretty good but I have 1 question... Would toi buy it
in rival's it is basically a open world too explore in combat you'll be in a first person aspect. So there are teams in this game. Heroes and Villian's. The Heroes have too run around Ooo to different kingdom's and protect them from the opposing team. toi can choose any character in any genre except Heroes get the goodies and the villian's get the badies the main goal of this was to see what a mmorpg will affect adventure time and it sounds pretty good but I have 1 question... Would toi buy it
Shelby, Shelby!
Yes Jake?
um mm, we're going for a walk in the forest, stay here and watch the house cuz we are taking BMO as well.
yes Jake
(Finn,Jake and BMO go out)
Sooooooooo, what to do? what to do..
(NEPTR pops out)
Hello Shelby, wanna play hide and seek?
Nah.
oh man!
mmmmm, why don't i trash a party, i'll call all (shelby is calling all his friends)
the door cloche, bell rings...
come on in guys
salut Shelby, i bought snacks
nice one Bob!
i gots some games...
awesome!
so the worms set the party... then it was party time!
AFTER SOME HOURS....
oh my glob, i feel like im about to explode!
(the door opens)
Shelby, what have toi done!?
Oh god Shelby, toi jacked up our place.
Get out worms, get! yeah that's right!
And toi Shelby, Don't toi ever, ever mess with me again!
(shelby went back to jake's viola, crying)
Yes Jake?
um mm, we're going for a walk in the forest, stay here and watch the house cuz we are taking BMO as well.
yes Jake
(Finn,Jake and BMO go out)
Sooooooooo, what to do? what to do..
(NEPTR pops out)
Hello Shelby, wanna play hide and seek?
Nah.
oh man!
mmmmm, why don't i trash a party, i'll call all (shelby is calling all his friends)
the door cloche, bell rings...
come on in guys
salut Shelby, i bought snacks
nice one Bob!
i gots some games...
awesome!
so the worms set the party... then it was party time!
AFTER SOME HOURS....
oh my glob, i feel like im about to explode!
(the door opens)
Shelby, what have toi done!?
Oh god Shelby, toi jacked up our place.
Get out worms, get! yeah that's right!
And toi Shelby, Don't toi ever, ever mess with me again!
(shelby went back to jake's viola, crying)
Hey, guys! I'm sorry to bring up a sore subject but after looking on a few clubs I found out how some people have easily bagged a medal.
They were here first, and I mean it, literally. All toi need is some major club activity in the early days of the site and you'll be an instant fan, then you'll progressively rise up and up every time toi make a move. Eventually, you're on the haut, retour au début five in the page.
I haven't tried it myself, and I don't plan to, but this is the most evident way I can find.
And another thing I noticed is how toi déplacer towards a much higher ranking if toi write articles. Something I noticed when I wrote a few articles here (My rank was moved three times).
So that's all! Don't try and point fingers on who toi consider the culprits are, true as it may be, and we don't know. It isn't supposed to be a serious subject matter, but then I brought it up, lol, never mind. I just wish to inform you.
They were here first, and I mean it, literally. All toi need is some major club activity in the early days of the site and you'll be an instant fan, then you'll progressively rise up and up every time toi make a move. Eventually, you're on the haut, retour au début five in the page.
I haven't tried it myself, and I don't plan to, but this is the most evident way I can find.
And another thing I noticed is how toi déplacer towards a much higher ranking if toi write articles. Something I noticed when I wrote a few articles here (My rank was moved three times).
So that's all! Don't try and point fingers on who toi consider the culprits are, true as it may be, and we don't know. It isn't supposed to be a serious subject matter, but then I brought it up, lol, never mind. I just wish to inform you.
But I got the first episode (chapter) down. Dunno if I can post the écriture part of it down today, but I'll try. It's only a few paragraphs long, but I'm considering making it longer, with your help if you'd like. I'm usually a self-hater so I won't really like it when I post it cause that's just me, I guess lol
I'll post it and ask what I should change with it. I'll add commentary throughout the chapter so it's easier to understand. :D
And yeah, it'll still be animated, just not yet. I'm planning on écriture the whole story out for toi to read and visualize so it'll be easier to make.
I'll post it and ask what I should change with it. I'll add commentary throughout the chapter so it's easier to understand. :D
And yeah, it'll still be animated, just not yet. I'm planning on écriture the whole story out for toi to read and visualize so it'll be easier to make.
Fathers and Sons
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank toi for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a jour man."Jake a dit as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something plus than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank toi for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a jour man."Jake a dit as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something plus than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.