True Writers Article: The Plant Girl

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posted by BlondLionEzel

Chapter 1

It was hundreds of years after Kara's transformation, but she was still a plant-human hybrid. For the years before this day, she was shown as an abomination of nature. In short, people poked, prodded, and threw things at Kara.

However, this jour would turn out different...

Jeremy was a sixteen an old boy with black hair, brown eyes, and a smile that warm up even the most La Reine des Neiges heart. His father bought the mansion and garden for Jeremy as he was studying botany in college.

"I finally can have my own mansion and garden" Jeremy thought as he was driving down to his new mansion.

When Jeremy arrived at his new mansion, it felt...empty. Like no one had been there for years.

"Hello?" Jeremy asked as his voice echoed through the mansion. There was no immediate response, so Jeremy went inside.

The mansion was very large, but very unnerving. There were cobwebs all over the place, and every time toi entered a new room, it felt like someone was watching you.

"Uh...I guess I should go to the garden now..." Jeremy thought to himself as he was clearly creeped out par the old mansion.

Jeremy descended to the garden, his steps making small echoes. When Jeremy opened the door to the garden, a cry was heard.

"Huh?! What was that?!" Jeremy thought to himself as he walked to where the screams came from.

Suddenly, Jeremy tripped on a long vine.

"GAH!" Jeremy cried as he fell flat on his butt, "Yikes...that was embarrassing".

"Embarrassing? toi don't even know the half of it..." A voice snidely told Jeremy.

"Well it was...a little..." Jeremy blushed a little.

"Well don't come any closer" The voice commanded Jeremy.

"Why not?" Jeremy asked.

"Because!" The voice responded.

"Because why?" Jeremy responded again as he walked towards where the voice was coming from. He then suddenly stopped.

"Hello" Kara greeted Jeremy.

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SweetHoneyBunny Haha! I can just picture the look on Jeremy's face as he's greeted by a human/plant hybrid! This looks like it could have an interesting outcome depending on how Jeremy reacts and what not. Now lets see...you could try using different words to describe the mansion since it does become a little repetitive. You could try words such as: estate, manor, dwelling, building, etc. You have a good story line going though so keep it up!

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Newbie on the block, Prologue

posted by hippy-hoppy

"So you're the newbie here huh," the odd man says to you, toi nod nervously," well first bit of conseil from me kid, don't mess with them." toi wonder who they are," who are they," toi ask still pondering who they are. The man chuckles slightly and a smirk appears on his face," you'll find out soon enough kid, soon enough. So whats your name," he jumps down from his position on the mur and starts walking looking at toi expecting toi to follow him. toi stumble to get your words out," I-I-I'm J-jace, a-and toi are?" toi say gaining confidence as toi stroll along beside him." Well Jace, toi don't...

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Reality Check (short story)

posted by alicia386

Derek Washington embraced the warm rays from the sun. It was his first time in a long time being able to stand outside without being yellled at that his 20 minutes were over.

The security guard took his orange jumpsuit and ID that he would need to officialy leave the prison.

His stepdad and his mom were waiting in the car in the parking lot. His mom was smiling and running to hug him. His stepdad, former soldier, was scowling, as usual.

"Oh honey," his mom cried. "That was the longest an of my life and toi grew a beard. How lovely."

"Good to see toi too mom," he a dit through her blonde hair.

"I...

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Chapter 1 of My New Un-named Story

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

My breath came out in a white, La Reine des Neiges nuage before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just par my luck, someone a volé, étole my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way accueil in the wet night, all par myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
The town was Cassidy....

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She's All Alone(1)

posted by hippy-hoppy

Chapter one
A Hard Time

Christopher
Present Day

"Christopher, Christopher!" My mum shouted at me though I was barely listening to her," Christopher, listen to me! This is the last straw Christopher, a 2 jour suspension and now your not even listening to your own mother," she gently smacked me around the head to get my attention back. As I slowly came back into focus of her shouting, my sister looking disapprovingly at me and my dad not paying any attention what so ever to what was going on," Christopher you've got to try harder at school, okay? toi can't go through your life not trying your...

Abandoned (Chapter 1)

posted by sadiebugz00

This is the first chapter of the novel I've been working on....

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TORN
Derek’s Perspective

I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind me of him. I feel bad having to wake him up, he usually has nightmares and rarely sleeps well, but I have to if I am to do my girlfriend’s willing. “Carter…” I whisper, “Wake up buddy!” He slowly opens his one eye and thumps his tail...

Breaking Dawn Part 2

added by alicia386

Who is excited to see this? Stephanie Meyer is one of the few authors thats book is so brilliant that is becomes a movie and stirs the entire nation. Same goes to Suzanne Collins.

video

écriture

songs

creation

l’amour

break

livres

upcoming book

poésie

Queen

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Feay: Wings of Flaming Hope Ch.4

posted by Blitz359

Garren wasn't nervous, which surprised him.

Most people would've been scared out of their wits, but he felt.... excited. He was finally learning where the hell he was. Garren absorbed every word Kayleen said, and he slowly understood plus and more.

As they walked through the front door of the house, Kayleen began explaining everything.

"We, the residents of this land, call this land Feay. It used to be peaceful and a prosperous land. Even the government was decisive and kind, and they cared about their people. That is, until 500 years ago, when the high cha-gar passed away suddenly. No one knows...

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good tips to creat a good titre for your novel \ story

posted by rory2011

So you’re finally finished écriture it – the thing that has taken up all of your free time for the past two years (or more), the monkey on your back that wouldn’t let toi sleep, that had toi pulling out your pen and paper while on vacation with your family because The Idea came to you…
Well, you’re finished. toi want to print it out, slap on a title, and send it off.
Hold up, there partner! Pause, breathe, put the the manuscript down. Easy! There toi go….
What’s the big deal with a title?
Everything! It’s the first thing that a potential reader will see, the line that will either...

As Dead As It Gets

added by alicia386

Bella Thorne. Enough said.

video

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2115 Chapter 1: Retreat

posted by SilverWings13

The black clad mercenary clashed swords with a mechanical soldier. The boy pushed the android back away from the barricade.

"Commander Dire," a rough voice spoke over the speaker in the his helmet, "Report your position."

"Barely holding down the defense. We need backup." William launched the sword into the torso of an opponent. Sparks flew and the android fell to the ground, the demonic glow of its red eyes dead. Another soldier rushed vers l'avant, vers l’avant to attack the young officer.

"No can do, Dire," the voice said. "We have all our other troops defendin' the Greater Tower. toi will need to secure the...

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The War of Color, Chapter 7

posted by 1999jacko

Rick stood awkwardly outside the co-op bruises causing him to lean plus on his left leg than his right and making him old one arm in his pocket to stop it from getting very painful. As Alli came round the corner he out down the phone he was holding between each arm trying to text someone. Alli shouted out to Rick," salut I'm here, so what did toi call me over here for." Rick looked up and Alli saw his completely bruised face as he started to speak she cried out in sympathy for him," I called toi here to call a stand still in this, war toi could say, fight so I can rcover from my," he choked up...

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l’amour Science Ch. 13

posted by alicia386

August 31

Chloe Sanders was in a wheel chair being wheeled par a handsome stranger. She was really confused about everything and couldn't remember much about why she was in the hospital. She couldn't remember much. She knew that her name was Chloe and from what the handsome stranger has told her over the days is that she had a very traumatic accident. He a dit the doctors would be letting her out today. She was enjoying the time she had with the stranger. She wish she knew his name. She knows she saw him before but she just couldn't remember.
"Okay Chloe," a dit the stranger as he wheeled her...

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Life. . .

posted by Dhampires

Life. . .it's painful, sick, twisted, cruel, anxious and exciting.

You never know what's waiting for toi two jour from now nor two hours, toi can predict but will it be correct? Maybe it will and maybe it wil not.

Life is like game bt one that's backwards and has no rules. Even though toi play your cards right your outcome could be still be terrible. For example toi bought a brand new Charger fresh off the lot, one you've been saving up for for years, yet when your down the rue your pulled over. And the cops say that the vehicle your driving is stolen and your the one who a volé, étole it so toi go...

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Inspired:Special edition

posted by Problematic129

It's plus smaller than the other ones, because I'm in a rush, but don't worry plus to come. I'm also working on my other projects and will post soon. This Inspired today is a special edition because I'm going to give toi some of the pictures that I technically made and the others are not mine, I don't own the others, the ones that are kind of mine I made from microsoft word and what-not, and I made up some of these fabolouso quotes. So I kind of own some of this pics, ou maybe not, who cares? And the others are obviosuly not mine, duh, you'll tell the difference. So I don't own most things...

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Drowned (poem inspired par book Between)

posted by Problematic129

*Inspired from the awesome book par Jessica Warman, Between, toi should totally check it out

Popularity, I was so known
Money, I was very spoiled
Boyfriend, how I loved him so much
Betrayer, how they betrayed my trust
Beauty, why the girls had loathed me
Parents, I don't think they ever did see
Friends, how I kept so much inside
Death, which is why I had died

Popularity, how could toi poison me?
Money, was that really all I'd ever seen?
Boyfriend, did toi really l’amour me at all?
Betrayer, why didn't toi save me from that fall?
Beauty, why'd toi make me so cold and mean?
Parents, did toi try to save me?
Friends,...

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l’amour Science Ch. 13

posted by alicia386

August 31

Chloe Sanders was in a wheel chair being wheeled par a handsome stranger. She was really confused about everything and couldn't remember much about why she was in the hospital. She couldn't remember much. She knew that her name was Chloe and from what the handsome stranger has told her over the days is that she had a very traumatic accident. He a dit the doctors would be letting her out today. She was enjoying the time she had with the stranger. She wish she knew his name. She knows she saw him before but she just couldn't remember.
"Okay Chloe," a dit the stranger as he wheeled her...

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(A Titless Song, lol)

posted by alicia386

verse one

i can see the look in your eyes
of that fateful jour july
that i told toi the truth
about you

toi denied every lie
that i had to say that day
but i promise you
that toi are my baby

remember words that are spoken
have been wisely choosen
but i cant seem to shake
toi out of this state

chorus

this is how its suppose to be
this is your destiny
i cant remember one time
when toi werent with me

(sorry this is all i cant think of, does anyone have any ideas on how to finish this? It is official, i am not good at songwriting)

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Build a château

added by alicia386

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Build a château

added by alicia386

Build a château

added by alicia386