posted by Takuya
This is my first attept at écriture poésie so please tell me your honest opinion and how i can improve it.
"Life is a long journey with Infinite detours and surprises
toi can not get anywhere in life par just going straight on the path.
The path of life is long and eternaly changing,
The greatest trial in life is life itself.
Don´t just mind yourself, let people in.
Being alone is being cruel to yourself.
There is nothing worse in life that being all alone."
Like i a dit this is my first try and i don´t even know if this can be caled a poem ou just gibberish.
Please commentaire <3