???:bring in number 1758
minion: okay pleasedonthurtme..
*walks out and a few moments later walks in holding a young knocked out 12 an old wolf*
???: perfect he will become my best one yet *holds up a small red crystal* and this will help me do it
* as the purple echidna finishes she shoves the sharp red crystal into the boy's arm where it sinks in*
weeks later....
*the huge metal jagged crown shaped fortress is gleaming in the sun as a blue hedgehog is running through hordes of cyborg mutants*
Rush(the hedgehog):Queen!!! I know you're in there free them unharmed
Queen((the purple echidna) hologram)): hah toi flawed tool toi think I'd just release my future weapons just because a failed experiment asked nicely.... NO
Rush: well then I'm just going to get them myself *Spinblades through the fortress wall*
after rush spinblades through the mur he runs through the fortress at supersonic speeds until he slows at a small series of rooms that are the queens holding quarters to find...
Rush: they're gone all gone *hears a moan under a cot*
Rush: what?*lifts cot*
and under the cot he sees a small gray loup roughly the age of 10 in a black suit with a lightning bolt on his chest and a bandaged arm
Rush*speaking into wrist watch* well sam I saved one of them
Sam(a green hedgehog 16): good enough return to base
Rush: gotcha
suddenly...
queen*pops out of no where and slings a whip around him tying him*:no... I've "gotcha"
minion: okay pleasedonthurtme..
*walks out and a few moments later walks in holding a young knocked out 12 an old wolf*
???: perfect he will become my best one yet *holds up a small red crystal* and this will help me do it
* as the purple echidna finishes she shoves the sharp red crystal into the boy's arm where it sinks in*
weeks later....
*the huge metal jagged crown shaped fortress is gleaming in the sun as a blue hedgehog is running through hordes of cyborg mutants*
Rush(the hedgehog):Queen!!! I know you're in there free them unharmed
Queen((the purple echidna) hologram)): hah toi flawed tool toi think I'd just release my future weapons just because a failed experiment asked nicely.... NO
Rush: well then I'm just going to get them myself *Spinblades through the fortress wall*
after rush spinblades through the mur he runs through the fortress at supersonic speeds until he slows at a small series of rooms that are the queens holding quarters to find...
Rush: they're gone all gone *hears a moan under a cot*
Rush: what?*lifts cot*
and under the cot he sees a small gray loup roughly the age of 10 in a black suit with a lightning bolt on his chest and a bandaged arm
Rush*speaking into wrist watch* well sam I saved one of them
Sam(a green hedgehog 16): good enough return to base
Rush: gotcha
suddenly...
queen*pops out of no where and slings a whip around him tying him*:no... I've "gotcha"
So why am I remaking it? Well the series was the first fanfiction series I made and when I did it wasn’t really well written, plotholes galore, so I wanted to remake it completely. But at the same time I didn’t want to redo it because of all the ideas I had.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
I was breathing deeply at the time from my running " Stop following me Marcos", i screamed at him. "But your the princess i must protect you",Marcos replied."protect this fool" i started to run but that stupid dress i tripped on it."still don't need to be protected", he reached out i his hand."fine, toi can co...". He covered my mouth with his hand. "Shh i hear something".he pulled out his sword and held it back. The five gurads came out holding some bluue long haired guy. He came down and circled Marcos and me. Blue guy said"This calls for one thing... Celebaration."Well, aparrently his name was jess,prince jess aqua."so your from the capitial"he asked."yes, i left because it was boring and i didnt belong there." Marcos rapidly a dit "but we're going back tomorrow". I turned my head fast "What, no i'm not"'.