Nat was walking to The Speed Demon, The restaurant she and her mother worked at. She was carrying many groceries for the nourriture they needed to prepare. She was about to open the restaurant when she heard someone calling her. She looked around, but no one was there. A thick fog was starting to come down the street. " Hello? Is someone there?" She called, but no answer. The fog was in front of her now, and she couldn't even see a foot in front of her face. She went for the door, but it was gone and she was touching a tree.
What the? I haven't moved an inch, how am I par a tree? She went to put the bags of groceries down, but couldn't. They wouldn't come off her hands. They were different too. She heard the voice again, but louder. " Help...Please...They got me...help!" She jumped and the fog cleared. She was in the woods. "How did I get here? and who is that?" Nat a dit to herself. She tried letting go of the bags once plus and looked down to see what was wrong. The groceries were no longer groceries, they have turned into snakes, coiled around her hands. One looked up at her and was about to strike her. Nat screamed and shook her hands violently. The bundle of snakes flew off her hands and into the woods. She heard the voice again," Help! P-Please! They got me! Please!! Help, don't let them take me!"
Nat looked around frantically, looking for the person who held the voice. "I'm here! Follow my voice! I'm here, where are you!"
Nat started following the voice and got closer and closer. "Please help! HELP ME!!!"
"I'M HERE!" Nat pushed through the bushes, where the voice was crying from, but all she found was a rose suivant to a hole. "What? salut are toi in the hole? I'm here to help!"
"You can't help him now...No one can!"
Nat spun around to see who was standing behind her. But right as she turned around, a hand pushed against her face and pushed her into the hole. The dark figure got farther and so did the voice. Another dark figure walked to the taller one. It looked about Flare's age and he called to Nat. "Help me! Come to this place and save me from them! Please!"
Nat woke up panting. "I had that dream again. This is the5th time this week. It's coming plus often now. What is it trying to tell me?" Nat looked at the clocked and it a dit 6:30 a.m. "Almost time to wake up anyway. We have to get ready for work. Today's Tuesday and we have to open up early. Better make breakfast."
Nat climbs out of lit and gets dressed. She walks into the cuisine to start the jour tired.
To Be Continued.
écriture differently this time. Hope toi guys like it, cause this is how I'm écriture for the rest of this story.
What the? I haven't moved an inch, how am I par a tree? She went to put the bags of groceries down, but couldn't. They wouldn't come off her hands. They were different too. She heard the voice again, but louder. " Help...Please...They got me...help!" She jumped and the fog cleared. She was in the woods. "How did I get here? and who is that?" Nat a dit to herself. She tried letting go of the bags once plus and looked down to see what was wrong. The groceries were no longer groceries, they have turned into snakes, coiled around her hands. One looked up at her and was about to strike her. Nat screamed and shook her hands violently. The bundle of snakes flew off her hands and into the woods. She heard the voice again," Help! P-Please! They got me! Please!! Help, don't let them take me!"
Nat looked around frantically, looking for the person who held the voice. "I'm here! Follow my voice! I'm here, where are you!"
Nat started following the voice and got closer and closer. "Please help! HELP ME!!!"
"I'M HERE!" Nat pushed through the bushes, where the voice was crying from, but all she found was a rose suivant to a hole. "What? salut are toi in the hole? I'm here to help!"
"You can't help him now...No one can!"
Nat spun around to see who was standing behind her. But right as she turned around, a hand pushed against her face and pushed her into the hole. The dark figure got farther and so did the voice. Another dark figure walked to the taller one. It looked about Flare's age and he called to Nat. "Help me! Come to this place and save me from them! Please!"
Nat woke up panting. "I had that dream again. This is the5th time this week. It's coming plus often now. What is it trying to tell me?" Nat looked at the clocked and it a dit 6:30 a.m. "Almost time to wake up anyway. We have to get ready for work. Today's Tuesday and we have to open up early. Better make breakfast."
Nat climbs out of lit and gets dressed. She walks into the cuisine to start the jour tired.
To Be Continued.
écriture differently this time. Hope toi guys like it, cause this is how I'm écriture for the rest of this story.
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
toi can have a detailed character, if toi want so.
toi can have simply character, if toi want so.
There is only one think toi must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
toi can have a detailed character, if toi want so.
toi can have simply character, if toi want so.
There is only one think toi must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power ou darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for lire this intro, tell me if I should write this ou not. I start suivant week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for lire this intro, tell me if I should write this ou not. I start suivant week. 1/12/12)
Name: Natsumi
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't accueil often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't accueil often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight:I cant believe we did this!
Platinum:Im just glad we get to do this together!
(5 hours later)
Platinum:Im really tired.
Midnight:Me too,lets go to sleep.
(They wake up)
Platinum:Midnight,do toi see that thing over there
Midnight:Yeah I do,lets see what it is.
Platinum:Hi!Im Platinum And this is Midnight
Midnight:Uhhhhh...H-hi
Silver:Im Silver.Nice to meet toi ladies.
Midnight:Platinum come with me.NOW!
Platinum:Okay?
(Midnight whispers she likes Silver)
Platinum:OMG!
Midnight:Dont tell anyone!
Platinum:I promise.
Silver:Is something wrong?
Platinum:No!We were just talking about our quest to find the chaos émeraude on Chaos Mountain.
Silver:Oh.I see.I have to go,I'll see toi again.Goodbye Platinum and Midnight
Platinum:Bye!
Midnight:Ummmm...Bye Silver.
THE END!I HOPED toi LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 3 THE FINALE!
Platinum Silverburst
