Ok onto the animal thing,in my thought is I find if toi use the same animaux it only matters what toi put as a backstory and image,so when people complain of pandas ou chats ou loup what ficking ever is over used I really don't care cause I know those people have something creative about them that no one else has it's fine BUT if the use mary sue ou over used personality that's when I say I hate it.So ok to give all those who will say to truquer, fudge with this stupid thing let me say one thing,to make it unquie how about changing the type of cat:
Ex:cindy the cat (bland as hell I'll dump it immediately)
Cindy the Bernese cat(much plus interesting and I'd like to know more)
So for all those who think chats over used ou dog,panda,hedgehog just pit someone interesting in it!
My first story, so, if toi wanna make suggestions, post of a forum ill make in a bit.
The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and chiens yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and chiens yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
Once upon a time, Tydus, Torren, Mef and Zanehorn were in the magical land of cacahuète, arachide beurre when Zanehorn had an idea.
'LETS ALL WEAR cacahuète, arachide beurre =D' he yelled.
Torren jumped into the cacahuète, arachide beurre and hugged Tydus tightly, eventually asphixiatining him and causing his demise.
Then Zanehhorn ran around with only cacahuète, arachide beurre on while Torren and Mef threw chocolat at each other.
Tydus' dead body was re-animated par a cacahuète, arachide demon and he attacked everyone yelling 'TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLORAEG!!!!!!!!!!'
Mef ate Tydus and resumed throwing things at Torren and Zanehorn remained covered while making out with Seuris in a corner.
And Tydus was watching down from Heaven, talking to St. Micheal.
Tydus pointed to Torren. 'He's my brother (3' he said.
'And you're proud of that?' Micheal asked.
'Not really,' a dit Tydus going back to eat some andy clouds'
'LETS ALL WEAR cacahuète, arachide beurre =D' he yelled.
Torren jumped into the cacahuète, arachide beurre and hugged Tydus tightly, eventually asphixiatining him and causing his demise.
Then Zanehhorn ran around with only cacahuète, arachide beurre on while Torren and Mef threw chocolat at each other.
Tydus' dead body was re-animated par a cacahuète, arachide demon and he attacked everyone yelling 'TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLORAEG!!!!!!!!!!'
Mef ate Tydus and resumed throwing things at Torren and Zanehorn remained covered while making out with Seuris in a corner.
And Tydus was watching down from Heaven, talking to St. Micheal.
Tydus pointed to Torren. 'He's my brother (3' he said.
'And you're proud of that?' Micheal asked.
'Not really,' a dit Tydus going back to eat some andy clouds'
Neptun frowned at the bottom of the sea, hating the Old One.
He was cursed to be confined to the sea, all because the Old One was afraid.
Neptun was at the bottom of the sea because he was in l’amour with his sister Siria. The Old One knew it was mutual, and knew of a prophecy saying a newborn from the Few would overthrow him, and seperated the two.
"SIRIA! WE SHALL BE TOGETHER!"
He received no news at the bottom of the sea, and had no knowledge that his Mother was with child.
So he was determined that the child that overthrew the Old One would be his and Siria's.
Neptun was near ready for bed, when he saw a sword appear before him. Followed par a vision.
(pretend this is italics) Neptun drove the sword victoriously through the Pyramis of the Old One.
He saw his life as he desired it.
With Siria.
(nu longer italics)
"Yes," a dit Neptun. "This is what I desire."
Neptun grabbed the sword and swam to his château to prepare.
He was cursed to be confined to the sea, all because the Old One was afraid.
Neptun was at the bottom of the sea because he was in l’amour with his sister Siria. The Old One knew it was mutual, and knew of a prophecy saying a newborn from the Few would overthrow him, and seperated the two.
"SIRIA! WE SHALL BE TOGETHER!"
He received no news at the bottom of the sea, and had no knowledge that his Mother was with child.
So he was determined that the child that overthrew the Old One would be his and Siria's.
Neptun was near ready for bed, when he saw a sword appear before him. Followed par a vision.
(pretend this is italics) Neptun drove the sword victoriously through the Pyramis of the Old One.
He saw his life as he desired it.
With Siria.
(nu longer italics)
"Yes," a dit Neptun. "This is what I desire."
Neptun grabbed the sword and swam to his château to prepare.
Firstly,I wanna thank MasterLink For being an awesome Rper,Epic friend,and makes meh laugh,But sadley he is not on here anymore,A moment of silence please...
Osiris for being the replacment of Master Link... Sorta.... XD Anyways,The guy is a fun guy,Don'tcha know?
MephilestheDark for being a Like,TOTALLY EPIC FRIEND,TOTALLY. XD And for having epic artz,characters,Rps,Humor. Geez... I can't liste it all. XD
Princess Viviana for Being an awesome rper,but sadley she recolors,and is not here either... ANOTHER moment of silence...
ThirdDevision for being just plain Epic.
Pheonix Royal Just met the gal,AND SHE'S ALREADY AWESOME. XD
And Finally,LadyLyric (Or AktatheWolf,I forget... ^^;) For being meh first fans.
SINCERELY,Markeh456
Osiris for being the replacment of Master Link... Sorta.... XD Anyways,The guy is a fun guy,Don'tcha know?
MephilestheDark for being a Like,TOTALLY EPIC FRIEND,TOTALLY. XD And for having epic artz,characters,Rps,Humor. Geez... I can't liste it all. XD
Princess Viviana for Being an awesome rper,but sadley she recolors,and is not here either... ANOTHER moment of silence...
ThirdDevision for being just plain Epic.
Pheonix Royal Just met the gal,AND SHE'S ALREADY AWESOME. XD
And Finally,LadyLyric (Or AktatheWolf,I forget... ^^;) For being meh first fans.
SINCERELY,Markeh456
