Ryft
Species: Second-State-Offspring Identity Takris-Snow-Leopard.
Mening: His Grandmother was an Identity. His Grandfather was a Takris. His father was a Snow-Leopard. His mother was a Dracat-Offspring-Identity.
Traits
1. Identity: He has very little amounts of Identity traits. He cannot control Chaos Energy naturally, he cannot control ou consume Nanites, and he cannot morph. He can regenerate quicker than normal, which includes limbs, and can change his age.
2. Takris: He can use magic, and has core-aura (the same thing that Dimension 4 has), which makes him plus dense, and harder to physically harm. This also makes him naturally plus flexible. He does not have wings, ou Takris-lines on his body and eyes.
3. Snow-Leopard: He has mental awareness as his own ability, which allows him to sub-consciously scan the area with an ability called “Second-Vision”. He also has thick fur, a long tail, that can increase/decrease in length, and slightly-above average strength, though he prefers to be fast.
Backstory
On Ryft’s Mobius, Identities were known in a positive way, which was very rare. His grandmother was a heroic one, who did not act creepy ou sinister. She was called Kai (k i ), which on Ryft’s Mobius meant “Hero/protector from heaven”. She did not lead countries to begin peace, as was her origin way (Origin-Identities never have urges to rule worlds, ou nations, ou countries, ect.), but she did a fine job as a sword of the people. She united the continents with her power, and her husband’s rulership, and once they had… they were very happy. A child was born soon after.
His Grandfather was a descendant of Takri who had been sent to Mobiuses par a giant energy explosion on Chisteland (Where Chantee Lighten comes from), and chose to stay on the new planet, as they found it nice there.
The l’amour of their life, Ren, whose nickname was “red”, due to her fury and chosen fourrure and hair, was a Dracat-Identity. This was a very dangerous fusion. Identities were unstable enough, with their power, their vulnerability, and their sibling-hood, but Dracats were known (at least on Christeland) as one of their many names “The Fury Creatures”, as they would get stronger from rage. That plus the fact that Ren was a Three-stage Identity (the same type as Rin. First stage is nice, seconde is plus dangerous, third is catastrophic). She went through many difficult stages, which even lead to the point of her almost destroying her country (she didn’t like being a princess that much). She was be-friended par a Snow-Leopard, who calmed her, and eventually gave her her much needed peace. They fell in love, and after a while, they too had a child.
Ryft was named par his lineage. He came from two species that had drifted, ou drifted, across dimensions, and had amazing lives. His mother, Ren, and Father, Vaio, chose not to be royalty, but accepted to be council-members, as they both had experience. He had a single sister named “Nari” who was a Crystilt-Mobian-Core-Snow-Leopard. His family was often called “the Hybrids” for obvious reasons.
Ryft and Nari were born two years apart. Nari always looked up to Ryft, but Ryft always tried to give her her independence, and not act older with her. They would usually spend their time practicing with all sorts of weapons, magic, and climbing, and while they were spoiled, they did not montrer it. “When toi feel like you’ve been donné too much, toi must work to earn it. Labor, and become stronger.” His father would always say. Ryft agreed. Nari did not. She quite enjoyed her luxary, but went along whenever Ryft did.
At age 16 (for Ryft) and fourteen (for Nari) it became Nari’s life-goal to do two things. 1. Meet the first Identity, and 2. Get Ryft a girlfriend. She attempted both many times, but they were self-destroying. She would usually say “Fooey! That was my last i-… wait a minute…” Then go off to plan another plot for Ryft’s love-life. Ryft was able to ignore this, and if he couldn’t, he would simply use his magic to make him invisible… then Nari would use her magic and find him, then he would run away.
Life was great… until the time that millions of worlds called “The Refresh”. The Refresh was the time of which all Identities disappeared. And when they came back… they were different. Very few, no plus than a hundred ou so, were left unchanged. Ryft’s mother, and Grandmother were not so lucky.
When they returned, Kai was as Virus. She was evil now. And she destroyed almost everything. Ren was angrier, and mixed up in her mind. Her Dracat-stubbornness was trying desperately to fight off what her Identity-side was doing. She died in the process.
There was much war afterwards. Many people died. Nari died. When Kai had finally gone back to her senses, she was so distraught that she left. Only her husband, her son, and Ryft knew how to find her. Ryft did not try very often. He and his elders spent the suivant three years aiding the world, and repairing it. After that, he went to see his Grandmother. She did not know what had happened. When she had turned back to normal, her memories of what made her do that were gone.
Ryft from then on made it his quest to find answers. With the help of some others, he constructed a warp-ring, and departed using whatever Identity-DNA he had to track a scent. He knew that Identities could only act like this if controlled par another Identity, so he set off to kill whatever monster had done this, and he would not stop until he had retribution.
Personality
Ryft was originally patient, playful, sporty, and a bit clownish. After the events… he became different. He is still patient, but also secretive, serious, and stubborn. He did get positive qualities as well though, such as a larger caring for those in need, and sympathy.
Fun fact: His Mobius never had a Sonic The Hedgehog. When his Grandmother arrived on his Mobius, it was three-hundred years prior, which is why his life is half-medieval, and half futuristic. He was born in a time around ten years after the current time in Sonic the Hedgehog Archie series.
Another Fun fact: Ryft has a thing for Acid-Monsters.
Species: Second-State-Offspring Identity Takris-Snow-Leopard.
Mening: His Grandmother was an Identity. His Grandfather was a Takris. His father was a Snow-Leopard. His mother was a Dracat-Offspring-Identity.
Traits
1. Identity: He has very little amounts of Identity traits. He cannot control Chaos Energy naturally, he cannot control ou consume Nanites, and he cannot morph. He can regenerate quicker than normal, which includes limbs, and can change his age.
2. Takris: He can use magic, and has core-aura (the same thing that Dimension 4 has), which makes him plus dense, and harder to physically harm. This also makes him naturally plus flexible. He does not have wings, ou Takris-lines on his body and eyes.
3. Snow-Leopard: He has mental awareness as his own ability, which allows him to sub-consciously scan the area with an ability called “Second-Vision”. He also has thick fur, a long tail, that can increase/decrease in length, and slightly-above average strength, though he prefers to be fast.
Backstory
On Ryft’s Mobius, Identities were known in a positive way, which was very rare. His grandmother was a heroic one, who did not act creepy ou sinister. She was called Kai (k i ), which on Ryft’s Mobius meant “Hero/protector from heaven”. She did not lead countries to begin peace, as was her origin way (Origin-Identities never have urges to rule worlds, ou nations, ou countries, ect.), but she did a fine job as a sword of the people. She united the continents with her power, and her husband’s rulership, and once they had… they were very happy. A child was born soon after.
His Grandfather was a descendant of Takri who had been sent to Mobiuses par a giant energy explosion on Chisteland (Where Chantee Lighten comes from), and chose to stay on the new planet, as they found it nice there.
The l’amour of their life, Ren, whose nickname was “red”, due to her fury and chosen fourrure and hair, was a Dracat-Identity. This was a very dangerous fusion. Identities were unstable enough, with their power, their vulnerability, and their sibling-hood, but Dracats were known (at least on Christeland) as one of their many names “The Fury Creatures”, as they would get stronger from rage. That plus the fact that Ren was a Three-stage Identity (the same type as Rin. First stage is nice, seconde is plus dangerous, third is catastrophic). She went through many difficult stages, which even lead to the point of her almost destroying her country (she didn’t like being a princess that much). She was be-friended par a Snow-Leopard, who calmed her, and eventually gave her her much needed peace. They fell in love, and after a while, they too had a child.
Ryft was named par his lineage. He came from two species that had drifted, ou drifted, across dimensions, and had amazing lives. His mother, Ren, and Father, Vaio, chose not to be royalty, but accepted to be council-members, as they both had experience. He had a single sister named “Nari” who was a Crystilt-Mobian-Core-Snow-Leopard. His family was often called “the Hybrids” for obvious reasons.
Ryft and Nari were born two years apart. Nari always looked up to Ryft, but Ryft always tried to give her her independence, and not act older with her. They would usually spend their time practicing with all sorts of weapons, magic, and climbing, and while they were spoiled, they did not montrer it. “When toi feel like you’ve been donné too much, toi must work to earn it. Labor, and become stronger.” His father would always say. Ryft agreed. Nari did not. She quite enjoyed her luxary, but went along whenever Ryft did.
At age 16 (for Ryft) and fourteen (for Nari) it became Nari’s life-goal to do two things. 1. Meet the first Identity, and 2. Get Ryft a girlfriend. She attempted both many times, but they were self-destroying. She would usually say “Fooey! That was my last i-… wait a minute…” Then go off to plan another plot for Ryft’s love-life. Ryft was able to ignore this, and if he couldn’t, he would simply use his magic to make him invisible… then Nari would use her magic and find him, then he would run away.
Life was great… until the time that millions of worlds called “The Refresh”. The Refresh was the time of which all Identities disappeared. And when they came back… they were different. Very few, no plus than a hundred ou so, were left unchanged. Ryft’s mother, and Grandmother were not so lucky.
When they returned, Kai was as Virus. She was evil now. And she destroyed almost everything. Ren was angrier, and mixed up in her mind. Her Dracat-stubbornness was trying desperately to fight off what her Identity-side was doing. She died in the process.
There was much war afterwards. Many people died. Nari died. When Kai had finally gone back to her senses, she was so distraught that she left. Only her husband, her son, and Ryft knew how to find her. Ryft did not try very often. He and his elders spent the suivant three years aiding the world, and repairing it. After that, he went to see his Grandmother. She did not know what had happened. When she had turned back to normal, her memories of what made her do that were gone.
Ryft from then on made it his quest to find answers. With the help of some others, he constructed a warp-ring, and departed using whatever Identity-DNA he had to track a scent. He knew that Identities could only act like this if controlled par another Identity, so he set off to kill whatever monster had done this, and he would not stop until he had retribution.
Personality
Ryft was originally patient, playful, sporty, and a bit clownish. After the events… he became different. He is still patient, but also secretive, serious, and stubborn. He did get positive qualities as well though, such as a larger caring for those in need, and sympathy.
Fun fact: His Mobius never had a Sonic The Hedgehog. When his Grandmother arrived on his Mobius, it was three-hundred years prior, which is why his life is half-medieval, and half futuristic. He was born in a time around ten years after the current time in Sonic the Hedgehog Archie series.
Another Fun fact: Ryft has a thing for Acid-Monsters.
Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of toi are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give conseil in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when toi bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot toi then telport toi inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B toi JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no toi never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we montrer ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do toi want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when toi bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot toi then telport toi inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B toi JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no toi never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we montrer ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do toi want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
Lukky, She was kind,smart,energetic and mature for her age.
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She a dit softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They a dit "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was ou were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get accueil ASAP."
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She a dit softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They a dit "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was ou were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get accueil ASAP."