Hopefully this is a little longer and maybe better??
I was happy to find both my house and car keys along with my iPhone in my back pocket. I unlocked my car and sat down on the driver's seat. I reached into my zippered pocket and found the folded piece of paper that my mystery assailant had placed there. As I unfolded the paper I saw that the letter on it was typed. "Hmmmm," I wondered, "Did they type it so i wouldn't recognize their hand writing??"
Dear Emily, "Wait... Whoa.. Creepy.. How does he know my name?!?!? How did he know I was going running in the forest?!?" I thought this to myself, starting to really freak out, but I continued lire the letter.
I am soooooooooo sorry for scaring you. I wouldn't have done it if it wasn't necessary. It's important that toi don't know who I am ou at least for a while. Eventually I will montrer toi who I am and then toi will understand everything. Hopefully toi will then forgive me for scaring you. Can toi meet me tonight below your bedroom window as soon as your family is asleep? Please be there. I will be waiting. Oh and don't call the police and don't be scared of me.
From,
Someone Unknown
P.s. Until toi know who I am, toi can call me James.
When I got accueil I went upstairs and got in the shower. Should I meet him outside tonight? Should I call the police?? Should I tell my parents about it? I was so unsure of what to do. Everything I had been taught about strangers went against meeting him but my instincts were telling me that he meant well and that I would be making a really big mistake if I didn't meet him. "Urrrhhhh!" I moaned.
"Emily, are toi okay?" asked a voice just outside the bathroom. I completely forgot that my friend Alicia was coming over today to sleepover. I would have to tell her about James, then.
"I'm fine!" I yelled. "I'll be out in a sec.!"
"You're wet," remarked Alicia.
"Wow! Really?," I replied," I had no clue showers could do that to you!"
"Sarcasm is greatly frowned upon in this country," my friend commented.
"I believe the word toi are looking for is cannibalism," I answered. (Note to readers: Don't freak out on me.. It's a quote from Charlie and the chocolat Factory...".. which is called cannibalism, and that my dear children is frowned upon in many countries.")
"Fine," sighed Alicia, giving in, " What do ya wanna do? We can play Wii ou Ripstick ou Tandem (this is a two person bike) ou climb a arbre ou watch TV ou sing.."
"Let's Ripstick around the neighborhood."
We went to the garage and grabbed the Ripsticks and left out the side door. As we started down the colline I asked Alicia what she wanted to talk about. "I got nothing," she replied.
"Okay then. Umm.. Yeah I kinda have something to talk about... Sooo.. " I a dit and I told her my story. When I finished, all Alicia did was stare at me with her mouth wide open. "HE WANTS TO MEET toi AT YOUR HOUSE TONIGHT!! HOW DOES HE KNOW WHERE toi LIVE?!?!?" she yelled.
"I don't know. I was wondering the same thing but at least since you're here it will be a little safer when I meet him because toi can watch from the window," I replied.
"Fine," sighed Alicia, "Have it your way but I think toi should call the police. Don't blame me if you're kidnapped and never seen again."
"Thanks for the reassuring words. And if he wanted to kidnap me he would have done it on the trail."
"What do toi think he wants?'
"I really wish I knew..."
I was happy to find both my house and car keys along with my iPhone in my back pocket. I unlocked my car and sat down on the driver's seat. I reached into my zippered pocket and found the folded piece of paper that my mystery assailant had placed there. As I unfolded the paper I saw that the letter on it was typed. "Hmmmm," I wondered, "Did they type it so i wouldn't recognize their hand writing??"
Dear Emily, "Wait... Whoa.. Creepy.. How does he know my name?!?!? How did he know I was going running in the forest?!?" I thought this to myself, starting to really freak out, but I continued lire the letter.
I am soooooooooo sorry for scaring you. I wouldn't have done it if it wasn't necessary. It's important that toi don't know who I am ou at least for a while. Eventually I will montrer toi who I am and then toi will understand everything. Hopefully toi will then forgive me for scaring you. Can toi meet me tonight below your bedroom window as soon as your family is asleep? Please be there. I will be waiting. Oh and don't call the police and don't be scared of me.
From,
Someone Unknown
P.s. Until toi know who I am, toi can call me James.
When I got accueil I went upstairs and got in the shower. Should I meet him outside tonight? Should I call the police?? Should I tell my parents about it? I was so unsure of what to do. Everything I had been taught about strangers went against meeting him but my instincts were telling me that he meant well and that I would be making a really big mistake if I didn't meet him. "Urrrhhhh!" I moaned.
"Emily, are toi okay?" asked a voice just outside the bathroom. I completely forgot that my friend Alicia was coming over today to sleepover. I would have to tell her about James, then.
"I'm fine!" I yelled. "I'll be out in a sec.!"
"You're wet," remarked Alicia.
"Wow! Really?," I replied," I had no clue showers could do that to you!"
"Sarcasm is greatly frowned upon in this country," my friend commented.
"I believe the word toi are looking for is cannibalism," I answered. (Note to readers: Don't freak out on me.. It's a quote from Charlie and the chocolat Factory...".. which is called cannibalism, and that my dear children is frowned upon in many countries.")
"Fine," sighed Alicia, giving in, " What do ya wanna do? We can play Wii ou Ripstick ou Tandem (this is a two person bike) ou climb a arbre ou watch TV ou sing.."
"Let's Ripstick around the neighborhood."
We went to the garage and grabbed the Ripsticks and left out the side door. As we started down the colline I asked Alicia what she wanted to talk about. "I got nothing," she replied.
"Okay then. Umm.. Yeah I kinda have something to talk about... Sooo.. " I a dit and I told her my story. When I finished, all Alicia did was stare at me with her mouth wide open. "HE WANTS TO MEET toi AT YOUR HOUSE TONIGHT!! HOW DOES HE KNOW WHERE toi LIVE?!?!?" she yelled.
"I don't know. I was wondering the same thing but at least since you're here it will be a little safer when I meet him because toi can watch from the window," I replied.
"Fine," sighed Alicia, "Have it your way but I think toi should call the police. Don't blame me if you're kidnapped and never seen again."
"Thanks for the reassuring words. And if he wanted to kidnap me he would have done it on the trail."
"What do toi think he wants?'
"I really wish I knew..."
It 7:00 AM and my mom called me from downstairs. "HONEY! IT'S TIME TO GO!"
I got my backpack and headed downstairs.
"Bye mom!" I waved goodbye and walked outside.
I was surprised because I found a limo instead of what I would thought it would be. A big truck.
A man in a suit escorted me into the limo and then we were off. But that is not all.
"Hi." the '5 nice boys' a dit to me.
"Hi?!?!"
It was 1D. Oh.My.God.
"I'm Liam"
"I'm Harry"
"I'm Louis"
I'm Niall"
"And I'm Zayn."
And I was like 0_0
"LA here we come!" Niall exclaimed.
The driver turned the radio on and surprisingly enough, it was MY song.
No not Rebecca Black. Not Justin Bieber...
ME! Jenette Gold.
What could be better? Your own song on the radio, in a limo, with 1D chant along to it?
NOTHING. JUST NOTHING.
I got my backpack and headed downstairs.
"Bye mom!" I waved goodbye and walked outside.
I was surprised because I found a limo instead of what I would thought it would be. A big truck.
A man in a suit escorted me into the limo and then we were off. But that is not all.
"Hi." the '5 nice boys' a dit to me.
"Hi?!?!"
It was 1D. Oh.My.God.
"I'm Liam"
"I'm Harry"
"I'm Louis"
I'm Niall"
"And I'm Zayn."
And I was like 0_0
"LA here we come!" Niall exclaimed.
The driver turned the radio on and surprisingly enough, it was MY song.
No not Rebecca Black. Not Justin Bieber...
ME! Jenette Gold.
What could be better? Your own song on the radio, in a limo, with 1D chant along to it?
NOTHING. JUST NOTHING.
I woke up to my cat, Amy, purring suivant to me.
Suddenly, my phone rang. It was the record label!
"Hello? Is this Jenette Gold."
"Ms. Gold! Hello this is Jim!"
"Hi Jim"
"Next Friday toi are going to LA for your big show, remember?"
"Yes."
"You will have 5 nice boys coming along with you. Is that okay?"
5 nice boys..5 nice boys...I tried to think who it will be. "I don't mind." I replied to Jim. "Okay then! I will see toi later."
Jim hung up.
I tried to think of who those "5 nice boys" would be until I looked at my poster across the room..."
Suddenly, my phone rang. It was the record label!
"Hello? Is this Jenette Gold."
"Ms. Gold! Hello this is Jim!"
"Hi Jim"
"Next Friday toi are going to LA for your big show, remember?"
"Yes."
"You will have 5 nice boys coming along with you. Is that okay?"
5 nice boys..5 nice boys...I tried to think who it will be. "I don't mind." I replied to Jim. "Okay then! I will see toi later."
Jim hung up.
I tried to think of who those "5 nice boys" would be until I looked at my poster across the room..."
ok so im trying fan fic agien
alerm clook gos off
cassey: i dont what to get up
mom: cassey get down here now
cassey: *mumbles* toi just dont get it do you
mom: cassey now ou eles
joe: yah cassey nooowwwww
cassey: *mumbles agine* i hate my brother
cassey gos down stairs
mom: your gonna get it
cassey: how * in a reley scard way *
mom: well toi will see
dad: take it easy on her
cassey: bye
cassey walks out door
amanda: salut its looser ha ha ha
cassey: well at leat i dont wher so much make up i look like a clown
amanda: well at lest i dont need make up like toi do
Buse pulls up
at scool
cassey: salut thay look like one direction
alerm clook gos off
cassey: i dont what to get up
mom: cassey get down here now
cassey: *mumbles* toi just dont get it do you
mom: cassey now ou eles
joe: yah cassey nooowwwww
cassey: *mumbles agine* i hate my brother
cassey gos down stairs
mom: your gonna get it
cassey: how * in a reley scard way *
mom: well toi will see
dad: take it easy on her
cassey: bye
cassey walks out door
amanda: salut its looser ha ha ha
cassey: well at leat i dont wher so much make up i look like a clown
amanda: well at lest i dont need make up like toi do
Buse pulls up
at scool
cassey: salut thay look like one direction
toi can tell that in One Direction's photos they have a connection. Even though all five boys are different, with different styles- they still connect.
All five boys had a crush on a girl who was competing against them in the x-factor, she played an instrument. (Not many of those people win)
toi may question, "how do five boys that are totally different connect so good?" Well I know!
Harry, Louis, Nial, Liam, and Zayn all experienced the same things. They all tried so hard to become what they love. SINGERS.
I'm no expert, but I know a lot about them. Even though the boys all drive Zayn crazy... they are all silly. That's why we l’amour them, we are too.
toi can always see the confidence in the boys when they take pictures together, they feel the love.
All five boys had a crush on a girl who was competing against them in the x-factor, she played an instrument. (Not many of those people win)
toi may question, "how do five boys that are totally different connect so good?" Well I know!
Harry, Louis, Nial, Liam, and Zayn all experienced the same things. They all tried so hard to become what they love. SINGERS.
I'm no expert, but I know a lot about them. Even though the boys all drive Zayn crazy... they are all silly. That's why we l’amour them, we are too.
toi can always see the confidence in the boys when they take pictures together, they feel the love.
I just felt like that harry was telling me something but I couldn't put my fingur on it..this was a very awkward introduction!.