Hopefully this is a little longer and maybe better??
I was happy to find both my house and car keys along with my iPhone in my back pocket. I unlocked my car and sat down on the driver's seat. I reached into my zippered pocket and found the folded piece of paper that my mystery assailant had placed there. As I unfolded the paper I saw that the letter on it was typed. "Hmmmm," I wondered, "Did they type it so i wouldn't recognize their hand writing??"
Dear Emily, "Wait... Whoa.. Creepy.. How does he know my name?!?!? How did he know I was going running in the forest?!?" I thought this to myself, starting to really freak out, but I continued lire the letter.
I am soooooooooo sorry for scaring you. I wouldn't have done it if it wasn't necessary. It's important that toi don't know who I am ou at least for a while. Eventually I will montrer toi who I am and then toi will understand everything. Hopefully toi will then forgive me for scaring you. Can toi meet me tonight below your bedroom window as soon as your family is asleep? Please be there. I will be waiting. Oh and don't call the police and don't be scared of me.
From,
Someone Unknown
P.s. Until toi know who I am, toi can call me James.
When I got accueil I went upstairs and got in the shower. Should I meet him outside tonight? Should I call the police?? Should I tell my parents about it? I was so unsure of what to do. Everything I had been taught about strangers went against meeting him but my instincts were telling me that he meant well and that I would be making a really big mistake if I didn't meet him. "Urrrhhhh!" I moaned.
"Emily, are toi okay?" asked a voice just outside the bathroom. I completely forgot that my friend Alicia was coming over today to sleepover. I would have to tell her about James, then.
"I'm fine!" I yelled. "I'll be out in a sec.!"
"You're wet," remarked Alicia.
"Wow! Really?," I replied," I had no clue showers could do that to you!"
"Sarcasm is greatly frowned upon in this country," my friend commented.
"I believe the word toi are looking for is cannibalism," I answered. (Note to readers: Don't freak out on me.. It's a quote from Charlie and the chocolat Factory...".. which is called cannibalism, and that my dear children is frowned upon in many countries.")
"Fine," sighed Alicia, giving in, " What do ya wanna do? We can play Wii ou Ripstick ou Tandem (this is a two person bike) ou climb a arbre ou watch TV ou sing.."
"Let's Ripstick around the neighborhood."
We went to the garage and grabbed the Ripsticks and left out the side door. As we started down the colline I asked Alicia what she wanted to talk about. "I got nothing," she replied.
"Okay then. Umm.. Yeah I kinda have something to talk about... Sooo.. " I a dit and I told her my story. When I finished, all Alicia did was stare at me with her mouth wide open. "HE WANTS TO MEET toi AT YOUR HOUSE TONIGHT!! HOW DOES HE KNOW WHERE toi LIVE?!?!?" she yelled.
"I don't know. I was wondering the same thing but at least since you're here it will be a little safer when I meet him because toi can watch from the window," I replied.
"Fine," sighed Alicia, "Have it your way but I think toi should call the police. Don't blame me if you're kidnapped and never seen again."
"Thanks for the reassuring words. And if he wanted to kidnap me he would have done it on the trail."
"What do toi think he wants?'
"I really wish I knew..."
I was happy to find both my house and car keys along with my iPhone in my back pocket. I unlocked my car and sat down on the driver's seat. I reached into my zippered pocket and found the folded piece of paper that my mystery assailant had placed there. As I unfolded the paper I saw that the letter on it was typed. "Hmmmm," I wondered, "Did they type it so i wouldn't recognize their hand writing??"
Dear Emily, "Wait... Whoa.. Creepy.. How does he know my name?!?!? How did he know I was going running in the forest?!?" I thought this to myself, starting to really freak out, but I continued lire the letter.
I am soooooooooo sorry for scaring you. I wouldn't have done it if it wasn't necessary. It's important that toi don't know who I am ou at least for a while. Eventually I will montrer toi who I am and then toi will understand everything. Hopefully toi will then forgive me for scaring you. Can toi meet me tonight below your bedroom window as soon as your family is asleep? Please be there. I will be waiting. Oh and don't call the police and don't be scared of me.
From,
Someone Unknown
P.s. Until toi know who I am, toi can call me James.
When I got accueil I went upstairs and got in the shower. Should I meet him outside tonight? Should I call the police?? Should I tell my parents about it? I was so unsure of what to do. Everything I had been taught about strangers went against meeting him but my instincts were telling me that he meant well and that I would be making a really big mistake if I didn't meet him. "Urrrhhhh!" I moaned.
"Emily, are toi okay?" asked a voice just outside the bathroom. I completely forgot that my friend Alicia was coming over today to sleepover. I would have to tell her about James, then.
"I'm fine!" I yelled. "I'll be out in a sec.!"
"You're wet," remarked Alicia.
"Wow! Really?," I replied," I had no clue showers could do that to you!"
"Sarcasm is greatly frowned upon in this country," my friend commented.
"I believe the word toi are looking for is cannibalism," I answered. (Note to readers: Don't freak out on me.. It's a quote from Charlie and the chocolat Factory...".. which is called cannibalism, and that my dear children is frowned upon in many countries.")
"Fine," sighed Alicia, giving in, " What do ya wanna do? We can play Wii ou Ripstick ou Tandem (this is a two person bike) ou climb a arbre ou watch TV ou sing.."
"Let's Ripstick around the neighborhood."
We went to the garage and grabbed the Ripsticks and left out the side door. As we started down the colline I asked Alicia what she wanted to talk about. "I got nothing," she replied.
"Okay then. Umm.. Yeah I kinda have something to talk about... Sooo.. " I a dit and I told her my story. When I finished, all Alicia did was stare at me with her mouth wide open. "HE WANTS TO MEET toi AT YOUR HOUSE TONIGHT!! HOW DOES HE KNOW WHERE toi LIVE?!?!?" she yelled.
"I don't know. I was wondering the same thing but at least since you're here it will be a little safer when I meet him because toi can watch from the window," I replied.
"Fine," sighed Alicia, "Have it your way but I think toi should call the police. Don't blame me if you're kidnapped and never seen again."
"Thanks for the reassuring words. And if he wanted to kidnap me he would have done it on the trail."
"What do toi think he wants?'
"I really wish I knew..."
Mileys P.O.V
i started balling in tears seeing the bullet i carefully took it out. i checked his cœur, coeur beat. nothing i yellled for everybody to come. i unbuckled his chemise and saw another gunshot in his chest. i fall to the ground shaking crying in tears everybody comes runnig down almost falling. they see the gunshot and fall down crying to. we all call the police and they investigate everything. "it cant end like this it cant" i say crying miley holding me. "why?" asks miley. "cus im im pregnant i wanted to tell him but he died when i was" i say ballng again. everybody turns in shock. i cry holding my tummy i cry plus whne they pick harrys body up. i start hypervenilatng almost not breathing. everybody is hugging me tightly.
_________________2 years later______________
i was playing with darcy at the park. we were okay like we were with miley and the lads they all piched in every way they could.
i started balling in tears seeing the bullet i carefully took it out. i checked his cœur, coeur beat. nothing i yellled for everybody to come. i unbuckled his chemise and saw another gunshot in his chest. i fall to the ground shaking crying in tears everybody comes runnig down almost falling. they see the gunshot and fall down crying to. we all call the police and they investigate everything. "it cant end like this it cant" i say crying miley holding me. "why?" asks miley. "cus im im pregnant i wanted to tell him but he died when i was" i say ballng again. everybody turns in shock. i cry holding my tummy i cry plus whne they pick harrys body up. i start hypervenilatng almost not breathing. everybody is hugging me tightly.
_________________2 years later______________
i was playing with darcy at the park. we were okay like we were with miley and the lads they all piched in every way they could.
hi...frnds im gonna write a new fanfic from tomorrow onwards named as "Sooooo cute..."
I want toi all to sugesst names for the characters of my fanfic.....
the names should start from the letters
1."L"
2."H"
3."N"
4."Z"
and the ride is gonna start from tmrw...enjoy
and it would be only for a week.... and later i might write one article per week...
i'm now currently busy with my exam which is to be held tmrw so could anyone send me an image for my article? plz....u can send the image to this mail id:
nivi20997@gmail.com
Thanks for ur kind help :D
I want toi all to sugesst names for the characters of my fanfic.....
the names should start from the letters
1."L"
2."H"
3."N"
4."Z"
and the ride is gonna start from tmrw...enjoy
and it would be only for a week.... and later i might write one article per week...
i'm now currently busy with my exam which is to be held tmrw so could anyone send me an image for my article? plz....u can send the image to this mail id:
nivi20997@gmail.com
Thanks for ur kind help :D
Maddision's P.O.V
I woke up with Niall hugging me tightly. I quietlygot away and left for some breakfast. When I left the hotel I sighed and went out. "don't get Lost don't get lost" the thoughts repeted in my head. It was good at first the wind blowing at the perfect speed. I was walking when like 40 fans surrounded me. I signed like 20 papers took like 70 pictures. But salut it was pretty fun. I left the cafe and headed back when paparazzi showed up I ran in and heard to the flat. Great I thought in my head. When I went inside Miley and Harry were watching t.v. "did toi get surrounded par fans" a dit Harry. "yeah why"I a dit out of breath. "cause toi are a mess no offense". a dit Louis waking up. I hopped in the douche chant loudly.
Nialls P.O.V
I woke up and heard madision singing. I gestured the boys and madision to come. Wow she sang beautifully we were listening when the water stopped we ran down stairs and were in the living room.
I woke up with Niall hugging me tightly. I quietlygot away and left for some breakfast. When I left the hotel I sighed and went out. "don't get Lost don't get lost" the thoughts repeted in my head. It was good at first the wind blowing at the perfect speed. I was walking when like 40 fans surrounded me. I signed like 20 papers took like 70 pictures. But salut it was pretty fun. I left the cafe and headed back when paparazzi showed up I ran in and heard to the flat. Great I thought in my head. When I went inside Miley and Harry were watching t.v. "did toi get surrounded par fans" a dit Harry. "yeah why"I a dit out of breath. "cause toi are a mess no offense". a dit Louis waking up. I hopped in the douche chant loudly.
Nialls P.O.V
I woke up and heard madision singing. I gestured the boys and madision to come. Wow she sang beautifully we were listening when the water stopped we ran down stairs and were in the living room.
Shapires P.O.V
I was being rushed to the hospital with Louis driving.. Eleanor and Danniell were calming down with breathing techniecs. Harry was panicking Niall was eating and cracking jokes. Liam was soothing my back. Louis was driving and making me laugh. "AHHHHH HURRY OH MY GOD IT HURTS" I say crying it feels like somebody is slamming you're stomache with a ax. We finally arrived at the hospital they rushed me in with Harry suivant to me during the delivery. "alright 1.2.3 PUSH" I push.
_________________3 hours later________________________
I gave birth to baby Darcy Ann styles. Harry was crying so was I. She had curly hair. Dimples. Tan. Blue green eyes.
I was being rushed to the hospital with Louis driving.. Eleanor and Danniell were calming down with breathing techniecs. Harry was panicking Niall was eating and cracking jokes. Liam was soothing my back. Louis was driving and making me laugh. "AHHHHH HURRY OH MY GOD IT HURTS" I say crying it feels like somebody is slamming you're stomache with a ax. We finally arrived at the hospital they rushed me in with Harry suivant to me during the delivery. "alright 1.2.3 PUSH" I push.
_________________3 hours later________________________
I gave birth to baby Darcy Ann styles. Harry was crying so was I. She had curly hair. Dimples. Tan. Blue green eyes.