My Little Poney Article: A l’amour Story: Part 4

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posted by applejackrocks1

When cidre fort, applejack awoke, she saw Nopony in sight. She sneezed. Then, she realized that she was tied up, sitting down.

Applejack: Granny Smith was right...I should've stayed home..*tear rolls*

The two ponies suddenly popped out of some coral. They surrounded once more, Applejack. One of them had a knife, and the other had an axe.

Applejack: Please, Stop! Why are toi doing this to me?!
MP2: Because your an earth pony!
MP3: And you'll call your pack to kill all the Merponies!
MP2: So we'll kill toi first!
Applejack: *cries* BRAWNY! H-HELP!
MP2: He'll never hear you, so SHUT UP!
MP3: Ready to die, Sugarlame?
Applejack: The name is...A-Applejack..and yes...
MP2: Whatever...*cuts a piece of AJ's forehead with Axe*
Applejack: *holds back the tears* Brawny...Help...
MP3: toi need a haircut AJ! *cuts AJ's hair till it's short and horrible*
Applejack:....Stop, please..
MP2: *stabs AJ's hoove*
Applejack: AHHHHHHHH!!!! *closes eyes*

??????: STOP!!!! NOW!!!!! *swims to AJ*
MP3: BRAWNY?!? Get out! We're trying to save our kind!
Brawny: NO! I won't let toi kill her!
Applejack: *whispers weakly to Brawny* s-save me....
Brawny: ALL OF YOU! OUT!
MP1: Im sorry Brawny, but if toi don't let her go, we'll kill toi too.
Brawny: Try me.
MP2: FINE! *throws couteau to Brawny*
Brawny: *grabs AJ and dodges*
MP2: RATS!
MP3: Don't worry, I got this! *swims in front of Brawny*
Brawny: >:(
MP3: Put her down. I demand you.
Brawny: *rolls eyes*
MP3: Very well. *hypnotizes Brawny with horn* How about now?
Brawny: *eyes turn red* Yes..*lets AJ falls to ground*
Applejack: *opens eyes weakly* (struggles with rope, then, the rope slips off her)
MP1: NOW CATCH HER AND KILL HER!
Brawny: *nods*
Applejack: *coughs* No...*swims up suivant to Brawny* Brawny, snap out of it!
Brawny: *punches AJ*
MP3: ATTACK!!!

(MP1, MP2, MP3, and Brawny starts to chase AJ)

To be continued....

tailsfan111 and NocturnalMirage like this

Seanthehedgehog A work of art. I like it

NocturnalMirage Okay, I've always been honest with everyone here. Two things. One: What the hay? You've managed to surprise me again with the extremely hostile merponies. But you gave them a motive which is commandable and I truly like it! Two: this is sort of a minor thing about the underwater physics of projectile weapons, like throwing a knife. :) Anyways I still love this story arch and moving on to the next part immediately!

applejackrocks1 (: Haha, thanks~

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Middle School part 19

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The suivant morning, I left a note for Mom saying that I had to go to school extra early to work on a project, which was basically true.

Leo: You're not going to regret this. The way I see it, the whole point of Operation R.A.F.E is to break rules.
Rafe: Alright. *looks at wall* Before, I just saw a brick wall. Now, I see a giant canvas. *Grabs marker*
Leo: *Grabs flashlight*
Rafe: *grabs sketches*
Leo: toi don't need those anymore. Just get drawing.
Rafe: *Draws on wall*

It was slow moving at first, but eventually, everything started moving pretty quickly.

Leo: That's it, keep up the good work....