My car

    We set the three caribou down where everyone was hanging out, as usual. As the loups started noticing, they came over to eat and I brought one caribou up to the den. Mom, Dad, and Liz were already waiting. "So I see your first hunt came out successful?" my dad asked. "Yeah. We caught three, so everyone's outside eating the other two," I boasted. "Wow, toi did pretty well. Good job, Cal," Liz said. I beamed.
    When I was finished, I went to go hang out with Amy, Keira, and Sam. We were gonna go hang out par the river and decide what we were gonna do with our hair at the Moonlight...

This is my story…………..
*Story starts*
NOTE:Slazes is my friend but this is not his actual name its his Minecraft nom d’utilisateur and i didn’t want to expose his name
P.S:I Will now write longer for chapters say 4 Pages of writing
PPS:I Will not reveal my actual name its too embarrassing
“School school school I hate it”I say walking towards my school
I Continue walking but I felt odd like something was watching me
I Look around and see nothing so I get to the back school gate and I feel a Burning pain in my left calf
“AGHHHHHH”I Scream in pain as I see a Rabid loup biting my calf
Someone Kills...

Alternate Ending

I originally had a completely different ending planned and scripted out for The Final War. Originally, the story was only supposed to have twenty-four ou twenty-five chapters, with everything ending during the final battle of Jasper Park.

I originally planned for Humphrey to have this plan to let Viggo take someone hostage and meet him up at the cliff where he could then knock him off, and if necessary, bring Viggo down with him. The backup plan with Gerald and the ours was if Viggo didn’t fall and grabbed onto a arbre branch, then the ours would knock the trees over to kill...