Eh, it's okay..Sorry it's so short.

I twirled the rose between thumb and index finger, and looked up letting the winds breeze through my shaggy black hair. I heard a flutter of wings behind me and gripped my hands onto the rail to ease the nervousness inside me. I kept one hand on the rail and swiveled around to face Devin, she looked at me with her blue eyes, as they stood out from the surrounding darkness on haut, retour au début of the Eiffel Tower in Paris. I hid the rose behind my back as Devin looked at me curiously, "Whatcha got there?" she said, tilting her head up attempting to see around me. "Nothing,...

She waited eagerly for the snow to stop. The snow was the only thing keeping her from going out and she wasn’t one to wait patiently.
“Do toi have everything?” A strong male voice asked from behind her.
She turned around, the bunny ears sewn into the capuche, hotte of her manteau moving.
“Yep! I got my piggy bank!”
She picked up the porcelaine pig and gave it a shake, smiling broadly when it jingled.
“Good. Look’s like the snow finally stopped. Let’s go.”
The two walked out into the clouded sky, their footprints leaving a trail for them to follow home. It didn’t take long for the girl to get...

LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Terror
Nickname: Ter
Reason ou meaning of name: Terror means fear
Eye Color: Piercing blue
Hair Style/Color: Platinum blonde
Height: 5’12
Clothing Style: Whatever’s comfortable
Best Physical Feature: I don’t know ( His eyes)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: That’d be telling
Your Guilty Pleasure: Sleep
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: People
Your Ambition for the Future: Living?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I slept?
What toi Think About the Most: Nothing
What toi Think About Before Bed: Must be tired
You Think Your Best Quality Is: Nothing

LAYER FOUR:...

I decided that I needed a break from the intensity of Uncertain Death.. so I wrote a bit of fluff <3 I'll have plus up after I write a bit plus chapters

Fang awoke to sound of a child crying, turning to meet eyes with his wife. "I just fed him and changed him.." She sighed and Fang nodded, slowly sitting up. "I got him, go back to sleep." He smiled and leaned down to Kiss her head before sliding out of bed. He stepped onto the cold hardwood floor and pulled on his shirt, sighing out as he left the room. Within a few secondes Fang was in the newborns room, walking over to the lit de bébé and grabbing...

Name:Devin Grayson
Alias: Arch Angel
Powers: Flight/wings, “Divine power”
Occupation: Hero
Weakness/Limits: Demon chants/weapons, high demon authority
History: Devin is the unborn child of John and Mary Grayson. As such, she entered heaven as a cherubim, a small baby-like Angel in training. As a cherubim, Devin was taken from her sanctuary while she was out delivering a “divine message” (don't judge me!). She was taken par a very powerful demon named Teague. Unlike most demons, he had very strong magic that kept her hidden from those looking for her for several years. Due to their natures,...

Just a little mini-series. This first part is based on the return. Read and you'll understand. ((Assuming he doesn't die)) Ignore her. Becca has no clue what she's talking about.


He knocked softly on her door, cœur, coeur beating quickly. It had been a little over an heure since he and his partner had returned to the base. She hadn't come out during that time, and he really wanted to see her. But he had forced himself to politely answer questions and talk to those that greeted the two when they had returned. Now he had finally managed to slip away and anticipated her reaction. He knocked a little louder...

She could feel it creeping up her ankle and legs. It was hardening, making it impossible for her to move. A laugh sounded as it went higher.
“Sorry Devin but things must be done. toi must be taken out of the picture.”
“What did I do, Amber?!”
“You betrayed me! toi left Sensai, toi a volé, étole BACK your Angel's light, and toi risked everything for one human! That betrayal will never be forgiven!”
“Amber...I'm sorry. I never meant to hurt toi but I had to save him! He was my brother!”
“You think apologizing will help?! No! It's time toi payed the price!”
“What do toi plan to do when...

Updated 6/3/14
I'm bored, so I thought I'd share with toi a few websites online that toi can design your characters! There are tons of websites out there, these are just a few.
link
This website is par far the best superhero generator I've found. Basically toi use it to make your character in costume. They have endless options of costume parts for both male and female characters, and they even allow toi to déplacer parts around, resize them, and color them. toi can save the character to the game, and then load it later, but if toi want to save an image to the computer, toi have to take a screenshot....

Name: Roxanne "Roxy" Conners
Age: 37 (age when she died)
Status: deceased
Relations: husband- Riley Conners (deceased), son- Daemian Weston (deceased), son- Declan Conners, daughter- Aryess Weston
Physical Appearance: fair hair, sky-blue eyes, 5'8", slim build- slight muscle
Personality: stubborn, kind, strong willed
Titles: Mistress of Revenge, Angel
History: Was born and raised in Venice, Italy as Roxanne Weston. Her parents tried to protect their only child from their family's secret: each generation of their ancestors had sent their lineage to the temple of the League of Shadows in hopes that...

Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. par no means am I forcing toi to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless...