a hunt to remenber
today, the sun was shing bright,so today were staying accueil to hunt.it was just a normal day.at least thats what i thought.just as i was just about to pounce on a mountain lion,i heard a screech of pain and terror."edward!"i called."what!whats wrong!"he shouted"did toi hear that,someone's screaming."his expresion changed from concern to concentration."edward,edward"i said"shhh,im concentrating."on what?"i hear it now,"he a dit "im going to check it out."what!why does edward get to check every thing out?!"no!i'll do it."i blurted."o.k if toi say so."i started running to the sound.i was getting closer. "ahhhhh!"the screams were getting louder.then, i saw him.a gorgeos boy being maled par a ours he looked exactly like henry.even grimicing in pain."ahhhhhh!"omg!i have to do something!before i knew it i was stampeding towards the vicios ours that was killing the boy i've already fallen for.finally the ours was gone.i scared it.there lying on the ground was this beutiful boy.bleeding.dying.then suddenly a wave of desire to drink his blood came over me.i needed to change him.but,i couldn't.i rememberd how thirsty i was.carlisle needs to do it.so i scooped him up and ran to carlisle.his eyes were golden.good,he's not hungry.i handed him emmet.wich he told me while we were running.then i heard another scream.emmet.then i noticed his neck,wrist's.and ankles were already slit.now, he was burning.he was so still i thought he was dead.then he twiched.he wasn't dead.i stayed with him the whole time then he woke up.beutiful.emmet.my teddy bear!then we had a big wedding and were now,happy with our new lives.
today, the sun was shing bright,so today were staying accueil to hunt.it was just a normal day.at least thats what i thought.just as i was just about to pounce on a mountain lion,i heard a screech of pain and terror."edward!"i called."what!whats wrong!"he shouted"did toi hear that,someone's screaming."his expresion changed from concern to concentration."edward,edward"i said"shhh,im concentrating."on what?"i hear it now,"he a dit "im going to check it out."what!why does edward get to check every thing out?!"no!i'll do it."i blurted."o.k if toi say so."i started running to the sound.i was getting closer. "ahhhhh!"the screams were getting louder.then, i saw him.a gorgeos boy being maled par a ours he looked exactly like henry.even grimicing in pain."ahhhhhh!"omg!i have to do something!before i knew it i was stampeding towards the vicios ours that was killing the boy i've already fallen for.finally the ours was gone.i scared it.there lying on the ground was this beutiful boy.bleeding.dying.then suddenly a wave of desire to drink his blood came over me.i needed to change him.but,i couldn't.i rememberd how thirsty i was.carlisle needs to do it.so i scooped him up and ran to carlisle.his eyes were golden.good,he's not hungry.i handed him emmet.wich he told me while we were running.then i heard another scream.emmet.then i noticed his neck,wrist's.and ankles were already slit.now, he was burning.he was so still i thought he was dead.then he twiched.he wasn't dead.i stayed with him the whole time then he woke up.beutiful.emmet.my teddy bear!then we had a big wedding and were now,happy with our new lives.
Let me start off par saying that I think Dakota Fanning is a fabulous actress. That being a dit here are my reason why I don't think she would make the best Jane. Their are a bunch a little problems and one big problem with her playing Jane. The big problem for me is her age. Dakota Fanning was born on Febuary 23 1994. That would put her at 15 years old when she starts filming in March. Thats only 4 years younger the Kristen(Bella) who was born in 1990 and only 2 years younger the Taylor(jacob) who was born in 1992. Jane is ONLY surpost be 12-13 years old and NO WHERE near Bella's age.