I wrote some songs! please tell me what toi think! there are 4!

True Friends
Boys may come and go.
But best Friends always show,
they l’amour you!
Boys may leave your side.
But best Friends are forever.

Chorus:
True friends.
Are there till the end.
True friends.
Always make toi smile.
Tell me you'll be my true friend.
Forever.
Tell me you'll always be there for me.

Best Friends there.
When toi need a shoulder to cry on.
They aren't pretend.
I know i'll always have one.

(chorus)

I have a true friend.
And she has me.
I know she'll be there.
When im on my knees,
and crying.
Everyone knows,
that shes the best.
I'll never forget.
that shes my bff.

(instrumental)

(chorus)


Burn
What?
What am i supposed to do?
When you're the one that did it?
I know we used to be best friends.
All of us.
But what happened between us?
A couple stupid sentences.
And this is what happens.

Chorus:
But your gonna be the one to fight.
Cause im not staying here all night.
Discussing our friendship.
And how its over.
Does this even matter to you?
Cause im not the one who a dit who cares.
I am the one who tried to blow out.
All the fires that toi just burned with.
Cause i am not the one who a dit whatever.
Oh, toi think your so clever?
Huh?

Well, lets not fight forever.
I think its done.
But thats exactly what toi a dit before.
But now your changing around all my words.
I cant believe toi even had the nerve to do that.
Well, i guess toi did.

(chorus)

WHY?
Why do i try so hard to forgive you?
And why?
Why do i always get stabbed in the back par my best friends?
This is exactly how it ends!

(chorusx2)

Three words(duet)
Girl: I can see it in your eyes.
Something's wrong.
There's no disguise.
Is there something on your mind?
Let it out.
toi dont have to tell me twice.
toi were up all last night.
What were toi thinking about?
Tell me. Trust me.

Both: Chorus
Cause those three words.
Are not enough.
To montrer our love.
I l’amour you. I miss you. I want you. I need you.

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Sutelc22 said:
great job.i appreciate songwriting because i write songs myself.
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thanks for the support.
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I l’amour IT
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Kibahina96 said:
The song is really sweet but sounds plus like a poem.
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pikakel19 said:
I think the songs are great i just wish i could hear it

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