hello people

Remember when i asked for help with lyrics? well i came up with a song and i want your opinion on it please!
Ready? here it is:

My bloods pouring to the ground
And toi dont even care.
I look at toi pleading
And toi just walk away.
toi ripped out my cœur, coeur and soul
burned them to ash.
Now toi say your sorry?
toi say toi want me back?

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
toi were the best thing in my life
Then toi turned and walked away
toi a dit toi loved me,
And still toi walked away

toi made me hate my life
Made me hate myself.
Youve driven me to all the things
I swore i wouldnt touch.
Im not some punching bag
For toi to pound.
Im my own person
Not just someone in the crowd.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
toi were the best thing in my life
Then toi turned and walked away
toi a dit toi loved me,
And still toi walked away

Im not afraid ou toi anymore.
Im gonna make my stand
Stick up for myself.
Im gonna make my stand
toi cant hurt me anymore.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
toi were the best thing in my life
Then toi turned and walked away
toi a dit toi loved me,
And still toi walked away

toi a dit toi loved me,
And still toi walked away