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I Know it Sucks Dx but What Do toi Think?

Of these lyrics I wrote, obviously they aren't done yet but I just want to know if it's still good. I think it sucks because I cannot write lyrics for my life.

"It's time to face the destiny. just stand in time, release the flames. Every jour toi just see the sights,

Chorus

Stand tall, stand now and see what we're fighting for. Die now, die trying. We all just live in big shame, incomplete history. Listen to those who care."

16falloutboy posted il y a plus d’un an

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BlondLionEzel said:

Nice :)

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THank toi :)

16falloutboy posted il y a plus d’un an

sieluvzsoul said:

Very good

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thanks! :)

16falloutboy posted il y a plus d’un an

pokemonfan909 said:

Its nice. Why do toi think it sucks?

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Because I never wrote a song before and I know I suck at it

16falloutboy posted il y a plus d’un an

toi don't....

pokemonfan909 posted il y a plus d’un an

misscrazel said:

It's great, if toi want any tips on songwriting message me. ^-^

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Alright will do ^^

16falloutboy posted il y a plus d’un an

True-Finn-Fan said:

i can dig it... toi know what's so weird? i wrote a song earlier today for a completely different reason and was just thinking "somebodies gonna post something and montrer me up" XD

coincidences.

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