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Do toi Think She is Good Now?

My Oc Dani was used to be called a Mary Sure for being most perfect, most beautiful, most talented, had a super tragic past, has like E cups x3 always wore slutty clothes x3 but recently I changed her up quite a bit. Now she has C cups, she has her flaws, she isn't the most beautiful but she is still attractive c: to some people x3 not all guys fall for her, she's plus of a tomboy! and when she was a Mary Sue she was also a 'tomboy' not really xD didn't seem like it x3 Do toi think she's better now? x3 Mary Sue Dani is on the left, normal Dani is on the right? x3

16falloutboy posted il y a plus d’un an

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BlondLionEzel said:

Yes.

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egyptprincess7 said:

Kinda. I don't understand though why having E cups though is a mary sue but okay. What flaws though because if toi have the standard cutesy type flaws well then toi didn't do much to her. toi do need to change the super tragic past part. She still has mary-sue qualities.

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Yeah I do like E-Cup breasts

BlondLionEzel posted il y a plus d’un an

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Doesn't have one now what? Explain.

egyptprincess7 posted il y a plus d’un an

Oh she doesn't have a tragic past anymore

16falloutboy posted il y a plus d’un an

sieluvzsoul said:

Sure

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x-Yumi-x3 said:

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misscindyspice said:

Well, she is much better now (not that she was bad before), but I honestly find being a stereotypical "tomboy" character is almost as bad as being a stereotypical girly-girl character, as the whole "Tomboy bad-ass chick who thinks that all girly crap is horrible and needs to die", is pretty overused. If toi don't make the tomboyishness too overblown, I feel that Dani could be a very good character. :)

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